Pokemon: Ye You

There is no other request, just one, kill Gou Hao who just captured Suicune with one ball.

I also find it strange how the protagonist wants to kill Banmu. I didn't expect him to starve to death. How did you come up with it, author?

It's good to read. Unlike the previous book which was too big and collapsed in writing, this one has made great progress. The plot is designed to be comfortable and smooth, and the main character has a positive outlook on life. However, there are some typos, misspelled names, and a strange comma after the subject that makes me, an obsessive-compulsive person, a little uncomfortable.

In fact, it's really well written and has a warm feeling.

Why do so many people praise me? It cost me 1 yuan to write this review. I haven't read the paid chapter yet, that is, when the protagonist's mother called him and told him that Lillie was coming, I couldn't stand it anymore. To avoid this, the author described Pikachu. It is said that there are as many as wild dogs on the roadside. When describing it with such insulting words, the protagonist can only say that he came in modern times if he thinks this way. But Ash loves Pokémon very much and it is impossible for him to think the same way. However, when the author describes it, he is describing why Kojiro comes to snatch Pikachu when he is so rich. Aren't there as many as wild dogs on the roadside? This can't be Xiaozhi's idea. The author describes that the protagonist likes Pikachu very much, so how can he describe it as like wild dogs on the roadside? If he really likes him, he wouldn't describe it like this, even in his heart, he won't think so. In this way, the characters written by the author are contradictory. Huan, but at the same time, she despises it in her heart, as if it was added by force. The author has described it this way many times. There are as many wild dogs on the roadside, which proves that she does not like "Pokémon". However, in the pile of praises under the comments, no one said that this description is inappropriate. The interaction between the protagonist and his Pokémon is very stiff.

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Does the author make a living by writing books? I thought that most of the writers at Qidian worked part-time. To be honest, the author's writing was pretty good, and he would be above average in the Pokémon literature. I think it's a pity to see the author encountering difficulties now. Many good and popular works came out all at once. Don't they all need to practice and grow step by step? Maybe you think what I said is sarcastic, but if you give up now, you will be able to control it if you open a new book. Will it definitely bring enough income? How can the author make progress if he doesn't discover his own problems and exploit his strengths and avoid his weaknesses? Come on!

Have you rested? Then adjust your condition before writing again, come on

It's best not to go with Xiaozhi.

I found the reason why the author was in a bad mood. The person scolding the author below is