Start with a Side Push

Hello everyone, I am the time and space administrator, and I am now offering 500 time travel opportunities. As long as you reply to 1 comment, you can get 1 time travel. Like and get a golden finger! What are you waiting for? First come first served! American comics, urban, martial arts, fairy tales, weird world, fantasy continent, doomsday survival, anime fans, multiverse, reaching the peak of life, becoming a god and ancestor just this time. Lost never comes again!

I don't even understand why I'm asking to help Bao Yuan kill Lao Zhu's people all over again, what's wrong with me! Also, Zhao Min has a bad relationship with you, so you gave her three conditions, and you have a bad relationship with Zhou Zhiruo, so you force the drama to be added. . .

I actually saw someone who still supported the Yuan Dynasty. Forget it, just give up. Bye! Even if I like the rest of the world, I don't want to see it!

Why do Infinite Liu only write about its advantages and ignore its shortcomings when writing about Nine Yang Magic?

Not killing Zhao Min, but still supporting Bao Yuan, haha, farewell

The pig's feet do nothing, the attitude is erratic, and the intelligence is forcibly reduced.

This book has a big loophole. As soon as I started learning martial arts, I learned internal skills. What about martial arts? You are born with knowledge, right? How can we understand martial arts without studying the classics of Confucianism, Buddhism and Taoism, and without describing the fighting scenes and effects? The description of human expressions is also very empty.

When I read about martial arts, I immediately gave up the book as soon as I saw some peak level or something. Even if they are divided into levels, it would be nice to say it. It is just like using some fine steel or Zhixuan like in the snow. It is not enough to refer to the Shen Zhao Sutra to determine the level of trance, sitting photos and other levels.

The author is not suitable for writing novels. The previous one was rubbish and this one is the same.

Moreover, it is written very clearly in the book that the Nine Yin Manual is a fragment, with no general outline, only acupoint closure, Qinggong, the Great Demon Subduing Fist, and the Nine Python Whip Technique. Because the Nine Yin Divine Claw can easily be trained into the Nine Yin White Bone Claw, Wang Chongyang did not write it down.

Idiot? Let the two elders Xuan Ming hand over Zhang Wuji and abolish his martial arts? It's extremely poisonous, and it's forceful nonsense! No one can see

Mom's novels are nondescript.

Yi Tian learned the Nine Sun Magic Skills, so why did you go directly to Fengyun to mess around?

Didn't you read the original work when you wrote this fan fiction? You can write whatever you want. If you write it like this, people who have read the original work will find it very strange.

This is the most insincere Yitian I have ever seen. The timeline is a mess. Yu Daiyan, the Three Heroes of Wudang, is intermittently paralyzed.

Speechless! ! All kinds of nannies are constantly available, and the second one is endless! They say villains die from talking too much! ! It's a pity that the author saved the protagonist! ! !

When I saw the protagonist's name, I withdrew first, friends.

The name of this protagonist is full of chuunii atmosphere.

The author's writing is not bad, but it lacks the backbone and is tasteless and a pity to discard.