Start with the Boss

In the early stage, it was written that Xiongba was only about 30 years old and he called himself me. It felt so inconsistent, so he might as well call himself me. . . It would be better to wait until Fengyun is an adult and then call himself an old man.

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Is Wu Wudi as bad as you said? , And also said that his character is not good. If he didn't have that invincible mentality and artistic conception, would he be able to create Shifang Martial Arts?

In Fengyun, people are called by their first name instead of surname. In Fengyun, do you think you are awesome or not? When others see him, they call him dad. Nie Feng calls him Duan Lang, which seems to be Lang.

No matter how I look at it, I feel like Xiong Ba killed the time traveler.

Feng Wuji sat on the golden lotus and said calmly: "Tathagata, are you leaving by yourself or should I send you off?" He thought it was a cool series, and after reading the introduction, he had no desire to continue reading. Low, huge low👎🏻

Some people cannot be cleansed, such as the leader of the Moon Worshiping Cult. No matter how you say him, how pitiful he is, how persistent he is, how scientific he is, but he has killed so many people, it is useless no matter how you clean him up.

After Fengyun finished reading it, he started writing about the clone when he got to Fairy Sword. It's boring. Now I see the desire to see the so-called clone without even looking at it.

Emperor Shitian was wandering until he met Duanlang

I really liked Fengyun's opening, but you just wrote that Xiong Ba has a child (it's been too long, I'm sure I've stopped doing it), but Emperor Shakti is 3,000 years old? ? That's three smiles! Emperor Shaktian is more than 1,000 years old! Please read the original work first.

Everyone knows about the fight with King Nie, but they don't know that there is a Qilin in Lingyun Cave? Isn't this nonsense?

Xiong Ba, it's Feng Wuji again, what's the name of the protagonist? Aren't you embarrassed😓?

Nima's writing was pretty good in the early stages, but it was really nasty later in the writing. Does the author like wives or something? Forget about accepting Yan Ying in the early stage, later on he also accepted Mrs. Ao from Bai Jian Villa, and even her son. How fucking vicious. I don't know how many more will be collected later. . . Persuade to quit

Three points belong to vitality, and seven points belong to luck. Withdrawn

‌After reading Chapter 32, Shuhuang is poisonous and I try my best to persist. At present, my heart is the most poisonous point. Why do I have to accept Yan Ying? When I first met, I said that she was the most beautiful woman in the martial arts world more than 30 years ago. She must be a girl to become famous. She She is at least nearly 40, and Xiong Ba only passed her 30th birthday after that, which is much older than Xiong Ba. After Emperor Shitian came to attack Xiong Ba and came out of seclusion, 16 years passed. When Xiong Ba was 46, Yan Ying was almost over 80 years old. I don't know what magical skills she used to maintain her appearance.

Isn't Yin Hong the son of King Zhou? Now that I have become King Zhou, my son wants to beat me?

Completely copy the book and travel a lot. This is what happened after Xiong Ba predicted the future. There is no personality of the time-traveling character at all. Super plagiarism

Brother, you are a 30-year-old person. You call everyone "old man" when you meet him. You still have your 30th birthday. I am really speechless.

Three points are due to vitality, and seven points are due to luck. Become light with me——

My favorite situation! I suspect the author has never read the original work. Fak

Pick up a mouse and open an Internet cafe? After reading two novels, do you want to learn how to write novels? I wrote it randomly without understanding the background content of each world. The character makes me want to vomit just looking at it.

Author, have you forgotten what the Sanqing Dynasty was? Pangu created the world. They can combine to form Pangu, but there is no sky-opening axe.

After reading the comments, I don't want to read it anymore

Why are there so many posts and no comments?

For such a handsome uncle like King Nie, the protagonist should be taken back and trained, and Nie Feng should be groomed, so that the protagonist can attack and defend, haha.

🙂 I think it would be more popular to write a novel about creating a secret realm on earth, directing and acting in it, reviving mythology, and gaining shocking points.