Mountain God of Huaguoshan

I hope the author can see that the role of the system should be less out of the country. If the role of the system is less active, it may collapse in the later stage. The system role should be less flexible in the early stage and easier to write in the later stage. If the early stage is too active in the early stage, what is the use of upgrading the system in the mid-term? I thought there was nothing wrong with it until I started reading it, but when I read back, I felt that the character System's appearance rate was too high. It was so high that even the protagonist didn't have such a high appearance rate, and there was not much sense of involvement. How graphic is it? The first three are quite well written. But there are more systems. Current exposure. That's it. System. Main character. Monkey, there is no more. You have to look at the system flow at the beginning. It's not you who can't write the protagonist, characters, system, and heroine. The subject matter of your book is very good. Very innovative. It is rare to write about this subject when writing prehistoric novels, and the framework is also very good. But you highlighted the system. I have calmed down writing the main character, and now there are only eleven chapters that can be changed if I really need to. Otherwise new readers. From the beginning to the end. I just feel that the character System's appearance rate is too high. You can take a look at Chapter 8. The characters in the Pantao Club system are too prominent. Can you add some refinements? "The above is my personal opinion"

What are you writing about, the protagonist kills the ancestral dragon in Chapter 30 or 40?

Dad, do you know, do you know, I waited until the flowers withered.

Are there so many sailors now?