Douluo Dalu: The Rise of a Commoner

I just started reading it. The previous one is pretty good and I like it very much, especially the family relationship aspect is handled very well. I have read almost more than two hundred Douluo fanfics, but yours is unique and the only one that is different. I also like the character. It is not like those who have traveled through time and are hostile to this or that, and they are in the air every second. Either they hug someone's lap because of a woman, or they are so afraid of death that they deliberately destroy this and that. This is why I like this book. It's just that some places are not handled well, it seems to be called Duguyan, Dugubo, you are Lonely Bo, Lonely Yan, a little awkward but not big impact, It's just that I don't agree with some theories, maybe it's because of different ideas! You met Old Man Dugu first. You wanted to make up for the shortcomings of the martial spirit and picked the fairy grass. Why did you make up for Tang San? Tang San, who are you? Neither relatives nor friends, this is Dugu Bo's medicine garden, and it's not his. Is Douluo Continent his back garden? Even if it's not Dugu Bo's, it's still an ownerless thing. If I'm sorry, it belongs to whoever finds it. Of course, in an environment like Douluo Continent, you have to have the strength to protect yourself from being killed and cheated. Why did you come here first? What's more, this is something owned by someone, something given to you by others, butterfly effect, you are here, you are now a person in this world, why is it not advisable? You've said this many times, and I ignored it all the time. When I saw it, I was about to collect the fairy grass. I was still thinking about Tang San. How could I compensate him? Really disgusting! Also, the theory of official marriage is really bullshit. Is this the daughter-in-law arranged for you by God? Since your Butterfly Effect didn't go to Shrek, how did they get to know each other? I don't like Ning Rongrong's pure, elegant and princess-like temperament, marrying the wretched uncle Oscar. Xiao Wu is also good, cute and cute, but also ill-fated. If you can change, why not change? Oh, Qian Renxue, Hu Liena, and Zhu Zhuqing are pitiful, but Xiao Wu is not pitiful? And if you really don't like married women, Bibi Dong shouldn't accept her. Of course, this is my personal nagging after reading the book. I am a bit unhappy about it. The author can do whatever he wants after reading it. Don't let my words disrupt your outline and original ideas. It would have been better if I hadn't seen it I'm in a bad mood, so I added this book to my collection. I'll read it again in two days when I feel better.

The protagonist is two years older than Tang San, but his soul power is two levels higher than his? You're a bit too poisonous, author, if you don't quickly refresh the protagonist's soul power, I really can't stand it. A 14-year-old and level 34 man is not a scumbag compared to Tang San. Can he still be called a protagonist? It makes people unhappy.

Grass. . . Recommended by Sister Lily

As a fanfic, the protagonist shouldn't have to go through so many twists and turns. It's a fun point to read in the fanfic. I hope the advancement of the Seven-leaf Sword Grass will be simpler. If you want to write about the Nine-leaf Sword Grass with ten evils in the perfect world, I think it's better for the protagonist to focus on the direction of the sword. Just when you awaken the Nine-leaf Sword Grass, you can let the protagonist try to create it by himself. I think it would be better if the main character didn't have soul bones when it came to things like making grass-shaped swords and swords. Among so many fantasy novels, Douluo is the only one that puts the bones of monsters into his body. I think it's quite nondescript. If it's just in the Douluo plane, it's okay. If you want to go out of the world, I think it's better not to have soul bones.

Before I watch it, I just want to know something, should I lick Tang San? Will the Wuhun Palace be destroyed? If it's Licking Tang San or Destroying Wuhun Palace, I won't watch it.

If you like to read refreshing articles but have no patience, please proceed with caution. If you like depth, the rise of the ordinary, and those who are bitter at first and then sweet, please feel free to read. One thing that needs to be explained is that the naivety in the early stage is due to the protagonist's happy experience of being able to return to his childhood. If I could travel back to a world like Douluo and become a child, I would never want to be a mature little old man who knows everything. The more mature you are, the more trouble you have. The Wuhun is not as good as the superiors but more than the inferiors. There are a lot of restrictions because I am such a person, ordinary yet unique. I just want to write this point to reflect the extraordinary aspects of every ordinary person. It may be due to the lack of writing style, or it may be that Shuangwen is now popular and cannot keep up with the trend. Therefore, although many people read it, it is not recognized by readers. I'm very sorry about this. If you don't like it, please stop making irresponsible remarks. I just want to finish writing this Douluo fanfic completely. My mentality has been said to be a bit broken. . . . . I don't mean to accuse. Some readers pointed out problems and were polite, but some readers were very unpleasant and deleted them. But even if they were deleted, their mood would be affected. . It's really uncomfortable. It's not because I like it, I won't write about Douluo fandom, because it's Douluo fandom that gets the most criticism. I reward myself as a helmsman. I spent two months writing it, reading books, subscribing, and all kinds of materials. I spent four to five hundred yuan. Now I don't have a penny in my account. In addition to liking it, I also want to buy more cat food for the cats I raise. It's really hard to write fan fiction. There are too many fixed ideas. Some people like it and some hate it. Please be kind to fan authors.

"Supreme Sword Book" There is no woman in the heart, the god of nature draws the sword The first page of the sword book, forget the sweetheart The second page of the sword book, cut off the infatuated soul The third page of the sword book, kill the god of love with a sword The fourth page of the sword book, raise his hand to destroy the world of mortals The fifth page of the sword book, kill the old lover in anger The sixth page of the sword book, inappropriate lover The seventh page of the sword book, close the heart and lock the door The last page of the sword book, protect the one you love

In your Sword God inheritance, you feel that the early breakthrough is too fast, so you deliberately restricted it?

It's so beautiful!

Xiao Wu is quite beautiful