White-Browed Eagle King Yin Tianzheng

Try to review it calmly. There is something new in the beginning, and the feeling is bright. Later, I open a trumpet and want to go behind the scenes. I can't say whether it is a failure. From the current point of view, the author's writing skills are obviously unable to control. Assuming that the protagonist's enemies are all gods and Buddhas, it doesn't really mean much whether to change the trumpet, because the protagonist's biggest trump card is the system and understanding of the plot. I opened the trumpet and wrote a lot of meaningless plots and word count. The progress of the plot still depends on the trumpet. Let's not mention the pros and cons for now. It really affects the overall reading. I almost had a schizophrenia when I read it. Overall evaluation: The opening chapter is excellent. I don't want to talk about it later. The author in the book review section does not seem to be an open-minded person. Maybe this post will be gone in two days. It's a pity that such an interesting opening chapter.

The daily guide is well-deserved (it's suitable for novices, but for me, it's really the daily guide. After all, I used to watch Battle of the Sphere with great enthusiasm, but now that I watch it, I can't even finish a single chapter)

There is nothing wrong with the author's writing style and his storytelling ability is good. The main thing is that you have to have a good positioning. You have to first find a subject that is easy to satisfy. It has a wide audience and is easy to produce. For example, the book is unlimited (a layman's opinion). It has settings and storylines. You just need to find a surprising copy (leave it if it is poorly written). A good starting point, three views, first satisfy your needs, and then talk about your ideals. That is the story that you really like. The above is a layman's opinion and is for reference only. Please bear it at your own risk.

The protagonist is extremely contradictory. He is selfish, vulgar, greedy for life and afraid of death; but he also wants to appear saintly in front of others and reflect his sage and virtuous appearance. The author has little experience and has not read many history books, so he can only conjure up obscenities. This book has an exaggerated and empty sense of history, no sense of immortality, and no martial arts style at all. I really can't stand it.

Please support me. I hope the writing gets better and better. If this one doesn't work, there will be another one. If you don't die, you will always come forward. Don't do something half-way. Others will only compliment you. When you achieve something, they will come over and tell you how good you are.

The writing is good, but if you write about Yitian, just write about Yitian. In the end, you have to add the world of Shushan. To be honest, many young people have never read Shushan. If you write it as an advanced world, forget it. The power gap between the two books is too big, so you write them both together.

The setting is very good, but the author is completely exhausted. The entrance is invincible, and the synchronization is not good. The plot of Yitian is taken to the world of Shushan. There are long eyebrows here, what's the matter with you, and you are still having fun everywhere. There is also this joke tone, self-pleasure mode, and narration everywhere. Is this writing a novel? I wrote a diary for my own happiness. Can I write, can I say that I got it early, what the hell! I thought it was a good book, but it turned out to be a mess and too toxic. I don't recommend reading it.

Can you write a good book? It's been a year of lack of books! After the old author ran away, what kind of stuff is written by the current author? It's so out-of-the-box and naughty! ! ! Instead of writing novels, it would be more promising to write all kinds of funny jokes, right? You guys have watched too many domestic animations in the past few years, right? Everything I write is in the semi-funny, semi-nonsensical style of domestic animation!

Why do you like hodgepodge so much? I've never seen a complete hodgepodge of books? Don't any of these authors have any point?

Seriously, the original is not inverted, what is the clone used for? It's just to do the "dirty work" and help the development of the main body. During this time, I kept writing about clones, which left me speechless.

The character of the protagonist was too exciting by the author and I didn't like it.

Come on, is this going too far by using the anti-theft plot to deceive you?

The author's writing style always makes me feel like he is making fun of the world and satirizing the common people 😅 Could it be that he has been enjoying himself?

I originally wanted to read the book after reading the title, but after looking at the introduction, this time it is integrated with the world of Shushan. Wow, how can I read it...

The writing is really good, but there is a suspicion of selling dog meat with a sheep's head. The title of the book is (White-browed Eagle King Yin Tianzheng), but the content has almost nothing to do with relying on heaven and slaying dragons.

The voice is a real dog! Playful and smiling, making jokes, Xianxia is not like Xianxia, ​​and martial arts is not like martial arts! Disaster

This Human Emperor cannot live forever is correct! You want to be an emperor, and you want to live forever, how is that possible? What do you want on Douyin? One drink and one peck has its own destiny. Only by giving up can you gain something.

I am also an old bookworm. What I saw in the introduction today is that the author's writing is a bit white and watery, a hodgepodge of styles, and a bit messy, but it is not without merit. At least I fully support it. For Zhu Tianliu, there are still many people who like the plot if it is more refreshing. If you can stick to it until now, I still appreciate your style. You can write according to your own ideas. It is impossible to become a god after reading a book for the time being. Isn't it good to write this book well and accumulate experience?

Although it is not a good thing to say this, I still give the author a reminder. Your name and nickname are all from Jin Yong. According to Jin Yong, many of his things have registration rights. For example, Yang Guo and Xiao Longnu appear in "Kung Fu". These two names only appeared once, maybe twice. Anyway, according to the Internet, if they appear once, they will charge 10,000 yuan.

3 Recommendation votes have been cast, and the author's recommendation votes are already the best of Dihua (Dihua)🌸, come on, one book is a test, two books are great, three books are platinum, (one book, two books and three books are gradually decreasing), which shows that the faster the author's integrity is lost, the higher his level will be, come on! 🙂

Rubbish, you're just wasting your time writing this stuff.

It's best to practice on your own, and you can use the system to improve your qualifications. Otherwise, if the system is gone in the future, the cultivation level obtained by the protagonist will also disappear, and the protagonist will be useless.

The author writes well. I just hope that the author will not praise others and belittle others. Your book must involve the background of the ancient times. I hope the author will not brag about the prehistoric times and other worlds are rubbish. I hope the author will not make this mistake

If you want it right, I can turn on the anti-theft or not. By the way, can the author add more details? 🙂🙂Let me vote

Sorry, since Qidian hid the recommendation votes, I have never voted for this thing again.

I just took a look at the author's background. Thank you very much for your support from brothers and sisters for your recommendation votes, monthly tickets and subscriptions! Of course, there are also some brothers and sisters who have given rewards. Thank you very much. Night Requiem, Kongzhi, Three thousand in the dream, The years have passed and you can still sharpen the knife, The snow in the bamboo stream, Lonely Paris, b> 20180624185533455, Youran brother, Long Haomiao, ... In addition, when everyone evaluates, I hope you can be merciful. Writing a book is not easy! I just took a look at my bookshelf and found several eunuch books, or old books that have been completed. Think about it! It has been three months since I read the novels on my bookshelf. Simply because, I also wrote novels. It's hard to describe in one word! Now I just want to make some money. I hope everyone can understand and stop taking the lead. (Old readers can understand that a book's review section is full of negative reviews at the beginning, which has a great impact on new readers. Even if the original writing is okay, other readers may follow suit and criticize it. If the original writing is just average, such as this book, it will cost your life. Let's understand each other)

White-browed Eagle King ascends to the throne of president

Come on! One monthly pass, three recommendation votes are presented

Write well and don't worry about the east, west, north and south winds! No, no one knows the outcome until later.

Your ten updates are complete. Full subscription support. Unfortunately, I don't have a monthly ticket. I will vote for you next month.