Total War Warhammer World

When I first read this book, I was looking forward to it 🙂, because almost no one writes about Warhammer and Total War. This book turned out to be both Warhammer and Total War. I was ecstatic, but after reading it, I found a lot of bad things. Some questions and suggestions about this book 1 The system has too many scenes At least in the first 30 chapters, it is recommended to reduce some dialogue 2 The character of the protagonist An ordinary game nerd? No problem, but please author, can you gradually change the character of the protagonist, preferably more mature, 3 The development direction of this book I don't see it, how long will I have to be a mercenary? It leaves the reader with a sense of confusion (lack of a main line), when will he dominate? 4 The IQ of the protagonist of this book I believe that many readers, including the author, can see it 5 The system recruitment problem of this book As a player of Warhammer peripherals and Total War, your design is a bit too vague. People who have never played Warhammer Total War will feel strange. It is best to introduce the numerical values of the troops and the number of words 6 To be added😒 I hope the author will write better and better

I love the author's words. A soft-hearted male protagonist surrounded the town after being defaulted by the nobles. Instead of robbing the nobles, he robbed the civilians. You are too merciful. Nine years of compulsory education were not in vain.

The protagonist is so useless that he is worse than a bastard. He vents his anger on the common people when he is bullied by the nobles. Nine years of compulsory education were wasted.

If you ask me, just stab the cavalry in the back, kill the refugees, burn the city, recruit troops (it is impossible to have food, everyone knows), commit crimes randomly (just with administrative ability), snowball all the way, destroy the empire and then fight guerrillas with Chaos. Finally establish a modern socialist country (perfect).

In the game, this file can basically be abandoned and restarted. The higher the level of Corrosion, the Chaos Legion can be spawned. The Order is basically unstoppable. There are greenskins and ratmen. To be honest, unless the protagonist wants to become DIO, he will not be a human being.

1. The psychological age of the protagonist is a bit low. This is not a question of whether the three views are correct or not, but the inner thoughts and tangles of the characters are more adolescent 2. The full war style is a web genre with a long history, so I don't understand why the setting of summoning people without self-thinking is still used. This has long been proven to be a bad choice.

This system is too poisonous and frustrating.

When the mercenaries came back from work, their contract was broken by Party A, and they all surrounded the city and robbed them. They still want to negotiate with the nobles to get money? ? Isn't this noble soldier still thinking about cheating the mercenary's gold? Ah... I don't understand this operation. From the description, it seems that system soldiers are not allowed to attack the city?

Don't you call this a total war? After reading your book, I feel like I played a fake Total War. I think your book can be changed into the adventures of the protagonist or the adventures of the protagonist. After reading so many chapters, I really didn't feel the slightest bit of war atmosphere. The whole story is about the protagonist committing suicide and having sex. To be honest, I just came here to be comprehensive and real. Look at what you have written.

The more I read this book, the more I felt something was wrong, and I felt like there was something mentally wrong with the protagonist. My brother-in-law feels something is very wrong. Someone is asking about his mental state. I want to see if there is something wrong with my mental state. My head hurt when I looked at it, and the more I looked at it, the more I got a headache.

I really vomited, and I was addicted to poison every day. How did this kind of bad book survive to this day?

I saw this book in Daily Guide, and after reading the reviews, it proved to be well-deserved.

The ruin of this book lies in the brain of the protagonist and this thinking system.

Although the author worked very hard, I still want to say that the pig's feet are so sloppy that I can't stand it. His efforts should be praised, but it's true that he can't stand it...

What is written here is indeed a big mistake. The palace is for two commoners to fight for. What is this? Author, I really need to give the protagonist some brains. Palaces are something like a palace that can be owned by ordinary people in the Middle Ages?

Is the protagonist a fool? You may not have outstanding abilities, but what the hell is it if you don't have the most basic caution? The name of the evil god cannot be pronounced. This basic setting is unknown. It is really disgusting to bully the weak and fear the strong. It is written according to the medieval mercenary. But who would like to rob the poor people's last hope of money, but dare not directly retaliate against the employer who owes the money and refuses to pay. The protagonist is hypocritical, hypocritical, stupid and sentimental.

The author should think about his ideas first before writing. He writes like a mentally retarded person. It's too poisonous.

My evaluation is that I don't want to read Chapter 10. The protagonist looks like a brain cancer. I already know that it is a Warhammer world view. Before massacring the city, he just looted and said that he is more timid than a fart. With a protagonist like this, how can I expect there to be any interesting plots in the future?

Total War Warhammer adds 5 stars, narrative writing loses 4 stars, and Poisonous Weed loses 1 star. It's rare for someone to be poisoned, so this is the beginning.