Original God's Demonic Dragon Dulin

Since I entered the trap, except for Gongzi Chizi, I have other up characters.

Is the author considering a single female protagonist, Gan Yu? I have never seen anything like this written before.

A book club group 753785116 has been established and everyone is welcome to join.

Who is the heroine? I personally recommend Brother Kong

Author, please write more concisely. Don't repeat some words several times. It looks too long-winded. I suspect that you are overestimating your word count. Some things can be clearly explained in just a few sentences, but I keep talking about them all the time, and it ends before I even read a chapter. It's all a waste of words.

To be honest, after reading a few Genshin Impact fanfics, this one is considered good! Just don't change it too much. I've seen fan fiction written before and wanted to gain popularity, but the world view has been changed, and the content is wrong. The title of the book is wrong, and it won't be popular no matter how well written it is.

Important things about this book: Note 1: The Snow Mountain Treasure House at the back is reversed, but it cannot be changed for the time being. Because if you want to change it, you need to make a big change, and you need to change seven or eight chapters, so there is nothing you can do now. Note 2: There are many typos in this article, but the general meaning can be understood. Note 3: In Du Lin's original work, there is a dragon with dual attributes of fire and poison. It is written in a book in the Genshin Impact game.

It feels like watching the main plot of the game. It feels like the protagonist has never been integrated into it. It is the kind of peripheral character who is the same whether you are there or not. There is no close friend. The characters know the protagonist but are not familiar with each other and are always on guard against the protagonist. It is this feeling of loneliness that makes people unable to stand it. This is how I feel.

I looked again, and when I saw the dragon fighting at the Wind Dragon Ruins, I became confused again. Why should the protagonist go in first? Aren't you afraid of being killed by the other party? The main forces are obviously Wendy and Sora. As a result, he went in first and was beaten half to death before the other two came in. I can't understand it at all. I don't understand what this operation is at all.

I want Zhongli 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

I thought that after the protagonist turned into a dragon, he started to pretend to be bad. I never expected that he started to crazily write down the word count before even paying for it. It was obvious that it had nothing to do with the protagonist and he still forced it to be written. I saw him playing cards with people from QQ who were not ranked. Well seen it, but not quite there. Mainly because it's so boring. I don't even know what the theme is. Don't tell me that the theme is pessimistic and depressing.

Please ask for the original white of the slime single heroine

This book. . . Really slow to update, this kind of author should be in a dark room, turning into a coding machine without emotion.

The full plot of Diona.

There is too much nonsense. There are 100 words in a battle, 50 words about the protagonist's psychological activities, 30 words about the author's battle explanation, and the remaining 20 words are about the whole process of the protagonist's battle with the enemy. There are so many typos.

I don't know why, but I always have a weird feeling about this book. It looks like it's well written, but it just feels weird when I read it.

Damn it, this book is almost the same as one written by AI.