In the End of the World, I Bring a Game Panel

The outline and setting are pretty good, and the story is interesting. There are too many narrations, and they are confusing. Many introductions and explanations belong to the narration part, but are described in the main text. As a comment thread said, the overall progress is too tedious and there are too many psychological descriptions. I will read the first dozen chapters carefully, but completely skip the later chapters. Language expression ability and scientific literacy (or rigor) need to be improved. For example, "produced from a novel" can be expressed as the source of the item; the number of times the electromagnetic gun battery has been used can be given to an energy storage unit, or the number of times the highest power has been used. I won't say much else. It really made me sick with embarrassment and made me want to write a novel myself I hope the author will read more science fiction magazines and learn to write better and better.

I almost didn't realize that Yuan Neng Point is so important. Isn't the first priority to do Yuan Neng Point? What is it like to always want to build a doomsday fortress? It can't bring you any substantial improvement. It's putting the cart before the horse. With Yuaneng, isn't it possible to build a fortress in a matter of minutes? The author's design here and there is too big. You can do it bit by bit, and the golden fingers can also be upgraded bit by bit. There is no contradiction. Pay attention first. Come on.

Seriously, author, those messy technologies you have are of no use at all. What use do they have in front of the evolvers? According to the author's way of writing the attribute points, an evolution value of 0.6 Is equal to 300 kilograms of power, 0.1 Is equal to 50 kilograms, and the zero-level evolver can increase it up to 9.9, Which is close to 5,000 kilograms of power. What kind of technology do you use that energy for? Are you sure it works? It is only slightly useful in the early stage. As long as you pass level zero and become level one, then at least 10,000 power of a level one evolver is the most basic, right? In this case, what is the use of upgrading your technology? If nothing else, let's just say that in the case of universal evolution, everyone is pursuing becoming stronger, and then you pursue technology. In the comment area, I saw many people talking about potato mines and other random things. Can those things cause harm to the evolvers? It can be said that the power system you wrote has collapsed. I can only feel that you, the author, are forcibly suppressing levels.

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The book is good, but the author's writing style is a bit poor in terms of dialogue, which made me feel embarrassed. Some things are written in such detail that it's easy to find bugs, which makes people feel that there are contradictions. In fact, all these are acceptable. The most important thing is to improve my writing skills. The dialogue is too embarrassing.

It makes people look stupid. . . . The protagonist is reluctant to decompose the fire crystal, and then claims that his energy is insufficient at the critical moment. If you want to suppress the protagonist, you don't have to suppress him like this. I feel like the main character has a low IQ.

Decomposition is the most powerful attack skill in the world. No matter how tough or powerful everything is, won't it be gone once it is decomposed?

Author, you can synthesize a mobile phone, a computer, a computer, and a watch into artificial intelligence. The DJI drone has ten air guns, ten engines and ten computers synthesized into a small reconnaissance and attack drone. The RV, ten computers, ten drones and ten water guns are combined into a multifunctional land and air combat vehicle. This vehicle is equipped with 5 high-pressure water cannons. It turns into an ice gun the moment it is fired. Pistol, refrigeration furniture, battery and mobile phone are combined into a multifunctional freezing pistol, and the energy source is the battery. Comes with infrared sensor radar, etc. Speaker + mobile phone, ten speakers and ten batteries are combined into a sonic multi-functional recyclable bomb. This is the introduction first. Some readers have new ideas. Please mark them below to see whose idea is better.

In fact, the golden finger is directly restricted at the beginning, and the restrictions are slowly upgraded, or the restrictions are slowly explored. For example: when decomposing an item, it directly displays whether the decomposition level is exceeded and whether the ability is upgraded, instead of suddenly restricting the change. It is too rigid and a bit confusing.

I found that the author has been working on the shelter in the early stage~ Any level 1 can destroy the shelter, but in the end it has to spend a lot of time and resources to upgrade? Cheats and social changes are much faster than upgrading your shelter.

I can only say that this novel relies too much on foreign objects. If you say that the first few pictures are because you don't know the benefits of evolution, so you get some weapons for self-defense, I can understand this, but you waste energy later and make some messy things there. It is really unnecessary. The attribute is 0.6, And you only have more than 300 kilograms of strength. The amount is equivalent to zero point 1 = 50 kilograms. If you don't use those energy points for fooling around, all of them are used to add points to yourself. When you write about the evolution of the panel, you estimate that you already have more than 3,000 kilograms of strength. If you just push everything, you have to upgrade some messy things, and then build a shelter? ? ? Is it necessary? You know, at this time when everyone is evolving, will any of the messy weapons you build be useful? Maybe I'm really not suitable for this kind of novel about science and technology in the apocalypse. To evolve, you have to engage in technology, and you don't pursue your own strength, but you have to pursue external forces. If you say you can't evolve, you can't break through and pursue external forces to increase your combat power, I can understand. Obviously you can make yourself stronger, but you have to use it in random places. It's like you have 100 yuan, you don't eat, you have to play, and then starve!

I really feel that the cyborgs you wrote as the author are a failure. In this kind of environment, robots and mechanical dogs are not better than cyborgs? Biochemical humans are troublesome to cultivate and cannot be recycled, and low temperatures will also affect the activities of biochemical humans. The difference is with machinery. For machinery, you don't have to use the legs and lower body. You can replace them with tracks. Practicality, safety, production costs and maintenance costs are not better than biochemical humans. Moreover, machinery can be repaired, replaced and recycled. Can biochemical humans be used? Personally, if you think my comment is wrong, just delete it.

I've read a lot of novels, and this one is my favorite. It's worth looking forward to.

At the beginning, just turn the flint into Yuaneng, directly add 3 points to yourself, upgrade the long-range weapon by 1 point, upgrade the helmet by 1 point, and then you can explore or kill Yuaneng beast. However, after dozens of chapters, it is still at level 0.6. If you don't develop in the early stage, you have to wait until the later stage. That is to say, you were lucky enough to meet the official. If you come to a private team to see it, I don't think the protagonist can carry a gun.

Upgrading technology to cultivate immortality is really fancy. Ordinary people before the apocalypse, please note that they are "ordinary people". An ordinary person will basically develop like this when the apocalypse comes. They will find familiar plug-ins and upgrade their homes to improve their comfort, and then upgrade. If they have the ability, they will find women. If nothing else, an ordinary person before the apocalypse will not find a bunch of women if they have the ability? Compared with today's ordinary society, there are only rich people who don't have a lot of women. This is just money. Then there is the grabbing of territory, and using the territory to grab more resources. Only then will we gradually contact the officials and take advantage of them. What's official? The word "official" has two syllables, and the world is as black as crows.

It feels like I haven't encountered an apocalyptic novel that I like so much in a long time. Please give it a thumbs up from the author.

Who wants to be an operations officer? Those who have time to read book reviews and chapter reviews and delete those who attack people are the four positions.

Are you talking about the end of the world or StarCraft?

To be honest, the author actually added a supporting character to be reborn, which feels very strange.

It feels like just strengthening yourself is enough, there is no need to strengthen with technology.

The setting is okay, and the general direction is good, but there are some inner scenes, dialogue scenes, and reflections, which are too embarrassing to watch.

Anti-gravity technology seems to require a unified theory, right?

Actually I like these better

I helped a friend find an apocalyptic book. The male protagonist is reborn. After killing the zombies in it, the crystals on the back of the head can be taken out and eaten, and then they evolve and upgrade. It should be a work from a few years ago. If there are any readers who know about it, please tell me 😁

Looked at the table of contents. It is expected to enter the starry sky within 200 chapters. Keep it first. Full subscription support

I love novels with this theme the most. The author is Chong Chong Chong.

😁Why don't you have the sweating soybean expression? In the early stage, the fortress can be strengthened casually. The key is to support the war with war. The result is really awesome.

Too little, update soon

It's two o'clock, there's one more chapter as promised?

Regarding the economy, the author can refer to the method of bartering, or energy as the basis, otherwise what are you trading? What use do you want to use the technological products of primitive people? Population is also a resource.