Assassination of Shinoda

I suggest you change it to a longer one, and ask other people or editors to see if you can change the category. Assassination is a very well written article, but you have to be patient and chew on words, which will probably dissuade many people, but it is very graphic and has the meaning of cutting back and forth in a TV series. This is an advantage and a disadvantage. Once it's written well, it's an advantage, but most people don't write it well because it gives people a confusing look, and in time, the advantages turn into disadvantages. The beginning of the assassination was a bit chaotic, but not too chaotic, and it was natural to quote scriptures. It feels very delicate between the lines. While I was reading it, I once suspected that the author was a woman. Speaking of the "big tomb", the quicksand that appears in the later chapters is worthy of praise, and Director Su's reaction will also let people know that there is "something to play" in the later chapters. Some criticism later... Of course, it may be the author's foreshadowing that caused me to misunderstand. First of all, Han, a product of amnesia, appears too abruptly in the plot, and I always feel that the preface does not match the follow-up. I personally think that it is better to put it in the first chapter. With this amnesiac "general" as the center, he begins to explain the various identities of people around him, and then slowly unfolds the picture through other people's mouths, or the scenes of supporting characters, which will appear more natural and more appropriate. Secondly, the character Duan has abnormal amnesia. Although it is most likely a foreshadowing, when I read the paragraph about his amnesia, I suddenly felt uncomfortable inside. Why? The plot of "amnesia" appears a lot and is somewhat repetitive. Although this is the second amnesia, one more person will give people a different feeling. One said: "Ah, it is like this", and the second said: "Ah? Why is it like this?" Look at it carefully. The above is just my personal opinion, I apologize for any mistakes.

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