I Made Myself the Protagonist

Here is a solemn statement: No matter the protagonist or several important supporting characters in this book, there are currently no emotional scenes! This book is not a romance book! Ling Yun is an author who has been a soloist for eight hundred years. He looks like an old father to everyone. He has no crooked ideas and everything he does is to survive. And Tang Yao did like Ling Yun, but she didn't pester him because of it. After her first confession by mistake, she only wanted to work hard to improve herself so that she could keep up with her teammates and not be a drag on the team. This is a serious survival story. I focused on the content of the tasks and did not arrange emotional drama for the characters. Let me say something here, it is everyone's freedom to use cp. You can match them however you like. I respect everyone's preferences~ But please don't boycott female characters, because every character must exist. Of course, this is a male channel. I know that many male readers are disgusted by gays, so I must emphasize it clearly. Finally, whether you are a male reader or a female reader, please respect me. I don't want to see comments like calling for no female characters and two male protagonists to be together; nor do I want to see someone stamp it and say this is a dandy novel. This is a suspense channel. I am not saying there is absolutely no love, but the protagonist does not fall in love. You can have life-and-death friendships and pull CPs, as long as you feel happy! This is also a recognition of the character I created! But I just want to write an unlimited flow that is pure enough and has wonderful content. Thank you all for the above.

Although the idea is not new, there are not many people who write about traveling back in time to play supporting roles/villains in their own novels. Those who like this theme will probably like it very much. After reading a dozen or twenty chapters, tell me your feelings. The plot of the article is still a bit naive, and the descriptions of each character are a bit facial. The bad thing is that there is no good intention at all, and the good thing is that it is all honorable. Maybe for students or those who have just started reading novels, they can read it with gusto, but for readers of a certain reading age, it is a bit uncomfortable to read. The background of the world can be as fantasy as possible, but human nature cannot be divorced from reality, so that readers can resonate with it. People in you are black and white, which is very embarrassing for adults. A few examples: Does that real estate manager have this kind of emotional intelligence? How to be a businessman? Are you able to hide your selfish thoughts at all? Don't have the ability to assess the situation at all? From a high place, you can tell at a glance that the entire city is in ruins, so why do you still think it's a prank? These are all too unreasonable... It is recommended that the author put some thought into writing the characters to avoid childishness and stereotypes. If you see any improvements later, remember to tell me, thank you.

Happy New Year~ (smiling)

More in line with the ferocious temperament of the Golden Retriever period

Hello everyone! Since this is an unlimited flow novel, there will be a large number of player characters, so the supporting role selection post is now open! Some of the supporting characters in this book are my old readers. If you are interested in becoming a new friend in the book, you can leave your [Character Name] + [Character Settings, such as personality, appearance, etc.] Or [Skills] (I will refer to or modify it, and if it is good, I will adopt it) The richer and more three-dimensional the character is, the easier it is to be recruited! Everyone is welcome to register! Novel exchange group: 256821343

When the protagonist has a script in hand and can distinguish between loyal and traitorous people, it is actually possible to save people appropriately. He doesn't show mercy when he should be cruel, and he is more sensible, which makes him a relatively good protagonist. The relationship between the author's father and the son of the original protagonist is not as endless as in other novels. It's just that the positioning of Lingyun's team seems unclear so far... Looking forward to the following (๑˙ー˙๑)

Mom's great son

Still watching, not finished yet. But there is something I want to complain about. Why Lingyun, a physically and mentally healthy man, would call a young Shen Guanlan Brother Shen, is a bit strange given the context of our description. Generally speaking, men seldom call their peers "eldest brother" by both their first and last name. They would either call them Lao Shen or a nickname, or they would call them by their full names. To express closeness, they might call them by their first name or short names such as Brother Shen or Brother Lao, or they may also call them by their position. The way you call Brother Shen in the article is usually called by a girl, and it has to be a soft-type girl. In other words, the age difference between the original protagonist and the salty Ling Yun is about 20 years, and they can show a clear atmosphere of the times - the eldest brother corresponding to the eldest sister 😅. Although I know that the author is a girl, I can understand the sometimes feminine psychological behavior, but the vocabulary usage from this perspective is a bit strange and inconsistent with the male characters. Although it doesn't affect the plot, it's a bit awkward.

The setting of the author traveling through the book is quite interesting, but I feel that the protagonist is not very well written, and his presence is comparable to that of a passerby, and his occasional outings are ordinary. He does not take advantage of his familiarity with the plot, nor does he show any special wisdom or force... The plot makes me want to read on, but the control of the protagonist makes me unbearable. I hope the protagonist can grow up quickly, so I will fatten up before reading. PS: The description of Su Li is really a Jinjiang heroine setting. It is not as comfortable as the female counterpart of Tang Dynasty. The male protagonist always feels guilty and uncomfortable when seeing her? ? Is it the heroine? As soon as she appeared, I immediately became bored and didn't want to watch anymore...

It is recommended that authors reduce the number of jokes or popular quotes in their articles. After all, the insertion is too blunt. Over time, the style of writing may become awkward as the memes become outdated. There is no need to dig a hole for yourself.

I hope the author will not deceive himself

As soon as I saw Left 4 Dead, I thought of the two quiet-looking girls in my old class. Until one day, I saw them in an Internet cafe, playing Left 4 Dead 2 with the blood level set to max, using melee weapons throughout the process, and just there with two human-machine teammates...😅

Just watching it, I suddenly thought that I was once a terrible anime by Amway. The male protagonist also traveled through time and became a mini-boss in the early stage. He knew that his hands and feet would be cut off by the protagonist in the future and turned into a human stick. In order to reverse the plot, he unconsciously increased the protagonist's favorability, and finally turned the harem protagonist into a BL protagonist. Who knows how I finished watching it at that time

After reading the first volume and the second volume, the first volume feels a bit delayed. This may be because the author wants to explain the characters of the main and supporting characters in the first volume, but they are all a bit superficial. The gangster's cleansing and Tu Ya's final self-redemption, the car repairman and his wife died in a hurry and casually, as if they were rushing to the next set to play a small role. I think the sacrifice of Wang Yu's watch was a good one. Then at the end, the Ohashi bento was very stiff, giving the impression that the plot was about killing everyone, and if there were too many people, they had to quickly kill a few to help the protagonist and gather enough people to return. The plot killing in the second volume feels more obvious. You have to follow the meaning of the space, and you cannot take advantage of your familiarity with the plot to explore. The heroine's daughter can change the plot, but if a passerby changes, he will die, and then the body will be left to warn the protagonist (passerby: I need to add two chicken drumsticks to my lunch, which will cause a great mental loss) The entire second volume feels worse than the first volume, and the space projection Enter the protagonist and their variables, and force them not to change the plot. When the protagonist comes in, it feels like being an audience, watching the original CG of the movie, and then starting to fight the boss with the help of the heroine Generally speaking, the details and character descriptions in the first two volumes are delicate, but the dialogue and exchanges between the characters are a bit weird, and the supporting characters are not created with personality. Also, it feels that the Ark space is humane and cannot be played.

It's been two years and it hasn't been updated yet. . .

Isn't it possible that the author was pulled into the book?😄