Wudang Yu Daiyan

Dear author, I helped you recommend the book in Qidian Martial Arts Circle. Come on, but the past life of the protagonist you wrote is not very good. It is best to let the protagonist completely integrate into the world of Heaven and Dragon Sword, rather than from the perspective of God.

After signing the contract, I can rest assured to support it. Although the update is slow, it will not be interrupted and will not be eunuch. I also point to this side job to make some small money. After all, life in Beijing is too difficult~

All kinds of pseudo-science conjectures about martial arts, the sources and inheritances that are forced to be close to reality are all messy. Brother, where are you writing your thesis? The first few supporting actors describe three or four chapters, a long section of popular science, with no actual content. You actually promote the plot! Reading your article, the first few chapters gave me the feeling of watching a documentary. "Into Martial Arts, the Inheritance and History of the Divine Fist Sect" Most people are not that sophisticated when reading novels, and are not even curious about how many ways to write the word fennel for fennel beans. Do you understand what I mean? Most of the logic in the article is self-consistent. There is no need to write it in too much detail, especially the supporting parts. Just write it in a rough way. The same is true for martial arts. The palm technique is strong and strong without casting. The effect is to open a monument and crack a stone. At most, an obvious acupuncture point can be added for positioning. Who cares how it stirs up the Dantian and how many meridians and acupuncture points it wanders away from? What's going on? According to what you wrote, if you practice in reality like this, can you really become a dragon and have regrets? So it is something that is inherently distorted, and there is really no need to be so sophisticated about it. Ordinary people will find it tiring to read, and if you have a different view from your own, it will be awkward to read, and it will have a serious dissuading effect. It is recommended that the author change this popular science style and promote the plot more. It is useless to fix these too detailed things.

😠😠😠You've been on the street for a year,,, and you still recommend fucking new books,,

I feel very uncomfortable. I don't know where the saying that women cannot practice Nine Yang comes from. If this is true, then wouldn't it be because of the problem of Nine Yins causing disasters in the Nine Yin Scriptures that all have become women? It's ridiculous, it's ridiculous

Chang Geng enlightens the Ming Dynasty, blessings and misfortunes arise naturally; The confusion is in the sky, and the murderous calamity has been accomplished; The seven stars gather together, and the universe goes retrograde;

It's rare to see well-written martial arts novels. You have to persevere. I'll give you a monthly ticket.

After reading a few chapters, I never imagined that an old man with a physical disability and a strong mind who had lived for more than 60 years👴🏻 could actually turn into a funny man in one life.

Everything else about this book is okay, but the protagonist's funny character makes me sick to death. I can't stand it anymore. Goodbye.

The author's literary talent is extraordinary, but the description of martial arts is too detailed and too much. For me, who is a bit impetuous, this affects the perception a bit. It's a personal opinion, so I hope you can forgive me.

Have you recommended a book that you haven't updated for a year? Is this world so outrageous?

I hope this book won't rely on Zhang Sanfeng's entire martial arts skills on the Wudang Nine Yang Gong. That stuff from Zhang Zhenren's cultivation of immortality can be used as an enlightenment.

I hope to see more traditional martial arts parts. I feel like the style of the painting is not right if I laugh and laugh nondescriptly. Please give me a boost, the author.

All kinds of parents are short-sighted! Various author's own speculations and origins! These are really old lady's foot wraps that are smelly and long.

How should I put it? It's wrong to say that the author is probably an old bookworm. The sources of various martial arts allusions are clear and he has his own routines, but success or failure depends on this. The various allusions are also written in too much detail and take up a lot of space. It's too tiring to read.

Huang Shang's three thousand ways hide a Jiuyin! Quanzhen King Chongyang won the Nine Yins in the Huashan Sword Discussing! Wang Chongyang lost a bet with Dou Jiu Sheng and then had Jiu Yang! When Zhang Wuji gets Jiu Yang, won't he still have Yi Yang Finger! Yiyangzhi is the Duan family's Six Meridians Divine Sword? The martial arts of the Xiaoyao sect? Qiankun and Douzuan are very similar! There are also dragons and elephants!

By the way, have Chinese dead people ever used the word jade broken? Isn't it just for Japanese devils?

I saw that Zhang Sanfeng deceived the secret of the protagonist... He died of poison...

Just like this, I have lived for decades! On a live dog

The writing is well-founded, but not enough to read.