My Childhood Sweetheart and I Are Geniuses

Now that the author has sealed the deal, let me share my personal opinions and suggestions about this book and the author. This is just my personal opinion. If you think what I said is wrong, please treat me as a p. If I have offended, I apologize in advance. Long text warning, if you don't like it, please go to the right. First of all, I personally feel that this book needs to be evaluated separately, based on the age of the protagonist, which is divided into childhood: from the beginning to more than 40 chapters, when the master lets go, the senior brother and playmates leave to start his first adventure; young youth; from 44 to 140 chapters, from the first adventure to the elimination of the deadbeat snake, and after 140 chapters of adulthood, entering the upper world. First, let's talk about the childhood period that I think is the best written. The childhood of the protagonist is very difficult to write about in all online novels, because no one wants to see a naughty child making trouble, and there is nothing else children can do except make trouble. Therefore, most authors either directly use time travel and other means to force ripeness, or avoid talking about it. However, the author uses a first-person perspective to focus on showing the true and delicate psychology of children. Everyone can more or less see experiences similar to their own, which can easily resonate. It not only makes readers smile knowingly, but also makes the beauty of the protagonist's childhood sweetheart more real. In teenagers, the author has done a good job in shaping the relationship between the male and female protagonists. From childhood sweethearts like friends to the admiration of boyfriend and girlfriend, the story of a young couple from ignorance to falling in love is very sweet. It also inherits the advantages of the childhood stage. The first-person method shows the detailed mental journey of the protagonist, and the author has better control over the psychological changes from boy to man. It is real but vivid, which can resonate with readers. However, the biggest problem that will lead to the complete collapse of the book in the next stage is that it over-invests in describing the elements of cultivating immortals, and abandons the character creation that it is originally good at. The completion of characters such as the time traveler brother, the enemy of the country, the family hates the playmate, etc., Is obviously much higher than that of the master, the leader, and even the incarnation senior, who are crowded out by fantasy elements. When he reached adulthood, the author completely devoted his writing to the stacking of elements of cultivating immortals such as drawing talismans, refining alchemy, and a family of cultivators, as well as the pretentious plot of a cool template. This is not to say that there is anything wrong with writing according to the templates of previous generations, but the competition between templated cool articles is the writer's writing style, creativity in cultivating immortal elements, and the continuous supply of cool points. These are obviously the author's weaknesses. On the contrary, the longing of the male and female protagonists, the psychological changes of the male protagonist entering the world, and other aspects of character creation that he is good at were not written at all. When I saw more than 160 chapters, I once thought that the author had changed people or found a gunman. So, as far as my personal reading experience is concerned, I started to put aside this book and read it in two or three days. When the most important thing was the meeting of the male and female protagonists, but the author wrote a bunch of boring auction and low-level intrigues, and did not write out the atmosphere of the separation and reunion of the male and female protagonists at all, this book for me has completely become a mediocre industrialized entertainment book to pass the time. I will throw it on the bookshelf and use it as a preliminary reading when the book is empty. Therefore, I am not surprised at all that the author cut the book. I don't know whether the author was forced to make a living or had other hidden reasons for changing the writing method. Therefore, I do not criticize the author. It is just my point of view as a consumer that I will not pay for a novel that has completely discarded its soul and core.

I don't know if the author has read Gorky, but the writing style is very similar to Gorky's autobiographical trilogy. So far, "Childhood" is remarkable, with concise and simple writing; "In the World" is also very good, and the relationship between traditional novels and online articles is well controlled; in the first few chapters of "My University", Gorky is inexplicably written as Old Master Erxugao. The strangest thing is that this change doesn't seem to be particularly sudden. It's like feeling full as you eat, but you don't know when you feel full. You can try to write less about strengthening and upgrading, change more city-level or smaller maps, wander around the small maps in the city more, meet a few new characters, and break up the story a little bit, it should be better. Just like these recent chapters, I changed the mini-map to tell a new story, which is quite interesting. After telling the story on the mountain, you can go down to the surrounding small cities to have a look, or go on a trip or something to trigger new characters and new plots. There is no need to add settings to create an overly obvious main line. It is enough for the daily text to have a hidden line to find the mother.

Wow, I guess the author must have an interesting soul hidden in his heart. It's been a long time since I've seen such a relaxing and interesting novel. The characters are full-bodied, the emotional descriptions are sincere and delicate, and the protagonist often delivers corporate-level quotes. It's really a rare work. I have never read first-person novels before. I find them very inconsistent and lack a sense of immersion. But this novel is different. Not only does it not violate the rules, but it also has a slight sense of warmth when reading it. I always feel that the author's writing style is not proportional to the popularity of this novel. Logically speaking, this novel should deserve more attention and popularity. I don't know if it was affected by the not-so-interesting title of the book at the beginning. In short, come on, author. Although you have not been made a god, in my heart, your writing style and character settings have been.

I've given you the guaranteed monthly pass, come on, author

I feel that the story setting and description techniques are very similar to Han Han's Chang'an Chaos. Watching Brother Ding washing his sperm and cutting off his collaterals and being fainted by the smell is similar to Chang'an Chaos and being fainted by the cesspit. I hope the author can work harder. First-person novels are still rare.

Awesome! I love this book so much

I watched it again from the beginning, it was really good. I was born to tell stories, hahahaha.

I'm going to write the last chapter of this book. If the author thinks it's good, can he add some details? These days are so lonely and boring. So we came to live in seclusion in a plane where cultivation had not yet arisen. With nothing to do, I registered a pen name called "Lychee Flavored Zongzi" and published a novel under this pen name to remember the past time between Qing Yue and me. After much thought, I decided to name this novel "My Childhood Sweethearts and I Are the Prodigies of Heaven" because both Qingyue and I are the chosen ones. In fact, Qingyue and I still have many interesting things that we have not written, such as the things about drilling holes that Master talked about when he was a child. But it's not that I don't want to write, it's that Qingyue always blushes and hammers me with his hands every time I want to write. Of course, there is another purpose in writing this book. Since the cultivation of immortals in this plane has not yet developed, I decided to use this book to popularize the methods of cultivating immortals to the world. I have hidden the specific methods in every chapter of the novel. As long as you insist on subscribing every day and voting for this book if you have the votes, you will be able to understand the path to immortality. The more rewards you give, the faster you will understand. I hope this book can help everyone embark on the path to immortality. Finally, I wish everyone success in cultivating immortality and achieving positive results as soon as possible.

On the author's writing style

Come on, it's 20 points on the first floor, and it will be settled once per 100 floors. If it's less than 100, we'll count it as 100.

I want to be a role assistant, but unfortunately I don't have an operations officer, so I can't be a role assistant directly, so I'll build a building, with twenty on the first floor, and a post-operation settlement. (If it hasn't happened yet, let's end it in one thousand buildings)

This book is really good and gives people a healing feeling. It makes people feel very comfortable when reading it. I hope the author will not tj and write it down well.

I really like the writing style, style, and style I was very sad when I read it Because the first-person sense of substitution is too strong, because it contains very familiar memories, because unlike the protagonist, I lost my childhood sweetheart We also watched the stars together, practiced calligraphy, did homework, did hand shadows, hide-and-seek, and skipped grids. Playing Go, playing two-person games, lying on the bed watching Doraemon and Ah Shai Then it stopped abruptly I didn't feel anything at first But the memory will become clearer with time The dreams that follow will also tell you how important the other person is I hope... This book can continue to be wonderful.

Let me tell you that our dear Zongzi has landed ashore and has been training. It can only be updated every few days. It will take about a month or two. You can enter the water and the Zongzi will bubble from time to time.

I have read novels for many years, and the first-person book I read for the first time was Son of Light by San Shao. If I compare books to dishes, this book fits my taste buds very well. Mr. Yu Guangzhong once commented on Li Bai's poems: "The wine goes into the intestines, and the book written by the author makes the tea go into the throat; although it is not as heroic as the moonlight and the roaring sword, it is still as extraordinary as the muscles and bones, and the immortal spirit." From childhood sweethearts to the end of the world, it is full of love but not tired, and interesting. For me, reading novels is a kind of relief after studying and working, so I like urban cool novels and fairy tales in the harem (in short, I read everything), but this book really reminded me of the past of writing diaries under a small desk lamp before going to bed. If reading novels is an alternative way of life on my way of growing up, then this book is a pure place in my journey of reading novels. I hope the author can continue to let me learn and live clearly through reading books.

The group has been established, everyone is welcome to join the group.

One more

The author's writing style is really good. Writing a novel in the first person requires a lot of writing. From the first few chapters, it can be seen that the protagonist is indeed in line with the thoughts of his childhood, and there are enough details. Some people suspect that the master is playing trumpet. The final summary: This is the best first-person novel I have ever read.

Beautiful

About the first person.

The young couple is free from illness and disaster. Although there are small hardships along the way, they will never leave. This book is worth following. I will give you a thousand rewards if you finish it.

QingYue

The Lantern Festival is a day off, 500 points of support. The author should give due consideration to the opinions in the comment area. This subject matter is too much for my liking. Good luck to the author, and good luck to me for the college entrance examination.

Huangfu Hao

I saw this when I was cleaning out the books on the bookshelf today. I missed it so much that I came here to dig the grave.

It's a pity that the novel was very good when I was a child, but the problem is here, there is no main line, and it is completely impossible to write later.