Fairy Tail Word Magic

After reading dozens of chapters, it gives me a feeling of mediocrity. You said that the power is okay, but I feel that the fire and ice are too mediocre. Originally, the dragon slayer has restrained attributes. Even if the author writes that the strength is high, it is still mediocre.

Good guy, the protagonist is a member of the Knights of the Star Cross.

It didn't write the feeling of home like Fairy Tail

The author is still young. In my opinion, word magic is the most powerful magic at the rule level. It is used to shoot fire, ice and so on. It is simply weak. Even if you send out a sword like fire, there is no need to understand the words. For living creatures, you only need two word magic to kill everyone. One is the word: Egg Pain, and the second is the word: Auntie's Bleeding.

For word magic, you can refer to the Quincy's holy words in Bleach.

You can add text from mythology, such as runes

Isn't it possible that the heroine is actually Mira again? Come on, ten Fairy Tail books and seven Mira books are almost the same as taking a bus. I can't accept it if I'm a mysophobic person.

I thought I had read a good book, but the more I read halfway through, the more strange it became. They were both getting along with Mira, and Lisanna deliberately made it unclear. It was like a bloody drama. I was really speechless.

Looking forward to the dual heroines of Mira and Erza

I suddenly thought about whether these 26 letters could be transformed after they were all lit up. For example, the color of the letters turned into gold letters, and then B burned into B Badr. Adding a superior gold letter would make it feel stronger. And the word blaze means flame. Baldr (Badr), as the god of light in Norse mythology, instantly rose up, changing from flame to light.

To be honest, I am already so excited about a Fairy Tail fanfic that I don't dare to say anything more. However, in almost every Fairy Tail book I've read, the fandom is all about joining the Fairy Tail guild. I sometimes wonder whether it would be more interesting to join other guilds or create my own guild instead of joining a union. But I was still young at the time, and I later discovered that there were too few Fairy Tail fans, let alone novels like the one I mentioned. The author please continue to work hard!

I want to say something to the author, can you not have a single female protagonist? If you want to write Mira, can you add Erza?

I've looked at a few of them but haven't read them yet, so here's my personal opinion. First, it is too dull, the overall image is very flat, and the emotional fluctuations of the protagonist are not seen. The same is true of the text. The descriptive words have no power and the sense of rhythm is also very poor. For example, when I watched Doupo for the first time, I felt a burning feeling when I saw Mo Qijunqiong, that is, the rhythm is very good. In just a few chapters, the readers have an impression of the protagonist and an initial tone for the entire book. Of course, there are also well-written daily novels, such as Five Ton Life Game, which uses dialogue, complaints, and actions to continuously enrich the protagonist's image in one chapter. This kind of novel will be very light at the beginning, but you need to set a small hook to have the feeling to continue reading. Hope you continue to work hard. Second, my personal opinion is that the more complex the abilities and settings are, the better. One Punch Man, Dragon Ball, Fairy Tail, and Death are all about cultivating an ability to the extreme, or else it is the blessing of anger. No matter how complex the ability of the protagonist in the novel is, it can become a system and become the final move in the end, unless there is some wits. Even if he is as smart as JoJo, he still has a lot of trouble with one ability. The protagonist has too many abilities, 26 letters and 26 abilities. If it lights up after lighting up, and then fights by forming words, then there is still hope. The question is, after lighting up, can it still rise to a star? Wouldn't it be better to just use all your strength? Who can block the protagonist's punch when he's as bald as a guy? Then the abilities of other letters are useless? Moreover, manpower is sometimes scarce, and this will never end in a lifetime. We cannot put the abilities of the protagonist of the invincible stream into the upgrade stream. Doesn't comprehensiveness equal mediocrity? Personal opinions, please do not comment and communicate peacefully.

When Ghost started fighting, Iron Dragon was only 50-50 equal to Natsu who was not in explosive state. How could he be so strong? Not to mention that it was still two years before the plot started. At this time, Iron Dragon was not the enemy of Mira at all.

Let me state in advance that I invested 500 points. I hope the author will update as soon as possible and not be ungrateful (｢･ω･)｢Hey (I don't mean to be sarcastic, I just want the author to add more updates. Brothers and sisters, please don't mess with me ≥≤)

The creativity, ideas, and battles are well written, but the only thing I can't stand is that Mira is too brainless, she only knows how to be reckless, and some places feel too deliberate. Don't ask me where it is too deliberate. Some places feel deliberate when you read it. I can't point it out even if I point it out. I don't want to read it again and find it out.

Oh my god, someone actually writes Fairy Tail. Tears.

After reading more than 70 chapters, I feel that this group of people is not a family in a guild. The description of the fighting scenes in the guild's internal competition gives people the feeling of enemies fighting each other. They hit each other in the face and lower abdomen until they vomited blood. I wonder if there will be any improvement later.

I think the text magic you have set up by the author is quite interesting. It is good as it is now. The magic is diverse but not invincible and can be developed slowly. I suggest the author read the light novel Golden Magician. The protagonist in the text magic also uses it. You can refer to the role of the protagonist's text magic. For example, several letters can be combined to activate a large magic.

A rare Fairy Tail fic, but unfortunately I discovered it a bit late and didn't get the first order. I'm going to digress here. I saw Zhang said that many people don't support the sisters. I personally don't understand this. If I didn't accept them all, why would I give Lisanna away? ? ? I believe that most book lovers can't bear to send girls as gifts

Some Fairy Tail fans are almost demonized. Watching the anime shows their faith. Starting from writing a novel and not joining the Fairy Tail guild and being the enemy of the protagonist group, they were directly reported and banned from the book. This is extremely extreme. Why are there so few Fairy Tail fans? It's not that Fairy Tail is not popular enough, but that they dare not write and can't write. Those fans demand that they must join Fairy Tail (the power is established), and they must shout to the members of the Fairy Tail guild that they must be like Natsu for the sake of companions (the character is established), otherwise they will report you. In this way, the author has less room to play. Joining Fairy Tail means that more than 80% of the plot is restored to the text version of Fairy Tail, but a protagonist is added to the original plot, and the enemy should be defeated. The enemies are still the same, and the order of appearance of the enemies is still the order of appearance in the original novel. It's just a character appearing out of thin air, with a few Bs. It's just a fan novel. The character must be established like Natsu, which means that the protagonist is silly and sweet, just like Luffy Natsu. Movies and TV shows are different from novels. Watching movies and TV shows, Luffy Natsu feels like this is very good, but if it is a text novel, he is still the protagonist, and the sense of substitution is very poor. Use the above two points to ask the author to write. The first point is to restore more than 80%. The audience will know the subsequent plot after watching one paragraph, which seriously lacks freshness. The second point is that like the protagonist of the original work, who is as single-minded and brainless as he knows how to roar, it will naturally drive away a large number of viewers. Writing will not bring any benefits at all. Unless the author is very powerful, he may not even be able to make ends meet, but there is no way. If you don't write like this, some fans will directly report and block your book. It is a waste of time and no profit if you write it. Then no one will write it. Look at One Piece fans, there are almost no one writing about One Piece. Luffy's naturally silly nature (excluding cherishing his companions), most of them formed their own pirate groups, joined the navy, or revolutionized the army, etc. The authors wrote their own stories to attract the audience based on the background of the pirate world. Due to the reason and understanding of pirate fans, the authors can avoid the two It's a big poisonous point. There is no limit to writing your own story to make it exciting. As a long-running hot-blooded comic, Fairy Tail definitely has a large fan base. There is no doubt that its popularity is not as good as Dead Fire, but it is not far behind. But why are there so few fan fiction works? This is the key reason

At the starting point, other Fairy Tail fans are shit, you are the only one who can watch it

I knew it, but if the protagonist can add text to other people to become stronger, he is not far away from entering the palace. This kind of writing is too easy to break.

After a few years, I looked back and found that the author had run away.