My Martial Arts Are Different

Didn't the author review the manuscript before uploading it? I don't know how you can bear with all the typos and so on.

Practice your writing more before writing novels. You can write with the same writing style as a primary school student. I admire you.

Is the popularity of this monthly ticket generated?

First, there is no punctuation in a long paragraph, and second, the dialogue is awkward. It's really embarrassing!

After reading the first chapter, I found a big problem. The writing is a bit strange. Some places should be divided but they are connected in one big series.

The beginning is very cliche, the author needs to innovate.

Why does it look like a dream? It felt like a scene from a dream, and then I was a little confused.

Green Gourd Sword Fairy is a martial arts fairy with a very interesting story.

How to say? This idea is not good, I haven't even seen it. It really becomes an entity, but it is not as powerful as not turning into an entity, not turning into strength and internal power! Energy can also be dispersed, penetrated, and attacked to the opponent. You are a bright entity, and others only need to block it.