Hong Kong Movie: Start with a Radar Map

After reading dozens of chapters, it was okay. If the plot didn't include so many women, it would still be very good. It's a failure to keep writing about women, mainly because it's not written well.

It's funny, you only get a salary of 3,000 yuan a month and you still have to endure it. Or a time traveler with a plug-in? Being a private detective is better than this, right?

To be honest, I have only read a few chapters. I don't know what the author thinks. Does the protagonist need to criticize someone when he meets a villain in the plot? He is an adult. If he is unhappy with someone, as long as he has no hatred against you, he will not offend him casually. He can criticize people casually. He is in the system. , It doesn't matter if you don't get used to it at the beginning. When you meet someone, you just have to pay attention to him if you know he is not a good person. Is it necessary to show it? In a modern social background, either you have a lot of money, or you have great power, or you are extraordinary and one person can form an army, otherwise no one is the center

The author wrote these heroines like the plot of a third-rate Korean drama. They are sloppy and bloody. The key is that the author still feels very good about himself. The more he writes, the more fascinated he becomes. Then a gatekeeper can run around and mess around with the plot at any time. After returning, he can continue to be a gatekeeper. What is guarding?

It's already 2021, and you're still writing about licking dogs? Or a masochist?

After reading 300 chapters, I have solved so many major cases, and my position is still a small police chief. Are the top brass of the police force blind? Author, I don't know why you keep suppressing the promotion of the protagonist? All I can say is that you will lose a lot of readers by doing this.

I really look down on Gao Jin. God of Gamblers Yi Gao Jin helps the Japanese fight against Chinese Singaporeans. Long Wu is a Vietnamese who came from the Vietnam battlefield. Long Jiu is a die-hard lackey of the British in the Hong Kong Political Office. None of them are Chinese. I really don't understand how anyone can like these people.

The protagonist is so miserable at this point. He is sent to guard the door, and he can't get any credit. It doesn't matter if he is a bad policeman. If he is reborn, there is nothing he can't do. You can just be a detective in your system.

Today's novels basically follow the same routine. In the early stage, they strive to maintain the character of a saint. If a beautiful woman is brought to bed, they will not go to bed, just to maintain the ambiguity. In the middle and late stages, it transforms directly, just like a bull in the countryside smelling a cow in heat. There is that kind of lottery system. No matter how you draw at ordinary times, it is useless. When you encounter difficulties, you will draw whatever you want. In ancient times, if you were from a poor family, there would be a little Y-head who would never leave you, and you would be as beautiful as a fairy when you grow up. When you start a small business, you are bound to meet noble people. They all vomited.

Bad book, cheap protagonist, low IQ

I can tolerate the plot writing and other things, but I see this position and respond to it every time. For a low-ranking person, it seems that everyone can figure out the protagonist. If it is not good if it is too realistic and rises too quickly, then don't arrange so many cases for the protagonist to solve. After so many big and small achievements, the title is just broken. Aren't these senior officials afraid of others saying they are deliberately suppressing it?

As a protagonist with abilities, brains and cheats, you make him a doormat. If you want to write about abuse, don't make the protagonist's abilities too high. If you have the ability, write it like Ah San and everyone wants to step on it. We all know the plot of the movie's fan fiction, and we see that you didn't include the cheating protagonist in order to go around groveling down to please this one and that one who follows others. Just push the tower easily, the writing is good for adding more different plot development. If the protagonist's cheats were removed and he became an ordinary person and slowly developed, this book would be different.

Is the protagonist flirting? He is often beaten by Karen and still likes to hang out with her.

I want to know how many people touch their noses in reality. Maybe none of my friends are the protagonist's friends and they don't touch their noses. Those who touch their noses have all traveled through time?

This suppression of the protagonist is too deliberate. He has handled so many major cases and is still just a small police chief.

You have solved so many big cases and you are still a police officer. Man, your way of writing can dissuade a lot of people. It is not good for a time-travel novel that abuses the protagonist too much. You just want the cows to run away and not let the cows eat grass. You will only let the cows work. The protagonist has a history and can still stay in the police force. I have my own personal opinion. If I were to travel through time and play this way, I would definitely resign. You start with a map, and you can get it by solving the case. If I have a strong physique, I can work alone. Isn't it important to be a dark hero? You are involved anyway. Since you are doing it yourself and you can also improve your physical fitness, why do you need to be tortured in the police force? I think I'm still a good police officer after breaking so many. There are already more than 100 pictures. Man, if you don't upgrade the protagonist, it's really going to be boring. My personal opinion is for reference only.

I can't stand the protagonist's attitude towards Karen. He's so ungrateful. It's understandable that he got punched by Karen in the beginning, but then he got beaten again and again in the Flying Tigers. At the jewelry show, the protagonist seemed too tempestuous and had his naked eyes pinched to look at her. You're not a couple, so do you need to be humble to her? Does the protagonist like to be beaten? If you say they are a couple, I won't say anything. The problem is that the two of them are colleagues at most, and the protagonist's temperament is not too much like a licking dog

I feel uncomfortable after reading dozens of chapters. I have been serving the queen without any benefit. I have no position and I have no position to accept subordinates. After returning, I want to trick the queen for the country and I have no ability. Xiao Shouwen.

The protagonist takes off the clothes of the oil king's wife and offends an inspector while being pensioned. He solves four major cases without even the ability to coordinate. The protagonist is destined to either run away or be the British man's dog or a dead dog for the rest of his life. The most aggrieved protagonist with a golden finger

This protagonist is a bit disgusting. What age are you in, and you write a protagonist who can't walk when he sees a woman?

The writing is good, but the plot is poisonous. Why did I serve as a licker to that violent woman for no reason? I didn't say how much I love her, because I was afraid of what she would do. And keep suppressing the police, torture me a thousand times and treat you like your first love?

In fact, the author's writing is quite good. I have a few minor issues. First, the protagonist is too childish in his actions and actions. Second, there is really no need to treat women this way, and are all the female characters you write violent? Like to play the protagonist? The solution is that if the author wants the plot you write to be reasonable, you should deepen the readers' understanding of the novel. The basic concept is that this is a film and television drama novel, not reality, not time travel, and not any normal human world. In film and television dramas, any actions of the protagonist and supporting characters will naturally be rationalized. Isn't it an exaggeration to call it a film and television drama? Doing this will lose some readers, but it will also retain some readers, which is better than displeasing both sides. Personal thoughts, hope to adopt them.

What the hell? ? Ugh. .