
Survive on a Desert Island by Farming and Opening a Shop
荒岛求生靠种田开店
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 1.2M Words
- Genre
- Western Fantasy
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Alternative Fantasy
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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I can write better than the author
I was really disgusted. Where the turtle is, the enlightened vegetative people just watch the show, eat melon seeds, and shake their legs. I really don't know what I am doing by writing this. It makes readers feel like they have eaten shit. Let me teach you how to write, first, after eating the little trumpet once, it was still in the early stages of development and could not be eaten anymore. Second, the trumpet can only eat and has no other fighting abilities. Third, Xiaoxiao wanted to help, but couldn't. Wouldn't it be more acceptable to write it this way? Chapter 20, what is it? Someone came out of nowhere and refused to leave. He cooked pig's feet to grab food. After the robbery, he said that he was the protagonist. I saw a question mark on my face. Can't I say that I work for the protagonist? Not only this, but also, using the horn to grab food? Even if you were the protagonist's own daughter, you wouldn't write it like this. This involves tutoring. I won't go into details about the reasons why I think it's okay for children to grab food. The most annoying thing is that everyone has something to eat, but the owner of the pig's feet is nibbling carrots in the corner. Seriously, a very toxic plot. I'll teach you how to write again. First, the little loli didn't want to go back when she came. The pig's feet had no choice but to ignore it. Second, the pig's trotters were cooking. The family was enjoying themselves and waiting for the meal. Pig's trotters saw that she was pitiful and prepared an extra portion. Three, the little Loli was stubborn and didn't want to leave, and Pig's Foot was unhappy, so she offered to help with the work (isn't the work much better than the free prostitution you wrote about?) Four, she was very serious about her work, so Pig's Foot slowly accepted the little Loli.
Having said that, the setting of this book is quite attractive, with tower defense, small shop and farming. But the character of the protagonist is really unlikable, too poisonous. This is not honest, but stupid. Anyone with a little brain can realize the usefulness of these crops. It has been more than 40 chapters. Two customers came and regarded the protagonist as a fool. I was drunk. The protagonist looked like an old virgin who had never seen a woman. He was so confused when he saw a child. And it's already 2021. Chapter 30 emphasizes the preference for sons over daughters. Although the author has always emphasized that it is the opposite, the feeling of this article is like force-feeding you a mouthful of Xiang, and saying that Xiang is strawberry flavored and delicious. The supporting characters are also quite weird. They stand there shaking their legs and watch the protagonist fight by himself. As a cook, the protagonist only deserves to drink soup and eat raw radishes. Who is the master? Raising two plants is like raising a father, and that little loli, where does the sense of superiority come from. Occasionally driving is the highlight, but driving all the time feels like farming and opening a kiln next to the field. The kiln is filled with adults, children and old people. The author's metaphor is really amazing. Could it be that he has never seen a woman before, so he can compare everything to a girl's early spring. Has been poisoned.
Tell me what you think about this book First of all, the character of the protagonist, a farmer. The thoughts of small farmers were emphasized until chapter 30. I couldn't bear it anymore and stopped reading. I don't quite understand why I chose this character. It seems that farmers are not very smart. This is beyond my explanation. He believes everything others say. That little tree spent such a long paragraph describing how much she has a story. Then the protagonist believes in her words, as if others can't lie. And the treasure tree, trying to turn others into tree people while others are sleeping? Want to hide the effect of the potion and mutate it? It's really just that plants are not human beings, so let's do whatever you want, and I haven't seen you have such an attitude towards small trees Then there is the issue of the sense of immersion in the article. It is now 2021, and it is not so forced to bring people in, but you don't really have a God's perspective, the whole thing is like a running account And that little tree, I really can't complain. She said she has stories and that humans protect their cubs. Then when I thought about it, I always felt something was wrong. Is the age set too high? You said she was seven or eight years old, about the age of a primary school student. Then she appeared and cried and asked the protagonist for help. It was easier for me to accept it. She was fifteen or sixteen years old and had various backgrounds and experiences. After that, she didn't say anything and just stayed there. I won't leave. I have no home. I want to stay here. How about this moral kidnapping? Any other person with a bad temper would have driven her away long ago, and any normal person would not have a good look on her. It would be the utmost kindness to allow her to live on the other side of the island and occasionally send her some food. I like to watch farming. The focus of farming is development, accumulation, and construction, not life-saving attunement skills. I clicked on two ancestors, and the protagonist beat them alive and killed them to watch the show. Even if you write that they want to help but the protagonist refuses, I can accept it. Care is two-way. Occasionally showing off to show off is just a way to adjust, instead of watching a shameless person who refuses to leave and insists on using his body to exchange it, bah, a person with hands and feet only knows the body? In the end, it was the protagonist who asked her to help farm the land. The countryside would not be used to such lazy people, so she was just pitiful? Who is not pitiful these days? Who is not trying hard to survive and live a better life? Isn't the protagonist pitiful? Being treated like a slave on a blind date is so exhausting! After finishing farming on a desert island, the author was kind enough to set up enemies based on the strength of ordinary people, but the protagonist had a cheat, otherwise he would have died on the first day.
After reading Chapter 39, I was really dissuaded by the protagonist's IQ. I also have friends from the countryside, but to be honest, it is not as intelligent as the author wrote, and the description is a bit over the top.
Shennong left... Vomiting blood and hired eight black men to carry him away. The book was burned at the grave, and Shennong cursed and came back to life. Then, madly, he picked his eyes out and ran away...
I tried the poison and saw chapter 52. I couldn't stand it anymore. The beginning was a little better, but by the 52nd chapter I had already gone out once and I was still stupid, right? I'm just very doubtful. I don't know what kind of stereotype farmers have in your mind. The setting is actually pretty good. I insisted on setting it up to 52 pictures, but the character setting is really a bad point, and the writing description doesn't actually have too many bugs. Summary: The character description is a little bit poisonous, but otherwise it's pretty good.
After insisting on it for thirty chapters, I couldn't bear it anymore. Do farmers only have low self-esteem, timidity and stupidity? I repeated this description over and over again for dozens of chapters. 😅
What age is this? The protagonist still favors boys over girls, and despises his daughter as a throwaway water. Is the author an old feudalist?
As long as you have some brains, you won't hit the heads of livestock such as cattle and sheep with wooden sticks. Human strength cannot cause much damage at all, and it is not as effective as hitting its legs.
The little loli in front is really annoying, mainly because she has no sense of proportion. It is obvious that you are asking for help from others and relying on others. Forget it if you are not grateful, but you are confident enough to bully the owner. The protagonist thinks that she is just a child and does not care about it. In the end, it becomes an excuse to push the envelope.
First, you were a piranha watching a show, I raised you to help me fight, and then you watched the show from beginning to end, so why should I raise you? A princess from some country came out of nowhere, she was also out of nowhere, and she was very arrogant. Two customers came and they treated the pig's trotters as shit, but the pig trotters themselves thought they were awesome.
It's understandable for Tian Wen like you to add a star gate and a space-time prison, and treat it as mining for other treasures in the next dungeon. But what is a little loli doing who has nothing but a big background?
The author, the peasant-style simplicity is correct. The key is that the timeline is wrong. It should be before the 1990s, and the underdeveloped areas can be before 2000. If it is modern, it is not simple, and it is necessary to go to the hospital to have an IQ problem diagnosed.
There is nothing much to say about the introduction of the first chapter. I didn't even see the end of the second chapter. I drove the car five times. Occasionally driving is fun and recreational, but driving all the time feels like it's all yellow waste. And I can tolerate the description of adults. The metaphor of a fourteen-year-old girl is something disgusting, so it's just disgusting. Also, what the hell is the writing style? It's neither accurate nor imitative. It feels like someone is telling you a story, with a catchphrase or colloquial abbreviation from time to time, and one or two words of laughter and pretentiousness. Speechless
The novel is well written, but the protagonist is a bit stupid, even to the point of lacking IQ (from Lolita's attitude and ability to save people, we can see how precious his plants are, but he doesn't feel it at all and just thinks they are ordinary plants). The effect of plants on the protagonist is different from that on others, but they never ask what the effect is on others. Values cannot be changed by force. In fact, I don't really like the attitude of Lolita and Big Mouth Flower (Small Trumpet) towards the protagonist. There must be something wrong! Whoever likes it will suffer this crime. The early development is well written and should be worth reading, but I only like novels with development and can only give up.
I couldn't stand it until I reached the third chapter. Your writing style is really... You're not writing a novel, but you're writing a story. It seems like you're telling a story.
I don't know what's going on lately! 9.9 Out of 10 new books that were dug out were all forced to give the protagonist an intelligence. It can't be that all the authors have this kind of intelligence! I strongly suspect that Qidian was directly generated by AI!
I personally also like farming stories, but it's nice to have these little fights to spice things up. The author just writes what you find interesting. This book is very good so far and is worth paying to read. Come on.
I gave up, I really can't stand the stupid white protagonist.
It's really too poisonous, especially in Chapter 29, where I ran away
There is no reason for poor grades→_→
The character of the protagonist is really unlikable, so I gave up the book
The author is not a rural person. The identification has been completed Maybe the rural people in the last century would have been as stupid as the protagonist Nowadays, rural people are so shrewd that they can remember a dime taken advantage of for several years. Even trivial things can be remembered for a lifetime. If this family's dog eats in that family's dog bowl, it will be beaten out. In rural areas, there are only those who do not fight, and there are no fools. The protagonist's character only fits half of the rural people, and the remaining half are fools.
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I couldn't stand it after reading more than 20 chapters. I can only say that it's not suitable for me.
It's a pity that the system is full of poisonous articles. The subject matter is actually quite good.
I have read more than 90 chapters. Overall, the writing is really good. Although there are some poisonous points, it will not persuade me to quit. But I can only say that it is not to my taste. It depends on the individual.
The subject matter is okay, but the writing is not so good. Why does the author look down on farmers? He raised two dads on the island, but he still acts like a dog when he goes out? So speechless
I think this book is quite good. The plot is quite interesting and quite funny. The author continues to publish large chapters.
Why did a girl suddenly appear?