A Queen Fell from the Sky

I feel that the writing is quite good, the writing style is on point, the emotions are delicate, the daily life is interesting, there are ups and downs, and there are no bugs. Come on, author. Can the male protagonist show his strength?

The best thing about a novel is the beginning, everything is new. When the ending first appears, the book loses its charm, at least that's how I see it; Romance is difficult to write, among which single-female protagonists are the most difficult to write. Party struggles are okay, after all, everyone has their own turn and their own HD ending; But the author The author always likes to make a taboo: instead of letting the heroine go through disasters to create the heroine, he lets the heroine go through disasters to shape the heroine. The result is that the character is sympathized with by the readers, and the readers want her to be the heroine. Party strife naturally does not matter. Everyone can be the heroine, and indeed they are, and this will not make the readers uncomfortable. But it's not very smart to write a story with a single female protagonist. After all, no one likes to see the knife of their favorite character, unless the author can ensure that everyone likes the female protagonist. So the best way is to not create a single female protagonist if it is not necessary. Make the supporting role facial and the protagonist three-dimensional. After all, you are not writing a literary work; I almost guessed the ending of this book myself. It is a waste of time to read it. After all, the heroine you created is still too thin. I can't get that point, and I haven't had Su who only appeared a few times. The characters are three-dimensional, The advantage of supporting roles is actually a disadvantage in a novel with a single female protagonist and no party fighting. Come on, author

I came from Station B and have basically finished reading it. How can I say it, the writing is really great! The characters are very three-dimensional, very delicate, and very attractive. There are not many characters, but the characters are all full-bodied. The logic is strict, the plot has ups and downs, and the emotions are also very delicate. And the writing is great too! It feels great!

Finished reading. Although as some book friends said, the male and female protagonists were a little depressed after confessing, but what they said was reality. Although it's not necessary for a novel, I think it's okay if they will be together. This makes the novel look more vivid and real. Depressing but looking very moving. I feel that this book is very well written. Come on, author! ! ! Although the male and female protagonists are not as perfectly portrayed as in some novels, a fictional character can make people's hearts flutter. For example, the female protagonist in "From 2012" is so perfect that it really made my heart flutter just watching it. But the male and female protagonists of this drama are not perfect, but I am also very moved, because they are more like real people. Although there are no poisonous points caused by reality, at least their thoughts are normal.

Brothers who can't stand it, you can start this book from Chapter 100. Apart from the appearance of some characters, the previous chapters do not have much impact on the development of the story. The first 100 chapters mainly talk about how to resolve the gap between the male protagonist and the female protagonist (life span and traveling through space). This main line is interspersed with some sadistic and daily plots. Of course, this book is still interesting. The author must have wanted to write this book well. It can be seen from the first hundred chapters that there are tears and laughter, love and sadism (there is also a main plot of the second grade)? . But to be honest, one hundred chapters is too few and not enough. The reason why some people can't stand it is because the author of Sugar and Knife didn't control it very well, making it very depressing. Even before the 100th chapter, it's hard to conclude that the heroine likes the hero. Come on, the author, and handle the plot well and sprinkle some sugar. This book cannot be a heroine, so don't abuse it, and don't have any underworld manipulation like the heroine leaving the hero because of his memory. This kind of plot will only make the book die faster. After all, there is a lot of pressure in society now, so reading novels needs to be more relaxed. It doesn't matter if the chief author writes well and forgets the main plot, as long as he writes about candy, he will definitely not die.

To be honest, I think this book is really good. It's amazing.

I like Anna the most, Anna Segao. The author's writing style is excellent, his ideas are clear, and he has both knives and candy. I'm a bit obsessed with it. I can't read it now. It's too little. However, lust is tempting, and the author is easy to understand 🤓🤓🤓🤓. The fantasy of a single dog, this book can be said to be "a story about the author's crazy abuse of dogs in front of a single dog, making candy", simple daily warmth, simple old sp, simple illusion of life. I have understood the true meaning of life again (you should eat and sleep, the social animals should not change, everyone goes back to his own home, everyone finds his own mother, go to bed early, and see you in dreams)

It's so uncomfortable. The further you get to the back, the less likely you are to see anyone. Maybe because most students have started school this week, the popularity feels very low. If there is anything that is not well written, please point it out as much as possible and I will revise it if I think it is possible. This book is estimated to take more than 300,000 words to be released at the beginning of the month. It took so long to write, alas! It's very frustrating, there is nothing, there aren't many words in the first place. But I'll try my best to persevere. It's not easy to sign the first book. Sometimes it's really hard to play alone.

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The brothers are very good-looking and may be depressing at first, but after chapter 100 it starts to get sweeter.

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I want all the heroines, not just one. Wouldn't it be nice to have a harem?

How can I put it this way? I've been feeling a bit underwhelmed when reading novels recently. This book made me feel like it again. In terms of the three elements of the novel, the characters are quite broad. I've just read a few books about the devil, and it seems that the devils have been more... Uh... Kind? There is also an XP system to create a demon king, and the demon king is even stupider, but in general the characters are okay; The plot is also very good, I won't say that it feels very little, it is basically just right, and there are not many shortcomings such as sudden breaks, but it still makes people feel unfinished, which is good. The plot is not cliche, but novel, so to speak; Then the description of the environment is really good. I haven't seen the description of the environment in a novel for a long time. To be honest, it is also very well done. I haven't seen it for a long time. I especially like the car accident part. It is very good. It is the fourth novel that I think is very good.

This book is so touching. 😍

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On New Year's Eve, it just broke through 3,000 collections. I hope it will be more popular in the new year.

I saw Chapter 84, I can't hold it back, please support me It's so interesting and exciting, come on

No, ah, sir, I paid attention yesterday and you finished it today

There are only 70 days until the college entrance examination. After hesitating for a month, I decided to put it down and watch it again during the holidays 😢

I ordered it all. It's so beautiful. I don't know if I'm too stupid. I always cry when I look at it.

Congratulations to the author for finishing the book🎉🎉Can I ask when the new book will be published?

This book does not seem to have any poisonous points so far, but I am still looking forward to the next plot. Come on, author.

The author is indeed a single heroine, right... Then I'll give it a look and support it.

The author, I have my opinions and suggestions here. The author can think about it, because I found that the author's direction is a bit cracked. From the comments, it seems that although the author has a single heroine, he seems to be leaning towards an open ending. Let me tell you my opinion. I think this book is really well written, and the author also felt at the beginning that the single female protagonist really didn't want to change her mind, which is really annoying. There was a book before that had a single female protagonist that was really well written and had no evil points, but it was changed to a harem because of the comments. It really felt very tasteless. Now let's talk about the good and the bad. First, after all, the author verbally promised that there will be a single female protagonist and he really shouldn't change his mind easily. As a reader, I actually compromised with the author because I am considered a double clean among single female protagonists. In the latest chapters, the male protagonist kissed Su Lian and I accepted it. After all, this book is one of the few high-quality books in my book. As long as the male protagonist doesn't change his mind, that's fine. I just hope that the male protagonist can be tougher and not accept it passively. Let me talk about the ending that the author wants at the end, but I don't know what ending the author wants, so I will just talk about what I think is the best of both worlds: I think it is best not to have an open ending. The open ending here refers to the open ending of the harem and the single heroine, because generally open endings are really regrettable. , And I actually feel that this kind of thing is a bit unflattering I think it can be like this: because this book has a single female protagonist, I think it will end with the single female protagonist as the real ending. For the harem, I can actually write an extra chapter after the end, or write an ending 2. This way I feel much better than an open-ended one. (I don't know and I didn't express it clearly. If not, I hope the author will reply) [This part will talk about my thoughts on the current plot] It is about the male protagonist. In other aspects, I don't think there are any big problems. The main reason is that I feel that the male protagonist is really too weak. I really feel that I can give him some kind of identity. Otherwise, every time I don't give out dog food and the plot is going on, I really feel that the male protagonist is so powerless. It seems very frustrating. Without strong strength, unless the male protagonist's IQ can make all the angels and demons play tricks on each other, similar to the protagonist in some strategy articles, otherwise it will feel that the male protagonist is weak and powerless, which is very frustrating. The second part is relatively small, it just mentions the plot. Mainly the first part, because I remember that the author seemed very determined to have a single heroine when I was still a seedling, and he didn't feel as indecisive as he does now. This is normal. After all, novels are written for everyone to read, and they have to be catered to more or less. There is no need to affect the author's own thoughts. If it doesn't work, you can really do as I suggested. Maybe I'm selfish, but I really hope the author sticks to a single female protagonist, a true single female protagonist. Part of it is because I don't want good books to be ruined. After all, I have seen many books collapse due to swings and various reasons. ✿Finally, I really hope that the author can carefully read my comments and reply. It will always be better for readers and authors to communicate with each other✿ 🙏🙏🙏

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So it's over?

Get fat and come back and see if you tell me it's over? ? ? People are stupid

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