All Heavens: From the Start in Douluo

Author, when you write a fanfic, can you at least clarify the basic settings? If you don't get the soul ring first when you have full soul power, why did it take so long for General Lang to get the first soul ring? Then Tang San didn't even go to class and just took the soul ring. How do you say that? There are also 12-year-old and 43-year-old direct descendants of the Haotian Sect who need to register in the Wuhun Hall? You're terrible and you can't die, right? Forcing the plot? Isn't what you wrote disgusting? Return TM1000 gold soul coins, not to mention whether the Soul Sect will pay them back in the future, but the Haotian Sect is short of such a small amount of money, right? The Wuhun Palace is very generous. Did the Wuhun Palace provide the money? ? ?

The first chapter feels well written, the second chapter gives the Clear Sky Hammer levels and is directly poisoned, and the third chapter uses the prehistoric system to forcefully show off. Some people call it Golden Three Chapters, but this author calls it Three Chapters to Persuade Resignation.

Brother, your choice of Douluo is really unpleasant. After all, a certain three has lost all the goodwill of being defeated. In addition, although the plot of this book is good, the power system is not up to par among the astronomical books. You still started to write...

This author gives me the impression that I have never read Douluo, and he relies solely on reading Douluo fan fiction and writing fan fiction.

No wonder your data is still so poor after more than 100,000 words. Do you know what the three golden chapters mean? The first chapter you start with is full of flaws. It's obviously a copy of the original scene of awakening the martial spirit, but you didn't copy it any better. How could the awakened Clear Sky Hammer have no soul power? It's not like Tang Yuehua's martial arts malignant mutation. The master has said that for a person with a powerful martial soul, his innate soul power will never be low. You are the entire second and third level soul power. It's better than having no soul power. You are obviously copying the original Little Village, and it's not a good copy. If you modify it appropriately, it will kill you. Read like a running account, completely soulless.

Chapter 1 left me speechless the most. Revealing the Clear Sky Hammer. Then the disciples of the Clear Sky Sect who came to awaken their martial spirits would be scared away by the Clear Sky Hammer. It's obvious that you copied the original Su Yuntao, can't you change it? This is unreasonable. You can tell at a glance. The kind that is full of contradictions.

The first one directly persuades him to die from the poison. Will children in the Clear Sky be frightened when they see the Clear Sky Hammer? And then just run away? Are you copying the part about awakening the martial spirit from the original novel? This is a small village, and children are ignorant. Only when they see Su Yuntao's wolf will they run away in fear. But the problem is that now I am a descendant of the Haotian Sect, and all the uncles, aunts and uncles around me have hammers. And now you are afraid when you see other people's hammers? Oh my God, what kind of logic is this? I had no desire to read the first chapter.

A rotten hammer can hit all the heavens? Can you beat the excavator? I will live broadcast and eat Oli for you.

I was immediately persuaded to quit after reading three chapters. The poisonous point in the first chapter: a child awakened to the Clear Sky Hammer but had no soul power. Only three of the 15 people in the Clear Sky Sect who had awakened to the soul power had soul power. Is this a big sect? The poisonous point of Chapter 2: To force the quality of the Clear Sky Hammer to be graded, you think you are playing Legend. The key is that when the protagonist awakens to the innate full soul power, he does not know what the innate full soul power is. Then how do you know that this is Douluo Continent? Even if you have not seen it but only understand it, how do you know that the gods are flying all over the sky in the later stage. The poisonous point of Chapter 3: Hiding the secret of the twin martial souls, I won't complain about this, but the second martial soul turned out to be the Green Lotus of Creation, which directly copied the prehistoric system. The most important thing is that these three chapters are completely a stripped-down version of the plot at the beginning of Tang San's awakening of the martial spirit. The key is that if you just change the characters, copying the plot is no longer a fic, but just an extra branch line based on the original work.

It's poisonous at the beginning, and the first martial spirit has no soul power 😅