I! the Wine Sword Immortal, Signed in Shushan for 500 Years

I just read Chapter 15 and I think it's okay, but there are some problems. First of all, the world view of Fairy Sword is very different from the general world of cultivation (someone mentioned this in this chapter), so it is difficult to produce high-quality works of Fairy Sword fan fiction. Don't be afraid of being criticized if there are problems with your logic. You can just come back later. For example, when he saw two demons attacking the Demon Suppression Tower during the time of worshiping the Three Emperors, Xiaobai was still asking how Shushan hadn't been wiped out despite the intensity of the vigilance, but the old bookworm could feel the foreshadowing of an internal conspiracy among the higher-ups in the sect in the future. Furthermore, it was child's play for Youxuan to be strangled to death in the Nascent Soul stage, and his death was not confirmed. I wonder if the author still needs Youxuan to promote the development of the plot of the attack on Shushan, or he really forgot that the Nascent Soul can be reborn. Generally speaking, it is easier to dig a hole than to fill it, especially if a hole dug unintentionally is filled, people will die. Then the higher the status of the person, the more inscrutable it is to write, and don't let the big boss come out to explain to Chu Feng. Ye Binning is both the protagonist's contemporary and the head's daughter. Many secrets and explanations can be revealed to the protagonist through Ye Binning. When Wan Yao Pu led out the clue of Tianyao Sect, he was a little surprised when he saw Elder Jiu's expression changed drastically. One hundred thousand years ago, the Heavenly Demon Sect suppressed the three realms, but the founder of Shu Mountain sealed the Heavenly Demon Emperor, the Heavenly Demon Sect fell apart, and the new king of Shu Mountain succeeded to the throne. It has been passed down to this day, and the inheritance is orderly. Why should we be afraid? The other way around is right. In addition, Elder Jiu has been fighting for the sect for nearly a thousand years. What kind of storm has he not seen? His face changed drastically when he heard three words? Therefore, Elder Jiu's face can be slightly condensed, but it must not change drastically.

Very nice. I like the book written by the author.

How many novels have been ruined by the forced plot of women. If you can't write romance well, write less.

Why are there so many women, and this is a book that cannot be separated from women? Why don't men write much about women but why do they write so much about women? It's a whole lot of poison?

To be honest, it looks good, but the combat power at the back is a bit broken. Shushan is the first sect. There are several monks at the Yuanying stage and only a few elders are at the Yuanying stage. However, every small sect in the back is full of Yuanying. There are as many golden elixirs as dogs. Anyone who comes out is at the Yuanying stage. In addition to being in the God Transformation Stage, Shushan is worse than just any small sect. The author's writing skills have been strengthened😡😡😡

What's going on with this author? If you can't write about immortals, don't write about them. The fight in the Transformation Stage is not as intense as the Legend of Heaven and Dragon Slaying. In the early stage of Yuanying Dzogchen's killing of Yuanying, he just uses Qinggong to dodge behind and behead with a sword. Even the fights between Young and Dangerous are more exciting than this.

As beautiful as a tree is in the forest, the wind will destroy it. The only thing that can be destroyed is a rotten tree. The way to be strong is to face your true heart. What's the point of being secretive? All crises can be destroyed with one punch.

I discovered that those who say they don't want female protagonists read many books with multiple female protagonists. Just to make a cliche, I asked if there are many female leads.

The author can write novels about cultivating immortals as well as martial arts novels, which is really invincible 🤓🤓🤓

When I read this book, I felt like I was back to the stupid me 10 years ago. I enjoyed reading this type of novel at the time, and I still enjoy it now🤮

There are too many bugs and the logic is too poor. The author should write a novel that is almost reasonable. It's so uncomfortable to watch.

It's either a robot or a template. I'm too lazy to spray it.

It's really a daily introduction to poison... The introduction is okay, but it's very poisonous. The writing is so bad that it's like a running account. I read seven or eight chapters of the whole process, including old people, subways, and mobile phone expressions.

Can this be included in the best-seller selection? ? ?

As the head of the seven major sects, there are only a handful of Yuanyings in the entire sect, and the number of Yuanyings under a prince is more than that. Is your setting reasonable? It's an insult to the reader's intelligence.

There are millions of authors who can't stand out if they innovate. They all write to follow the trend. In the future, all novels will follow the same routine. After reading this book, I feel like I really shouldn't read anymore.

Don't say much, I don't want the heroine, everything else is fine

Author, is your logic wrong? The Demon Locking Tower is an important place, and all the big demons are imprisoned in it. How about letting ordinary people and people with extremely low qualifications guard it? Hahahahaha...

To save everyone the trouble, this book can also be called "A Diaosi Cultivating Immortality at the Same Time". It is highly poisonous, so read with caution. 🙂

It's so poorly written that I can't stand it!

A good fairy tale is forced to be written by you as a child's play, which is worse than martial arts. . . .

The author made a huge mess, which made me feel sick.

Except for the protagonist in this book, no one else's IQ is online. The content of the story is in the form of a running account, and there is no desire to read further. Abandoned

The protagonist has a strong sense of separation from his sect. The righteous path is weak and the demons can easily dominate the world in minutes and then waste time.

The demon is dormant and the righteous path has developed into this, so I'm convinced.

Guys, the writing is so bad, it's embarrassing to read.

Gou? Why do I only see waves?

It's refreshing and insipid at times, and it's a pity to throw it away if it's tasteless. I don't know what you're afraid of. You can do 1v1 with people in the Transformation Stage. The highest level in the world is the Transformation Stage. Are you still sick while hiding your identity? Pretend to be a pig and eat the tiger? Is it necessary? It's obvious that you can crush him with force, but you have to hide it, so you have such strong strength in vain. P didn't have more than 40 chapters left, so he returned directly to Novice Village among a group of people who were only at the foundation building stage. Forced to show off.

How many novels are included in this template?

Shouldn't you wait for the green bull demon to quickly pull out the five-color stone, kill him, and then stabilize the formation immediately? There is still so much time to talk about, and I am speechless