My Own Game World

I actually finished reading the first sixty chapters of this book in just half an hour. It was basically a quick read. Why is this happening? Because to put it bluntly, the author's writing style is a little bit different. It's like a complete running account... In just sixty chapters, I have been repeating the routine of killing monsters - upgrading - killing monsters - upgrading - killing monsters. Of course, you can zoom in to see it all. Most of the main plots of online novels are first abbreviated and then follow this routine, but they are abbreviated: the description of the scenery, the creation of the characters, the emotional changes of the characters, and the supporting plot of the supporting characters. But you have a single line from beginning to end, repeatedly defeating monsters and upgrading, and the overall description is completely "bland"... It's like chewing wax. Spend more thought on the advancement of the plot and the shaping of the characters (including supporting roles), and improve your writing skills so that you can control the story~~ You can add some "NPC" stories to the single-line advancement to relieve one-sided reading fatigue and create some funny characters Or if you put some effort into writing some jokes and complaints about equipment notes, the overall plot will tend to be light-hearted, humorous (of course, it can also be the opposite, and the writing style will be more realistic and heavy). In short, every method should be used to make the plot interesting, and interesting is good to watch.

Dear author, come on. I'll give you two monthly subscriptions. Don't write to those idiots. You write well. Come on.

A game that can be brought into reality, or a game where the protagonist is alone. Obviously, he can choose the master who is equivalent to an immortal cultivator, and he has his own way in the real world. But there is an inexplicable fighter who is also a "powerful oriental fighter". Please don't just play games! Knowing that things in the game can bring back reality, the prospects of a mage are infinitely bright. Who dares to explode with a roar from the almighty mage? Reality is not a game. There is no balance. The power that Master Fa can use can be infinitely amplified! Black holes, two-way foils, and gravitational waves are all concepts that can conceivably be realized using magic. Resurrection, invincibility, teleportation, creation, Master Fa can be as omnipotent as communicating with God in reality. As for the fighter, boxing? Legs? Qigong wave? Explosive attack power strengthened tenfold? Hundred times? A thousand times? Ten thousand times? The attack comes with blood-sucking, paralysis, thunder, fire and ice poison? Train your body to become extremely strong, harder than a diamond? Can the physical body withstand nuclear bombs? Then what? Crossing the void in the universe? Moving at faster than light speeds? Arriving at Proxima Centauri in a year? How long can you live? How long do you plan to live? How do you get the energy and nutrients your body needs? Absorb cosmic rays? Every time you go to a new destination, you have to spend several years, decades, hundreds, thousands, or even tens of thousands of years in the universe. Is it boring? Looking at the master next door, as soon as the portal opens, he is in the right place. Are you envious? Are you jealous? Do you regret it? The creativity of this book is not bad, but the author did not put himself into the perspective of the protagonist at all when writing the book. He did not consider the future of the protagonist at all, and it failed to give people a sense of immersion. Comprehensive evaluation: hard to swallow

Neither public nor private protagonists should spread extraordinary power. Selfishly, who will share the power? For the sake of social stability, why should we share power? Can China dominate the world by sharing this? They are still insignificant in the face of hot weapons, and it is not time for the international situation to change. The protagonist's actions will only make the public security unstable, possess great power, and have murderous intentions.

There is one thing to say. I read it before and then gave up. Now I read it for a while and then gave up. I really don't understand how the author managed to make all the parts that should be interesting seem boring. It looks awkward, you know😠

What will the future bring the power of martial arts to reality? It's so fake. If you have power, will you share it with others? So fake

If I had this kind of attack power that could destroy an entire province, I would have ruled the world a long time ago, and I would still be playing house here. This kind of attack power could wipe out all the armed forces of the earth in a few hours at most. When the time comes, who else can touch your relatives? With your mobility, a nuclear bomb or something, you are faster than it, and a nuclear bomb does not explode instantly, it needs to be detonated. This thing must be constrained by electronic signals, whether it is remote or a machine that is installed in advance to set the detonation time. To put it bluntly, a small electronic pulse can turn it into a dumb bomb. Ice magic is even more awesome. It can directly freeze the nuclear bomb and directly turn it into a dumb bomb What kind of protection and transaction are necessary here? In the face of absolute strength, it would be awkward to play these games.

It looked like it was like an ancient novel, taking the family, chickens, and dogs to heaven. This way, it would be better to sacrifice the parents at the beginning. Sure enough, those starting point orphanages are not without reasons. Many authors have a hard time controlling feelings and family affection. I am so disappointed with this book, I hope the next book will be better

In the real world, I hope only the protagonist has super powers

The method of spreading extraordinary power in reality is really awesome, with strength that is not afraid of dozens of nuclear bombs. . In the live broadcast, he pinched rocks, poked stone tables, and even competed with ordinary people. Anyone who wants to embark on the road to becoming a god should not feel ashamed.

It was okay at the beginning, but later on when his strength was exposed in reality, it didn't look good, and he felt like a different person! Some and some of their ideas are childish! ! ! Like a primary school student! There is no such feeling as before! ! ! Farewell! I don't want to read it, it's boring!

I can't stand Chapter 5 anymore. This is not an insult to my IQ, it's a hammering of my IQ to the ground.

The government looks like a fake. The protagonist rides a shared bicycle to an uninhabited mountain, causing an explosion with the power of a rocket launcher, and then the protagonist rides away without incident.

How many people have been asked to quit because of their career? Anyway, I am not familiar with the fighter profession and have no interest in it.

Seeing that the protagonist has been preparing to teach others his extraordinary abilities, this is a serious point. I hope the author will think clearly.

I hope there will be two female protagonists, otherwise I always feel like something is missing (o)

Let's just write about the tower of elements. Aren't there a few bases that we haven't written yet? That's a really good book to read.

A book like this means that there is only one extraordinary protagonist in the world, or the protagonist's extraordinary ability is different from others (for example, the protagonist practices the Immortal Cultivation Method that leads directly to Da Luo, while others practice the Nine-Yang Divine Art Zongyun Ladder...) It would be better if the protagonist develops alone silently, instead of pretending to be slapped in the face every day, where the mentally retarded are looked down upon by passers-by. . .

If you see the choice of profession, you will be defeated. If you don't choose the Master in the Western Fantasy game, you must at least choose a knight profession. If you are unconventional, choose a fighter. Cloth armor, unarmed, and professional heavy-armed warriors are more reliable than this.

I have an adventure. I must grow to be invincible in the world. Give yourself N trump cards. Cultivate your own power and achieve absolute control over your own territory, even if it is secretly. Then slowly promote extraordinary powers and form various extraordinary organizations. Put yourself as the supreme leader (secretly) and still recognize the state power openly. If necessary, you can evolve peacefully.

The name "Fighter" sounds too low, 😃 why not say: Ding! Congratulations to the player who changed his job for the first time and obtained the special and unique profession "Apostle of Light". Introduction: Wherever the light in the world goes, there is also my legend. Covered as "Light Apostle"?

This is the only book I've read where the main character's sister is taken away from her. It's awesome.

Do I disapprove of spreading in reality, or is that the problem? Although public security control can change the world structure, to put it bluntly, it means replacing a group of people to rule the civilians. The only difference is that the lives of civilians are less valuable. No matter how strong the people in the ordinary world are, they will still be scum when facing the state machine when they break the law. This is not necessarily the case in the extraordinary world. Some people say that it is enough to be an extraordinary person who sends a law enforcement certificate. The problem is, is the damage caused to civilians by battles in the extraordinary world and the impact caused by criminals in the ordinary world? How much distribution of benefits does this disruptive force have to touch? Nuclear bombs cannot destroy the protagonist, but it is still very easy to destroy a country or even destroy the world to the extreme. Especially those people abroad who have always had a sense of self-superiority will let it go?

What the hell? Why just refuse to upgrade the mage? I don't understand your so-called ranking algorithm.

There are so few realistic plots, it's too boring, there's no place to show off, and it's too boring. The fighter is so good, why is he a mage again? 🤭 I want to take a bite of everything.

It's quite naive. If a thief comes to your house and burglarizes it in 2021, your house should belong to a government official.

Shouldn't I be the Shilipo Sword God?

It's moisturized. It didn't feel like much at first. After watching it for two hundred times, I felt inexplicably depressed. It's moisturized.

The front part was good, but after his niece had a problem and told everyone about it, I didn't want to watch it anymore. I still like the extraordinary behind the scenes or the things happening behind the scenes when he changes his vest! Forget it, don't subscribe anymore

After reading Chapter 139, I feel that the more I write, the longer I write, and the logic becomes more and more confusing.