From The Smiling, Proud Wanderer to Grand Tutor of the Ming

Why can't I understand this? As a high-ranking member of a party, with a large army in hand, a few Jianghu people could be wiped out with just a raise of their hands. How dare Shaolin Wudang do this? The demon sect is dedicated to rebellion, and it is understandable that the government is against them. What do these Shaolin Wudang beggars and others count? Just kill them directly. What qualifications do these Jianghu people have to talk to a frontier official?

Translate the introduction: Took Zuo Lengchan's hand and fought with Dongfang Bubai.

I gave up after reading Chapter 90. The author's choice of words and sentences are all good, but the whole story becomes more and more incomprehensible as I read it, especially since the protagonist is young and has low martial arts skills, but everything happens around him. This is understandable, after all, he is the protagonist, but he is still the central point. Even the prince, Jin Yiwei Baihu, Qianhu, etc. All discuss with him in an amiable manner, so it is incomprehensible. I just want to ask: Why should he? I really don't understand the logic here. I feel that in his current state, he should not have the strength to become the core and decider of the story. The story can happen around him, but now he should be more of a bystander or a limited participant, rather than the absolute core. There may be a more detailed story background later on, but from what I've seen so far, I just feel that the story is getting more and more complicated. The key is that it's complicated and unorganized, and I really can't read it anymore. I feel that after Song Ye left and King Zhongshun appeared, the story began to become more confusing. The above are just my personal opinions. Maybe my understanding is limited, so I have to say goodbye.

I really can't stand it after reading the latest two chapters. How should I put it, this calligraphy is good, but there are two problems that are particularly annoying. First, the role of martial arts in political struggles is over-exaggerated. I probably understand the author's intention, but it is an exaggeration to think that martial arts masters are already on the same level as nuclear weapons. First of all, assassination cannot solve the problem in the struggle. The grass on the grave of a certain transportation team captain who did this is already unknown. Secondly, the martial arts skills are not up to the description in the novel of how to take the head of an admiral out of ten thousand troops, just like searching for an object. No matter how high your martial arts skills are, you can shoot a volley of bows and arrows. Besides, both sides have top-notch martial arts. Although the protagonist's side is slightly inferior, they can definitely eradicate the princes and grandsons. In this regard, it should be the people in power who are more afraid of this kind of desperate assassination. Second, let's not talk about whether the protagonist's revolution can succeed under the social conditions of the mid-Ming Dynasty. This trend of change is already digging into the roots of those in power. No revolution is bloodless, but the protagonist is still looking forward and backward, trying to compromise with the "reactionary" ruling class. This will not succeed. Moreover, as a leader, he would go out of the control area and wander around pointlessly without any problem. This is not only irresponsible for his own safety but also irresponsible for his career. It's just baffling. In general, the author's writing skills are okay, but his approach to dealing with things is unsatisfactory. If he only wrote about martial arts, it would never make people feel so entangled. This book really made me feel the same feeling that Cao Cao said when he quit Hanzhong, "it's useless". Just give it up, and the writing will still be successful. Read on, the plot inside is really painful. I'd better raise it first

I'm a little speechless, but I can watch it, but the more I watch it, the more irritated I am! It's not that it's poisonous, it just feels wrong!

It's a bit annoying. The emperor doesn't care much, he has tens of thousands or hundreds of thousands of troops at his disposal, and there are several first-class masters at home? . Every day, gangsters from this or that gang come to make trouble.

The writing is not bad, but you have been writing about children for too long. There are more than 150 chapters, and they are still as old as 8.9 Years old. They are not even older at all. Even Jin Yong did not dare to write like this.

Begin the transition from fairy grass to poisonous weed. . (Like the Dragon Boat Festival and the bright moon in the Mid-Autumn Festival!)

To be honest, even those who are not emperors in Hunchaotang will end up badly.

The more I write, the less I understand! And the writing is getting more and more verbose! You said that when you write about political struggles, you write about struggles, but why do you end up with compromises everywhere? It's easy to say that you have received guidance from a teacher! ?