Pokemon: Ye You

I have only one request: to smash that dog-like guy who just caught Suicune with a single ball.

I also found it strange that the protagonist was going to kill Itagi by starving to death. How did you come up with that, author?

It's a good read. Unlike the previous one, which had too much of a plot twist and was poorly written, this one is a big improvement. The plot is well-designed and flows smoothly, and the protagonist has sound values. However, there are some typos, misspelled names, and odd commas after the subject that bother my OCD.

Actually, it's really well-written; it has a heartwarming feel to it.

Why are so many people praising this? I even spent 1 yuan writing this review. I couldn't stand it before even seeing the paid chapters, specifically when the protagonist's mother called to say Lillie was coming. Just a heads-up, the author describes Pikachu as "as numerous as stray dogs on the street," a derogatory term.

Does the author make a living by writing books? I thought most authors on Qidian were doing it part-time. To be honest, the author writes quite well, probably above average in Pokémon fiction. I feel it's a pity to see the author facing difficulties now. Many good and popular works don't come overnight; don't people normally need to practice and grow step by step?

Have you taken a break? Then let's get ready to write again. Keep going!

It's best not to go with Ash.

I've found out why the author is in a bad mood; the person below who's criticizing the author is it.

I came from Zhihui, but this one is an improvement over Zhihui. The power levels aren't inconsistent, the protagonist doesn't feel invincible, and there's been a lot more growth involved, which is great. Keep it up, I've caught up in the vote!