All Heavens: From the Start in Douluo

Author, if you're going to write fanfiction, at least make sure you understand the basic settings, okay? Why didn't Tang San, who was born with full soul power, get his first soul ring right away? Why did it take him so long to get his first soul ring? Tang San even skipped classes to get his soul ring, how do you explain that?

The first chapter was well-written, the second chapter assigned levels to the Haotian Hammer and made it directly poisoned, and the third chapter forced a show of power by incorporating it into the Primordial Era system. Other authors call it "The Golden Three Chapters," but this author calls it "Three Chapters to Make You Quit."

Brother, your choice of Douluo Continent is really unappealing. After all, the author has already squandered all the goodwill he could have had. In addition, although the plot is well-written, the power system is not top-tier among all novels. And you even started by writing...

My impression of this author is that they haven't actually read Douluo Continent and are just writing fanfiction based on reading Douluo Continent fanfiction.

No wonder your writing is so poor even after hundreds of thousands of words. Do you even know what "Golden Three Chapters" means? Your very first chapter is full of flaws. It's clearly a rip-off of the original work's awakening spirit scene, but you couldn't have done it any better. How could someone awaken the Clear Sky Hammer without spirit power?

What left me speechless in Chapter 1 was... He brandished the Clear Sky Hammer. Then, the Clear Sky Sect disciples who came to awaken their martial souls were scared away by the Clear Sky Hammer. You're obviously plagiarizing Su Yuntao from the original work, couldn't you have changed it? This is so illogical. It's obvious at a glance. It feels incredibly out of place.

The first chapter is enough to make someone succumb to poison and die. A child from the Haotian Sect would be terrified of the Haotian Hammer? And then run away? You're just copying the awakening of martial spirits part from the original novel, aren't you? They were from a small village, the children were inexperienced, and they ran away in fear when they saw Su Yuntao's wolves.

A broken hammer can supposedly conquer all the heavens? If you can beat an excavator, I'll eat some Oli Gei on live stream!

I gave up after reading just three chapters. The first chapter's major flaws: a child awakens the Clear Sky Hammer but has no soul power; out of 15 people in the Clear Sky Sect who awaken soul power, only three have it. Is this supposed to be a major sect? The second chapter's major flaws: forcibly assigning quality levels to the Clear Sky Hammer. Do you think this is a game like Legend of Mir?

Poison at the start, first martial soul has no soul power 😅