Quick Transmigration: The Supporting Actress Goes with the Flow

Those who have read the book for more than two years will definitely not be able to stand the author's writing style. The characters are broken and the writing is very contradictory. I quit after reading sixteen chapters. First of all, the character design is seriously broken At first, the hero's daughter was described as a kind of cute and bold girl. Later, the author made the hero's daughter yin and yang weird, like a market woman, and later wrote her as a bit teasing. This feeling caused You don't know what kind of person the hero's daughter is. Is she really a weird green tea🍵 or is it because of the author's writing style that the hero's daughter looks like green tea? Then there is the character of the hero I can't accept this the most. The author starts with a lot of words I wrote about how good the male protagonist is to his first wife and how much he loves his first wife. The couple has a deep love for each other. In the end, within a few chapters, the adjectives were written like a post article. When the female protagonist wrote about how attractive the female protagonist was, the male protagonist was seduced and attracted. I was completely yue on the spot. ❓❔ I really don't want to complain anymore. I can talk till dawn when I complain. The heroine's design is even worse. The author wanted to write the heroine to be very cute and venomous. However, the writing style was not good enough and the heroine was turned into an impolite shrew. The author really has time to improve his writing skills.

This is a slow-travel novel. The first world is very exciting and sad. It matches the first story in the introduction on the homepage. I originally wanted to wait until the second world is fattened before reading it, but I couldn't help but take a look at it and almost vomited. Are you writing about the same protagonist? Gu Shichu, who had a lot of personality in the first world, turned into a pervert who only wanted to seduce men and was full of love in the second world? It seems like he is in heat. It is completely impossible to tell that he is the same person as in the first short story, and it does not match the introduction. I originally thought that he was looking after Gu Shichu who started a business in the 1970s and then lived a salty life, but it turned out to be a slap in the face. Apart from being unmarried as a stepmother, Gu Shichu's arrival is still about a man whose love brain is focused. The significance of Gu Shichu's change is really not big. If there is a limit on the number of time travels, it can only be said that it is a wasted opportunity. . .

Why does the heroine have to find a man in every world? The relationship scenes are written very strangely. Suddenly, she has to find the other man. The heroine seems to be in heat.

🌚🌚I found that the author made Lin Shichu more and more greasy, and her lustful nature came out. From the first chapter, I think she shouldn't be like this...

Actually, I don't think it's necessary for every story to have a male protagonist. Too many male protagonists will cause visual fatigue. . .

What is this latest little world about? She fell in love with a man, and she decided to sleep with him directly because she didn't want to get married. It was so disgusting. She never thought about whether he would mind. How is this different from QJ? Moreover, she felt that the heroine was very greasy. She kept thinking about how to get that man. The more she read, the more annoyed she became.

The male protagonist becomes more and more disgusting as it goes on, and the female protagonist really checks the trash can accurately.

The heroine is so in need of a man. When it comes to a male protagonist, the heroine is as if she is in heat and has lost her mind. She is always obsessed with sex and a man can just say a few words to her. . I'm pretty speechless.

I'm getting more and more disappointed later on. The point is not counterattack, but love.

What kind of thing is written in the latest world? Isn't the heroine QJ? So disgusting