Teaching and Educating People in a Strange World

I found that the seedling of Yuren was about 3.6. I liked the title of the book at the time, and the first chapter really caught my appetite. But since this book only has a few thousand words, it is not uncommon for eunuchs to write it quickly. The first three chapters of this book are one of my three most satisfying books so far this year. The other two books are both by old authors, Squid's new book and Zhiyi's old book. Afraid that the greater the surprise, the greater the disappointment, I used a small account to read secretly. Today I feel relieved to bring the large account with me. Since I am here, as long as you keep updating, I will always accompany you. After chatting for a long time, we got to the point. This book on educating people, I thought it was an inspirational infrastructure article just by looking at the title, but it is also my favorite type, so I went in and took a look. Although the plot is different from what I thought, the result is satisfactory. This is a life-oriented horror and suspense novel, similar in style to horror houses and late-night bookstores. He didn't deliberately describe horror, but it did give me a chill down my back. I read it happily and quickly. I didn't get stuck in many places. The protagonist's aura is moderate, his personality is normal, and he seems to have a strong sense of immersion. The plot is not too abrupt and poisonous, and I enjoyed reading it anyway. This is a very immersive horror novel that will heal you and warm you, and lead you to explore the truth, goodness and beauty of the world.

Author, can you come back and continue writing when your writing skills mature? 🤓😭 I really like this article, and I hope I can only see his completion in my lifetime.

The struggle between man and ghost, man can control ghosts, becomes a struggle between man and man. However, as the most powerful organization of mankind, the state has no sense of existence. The police, who represent the will of the country, are simply useless. These ghost controllers are allowed to kill people wantonly, including killing police detectives. Is it all up to the protagonist or someone like the wandering Taoist master Yuan? The whole country is so big.

This chapter says there is a word limit, so I'll go directly to the book review section. First of all, the beginning of this book is actually a very rare supernatural novel that can make me feel hairy. I haven't had the faint excitement of reading a horror novel for a long time. But this high-stakes start dissipates very quickly. First of all, it is difficult to retain a sense of fear when you can cause direct damage to ghosts. After all, once the health bar lights up, you can understand everything. And if men are not allowed to take the initiative to use their own resources through task restrictions, they will fall into the aggrieved feeling of "I'm wearing a magical outfit and you won't let me use it." It is best to seize the gap that has not yet touched the true identity of the ghost to increase the sense of suspense, but it should not be too long. Being too obsessed with prolonging the process of solving the mystery will turn me into a detective in a strange world. Of course, it's okay to find another way to focus on how to play with ghosts. In fact, I came here just because of the name. I read a book next door about a very dedicated teacher and wanted to read more, but the teaching and educating people were not reflected in it. The most recent chapter is that the rhythm is very long, but flat. The emotions of the victims are exaggerated too much, and the plot conflict is not drawn up. It is easy to get bored while watching it. Another problem is the setting of the power system in this article. It feels like there is only a frame there, but it is not well coordinated. And I don't know why, various organizations give me a sense of urban fantasy, but writing about supernatural beings must not be fantasy. Fantasy has no flavor at all, it's just about fighting monsters and upgrading. In short, it is important to carefully identify the unique selling points of this book and not lose it. Communication between people and people and ghosts is much more interesting than simply solving incidents. Don't treat the ghosts you can control as tools, and increase communication and understanding appropriately. Keep the rhythm. Unless you have a detailed outline to determine the starting point, the ending, and the ending. In the early stage, don't be trapped in one event. It is the last word to quickly advance to the next step. If you want to write a chain plan, leave it to later. Don't just talk about what happened, and don't be obsessed with describing the heart and atmosphere. Put the characters in and take care of them, instead of pushing forward along the plot. But everyone is in their own way. You are the storyteller after all. Readers' opinions can be used as references, but don't sacrifice your original structure to say whatever you want. Everything is just telling the story in your heart. We just listen. Anyway, the most important thing about the starting point is to be stable and keep up the good work.

Like the title, support no-CP likes or replies. (At the same time, a post will be opened to support CP) I firmly stand against CP.

Let's talk about the reasons why you want a heroine or why you don't want a heroine (the author is a reference)

I feel that the quality has dropped a lot since the release of the old man... I feel that the character of the old man appears very stiff, and the rhythm of the plot has also become very weird after the release. It seems that I am trying to write one story at a time, without the sense of decryption that the protagonist had before he was confident enough to peel off the cocoon. Also, after the old man came out, the protagonist's personality changed a lot. The high-cooling, gentle, calm and decisive feeling was gone, and the protagonist's personality suddenly dropped a lot. Moreover, there are so many people raising monsters that it has become the norm. What should be a rare, precious, and mysterious group is poorly represented in the novel.

It's been a long time since I've read such a surprising new supernatural book. Since the last cleanup of the Internet, I have rarely seen particularly surprising supernatural novels. Most of them are eunuchs or simply unfinished. The ones that survive are mostly of low quality. They only follow the Chen Dachui genre. But the big book has a sense of surprise. Although the mission release mechanism has some hints of Chen Dachui, the entire world view is different, and the horror is well rendered! ! At the speed at which I read, I could finish reading "Seedlings" in a little over half a day. However, I read it for nearly three days, pausing several times because of fear hhhh_(•̀ω•́ "∠)_, and what I like even more is that the relationship between the protagonist and his Weirdness will upgrade Weirdness, and there will be interaction and cooperation. It makes me feel like they are all companions instead of just using the relationship (although there is indeed some use), unlike some novels where Weirdness first uses words to deceive Weirdness and then just uses it, as if Weirdness is just a thing for him to work for free. To be honest, I would be Weirdness It can directly explode and break his neck 😰. The protagonist's character is more three-dimensional and the character is very nice. He is my favorite type. He is flexible and stretchable. He wears gold-rimmed glasses and is a smiling tiger 😌. He is ruthless when he needs to be. Although it seems relatively immature now in the early stages, the protagonist was just an ordinary person before, and there will be a transitional period. Just like the young man he sharked, I feel like I am in a transitional period. (A small suggestion is that the big tasks are released more frequently, and the time feels very tight. In fact, it doesn't need to be so frequent, because readers will gradually become numb if they feel stimulated all the time 😳. You can try to slow down the pace a bit and explain the background details more clearly. This is more conducive to the establishment of the characters and the three-dimensionality of the characters ~ I also had this feeling of urgency and anxiety when I was watching the House of Horrors. I always felt that the day inside was so long that Chen Dachui never took a break ORZ) The idea is relatively immature and is just a temporary feeling. If there are other places that come to mind, I will add ORZ

As an author, every piece of advice you give is worth a thousand dollars. If you feel uncomfortable, feel free to mention it. I will refer to it and try to correct it. I would like to thank you all for clicking this book. We meet each other and we are destined to meet you. Wouldn't it be nice to make a few comments about it? Remarks: You can scold the author, but you cannot scold him because of different opinions. Everyone is independent and has different preferences and feelings. There is no need to force it. Bow and thank you! !

I read the novel based on the introduction, thinking that the protagonist would be a psychotic, happy, multi-type protagonist. I still had a sense of expectation, but I didn't expect the author to write that the protagonist also has parents, which is a bit stiff. The main reason is that I was worried that the author could not write well in this aspect, and I was afraid that it would be a bit unsatisfactory later on. In a novel of this type, I actually expected the protagonist to be an orphan. After all, Qidian Orphanage has taken off in Wuhu, and I also saw that the author plans to write a female protagonist... Come on, this conflicts with the introduction. This type of novel writes a female protagonist... I dare not even think about it. Many good novels focus on emotional scenes. If the author writes well, I haven't said, don't write emotional scenes, don't write emotional lines, don't write....

If so, please like or reply. The author seems to be still struggling with whether to have a female protagonist, so I will open two posts and like or reply to whichever one I support. (Actually, I want to say, heroine ≠ cp, although most of them are now equivalent to words such as partners. Heroine: the female character with the most scenes. Well, it depends on what the author thinks [spread hands])

I can't understand the first few chapters. . . . . It doesn't feel scary, but it feels like it should be scary. It feels very awkward. The description is rigid and God's perspective is written too fast. The protagonist's psychology is all in one sentence. There is no sense of substitution. From receiving homework from school to going home and encountering cunning things, it can be described in just a few words. There are so many procedures. I don't ask you for more than ten chapters, but it should be five or six chapters. . .

Not my type. I thought it was weird education that taught them how to become stronger or evolve. If you are in the same camp as humans, you can combine with them to defend another camp or the world or the universe. Isn't this type of style great?

When I read a book, I get tj inexplicably whenever I read the author. For everyone's sake, I will read it again in a few months to make the book longer 😏

Big cheers to the author, keep up the quality and not too much supervision. I'll take a sip first, and this book will become a hit. Don't be too lazy | ू•ૅω•́)ᵎᵎᵎ

This novel is really beautiful. How can I describe it? Every step is interconnected, and it never stops reaching the climax! The most important thing is that the concept of ghosts is very real, so real that I think it is very reasonable. I hope the author doesn't want eunuchs and has invested in them

Not bad, it looks good. Come on, the author. I hope there will be no cp and it will appear later.

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Come on, the first book for a newcomer won't be too popular, but maybe the second one will be a masterpiece. It's understandable if the results are really not good and the book is finished in a hurry. 😆

I don't know whether I should pursue it or not. I read the reviews of this book and it seems they are not very good, but I do like your title and idea. So I'll try my best to watch. I couldn't stand it anymore, so I removed it. However, the author also said that it was for writing practice, so I have followed you. I will follow you and order all the next books.

I really want to order all of it for you, but I'm afraid that you will be too much after turning on the automatic subscription, so I'll order part of it first, and don't be too eunuch 😭. This is the only book I want to fully order recently... Have you ordered more than 100 books in total? If you haven't passed it, you can support it, survive until the end, and become popular for the next book 😆. ps: There are no testimonials on the shelves.

As long as there is no love line, I will order them all for you

It's well written. I rarely see articles like this that catch my attention these days. The first book may not bring much profit. If you stick to it and sum up your experience, the next one will definitely be better.

This cute host is back!

Do not read this book before going to bed. Super super scary!

Is this a eunuch?

Dear writer, your new book is very good. I have joined the new book investment group. Please update~

Is there a female lead? If not, I'll join.