The Game Comes to Another World

It's a very good creative book, but I was poisoned by Chapter 54. When you see a stranger, you just save it. You just have no defense, so forget it. You saved him, and then he assassinated him with a backhand. If it weren't for the equipment effect, you wouldn't have died? I'm going to kill you. You're asking why they want to kill you. I'm really numb. How can you be so funny? I can't bear it. I saved someone's life, but they killed me with a protection skill, which is 2 lives. Is this your reaction? What if he can't beat him? I want him to die.

Chapter 50: Persuading to Quit The previous writing is very good, but since collecting beads, the protagonist's IQ has plummeted. The logic is confusing and the intelligence is touching. A great idea was ruined by the author. It is extremely poisonous when it comes to saving people. This is not a question of whether the Holy Mother is the Holy Mother or not, but a question of a person with normal logical thinking ability and a mentally retarded person. Book friends have already said more in other chapters of this chapter, so I won't complain and take my leave.

If you say the novel is not poisonous, let me count the poisonous points for you. I was very happy to read it at first, because even if the protagonist made some small mistakes, there was no one in the forest, so I didn't realize his true nature. Then - I met the bounty hunter and saw that he was more than twenty points taller than me. I went to save him with the Holy Light. Then the bounty hunter woke up and gave the protagonist a knife, and the protagonist immediately wasted a heart stone. This is the first one, and then after that - he met a girl in the forest. He obviously wanted to prevent people from knowing that he had such good food, but he was completely unprepared for the girl. He gave him bread and candy. After the girl revealed her true identity and her force level was much higher than him, the protagonist actually felt warm that the girl didn't rob him, instead of being afraid that this man was really good at disguise! Then at the critical moment of life and death, he was stunned by the beauty of the girl! More than once! ! ! Also - when he changed his job, his deputy position actually changed to chef, and he thought that a chef would be more useful in this world where there is nothing. I just want to say that the ingredients are not as good as you. It is so difficult for them to live, and they still have to spend more to buy your food, which is at best more delicious! What's even more poisonous is that one of his main professions changed to a mage. The skills he learned were all life skills such as food creation and water creation. He didn't even want to learn a fireball! And because I wasted all my gold coins learning skills, I couldn't change my profession to a warrior!

I originally thought I had found a good book until I read Chapter 54 and was immediately poisoned by the poison of this book.

I can't stand it anymore. The protagonist has been trying to die in the early stage. Nowadays, the novels either try their best to die or become a real dog. Identification at a glance, happy color

It's not good-looking. I wrote a bunch of perfect settings about the protagonist's advancement, but they used some extremely poisonous plots to destroy them. It's just more poisonous. Not to mention the author's various ways of reducing the protagonist's intelligence and cracking down on the protagonist's plot are too poisonous.

The first half is very well written, My Fairy Grass. I particularly like the game settings in the book! But the plot collapsed after the nightmare world. In Chapter 20, the protagonist was promoted from the four flames to a celestial being, and then crossed the line to kill the legend! The game map after level 40 is mentioned in one sentence... To sum up, the plot accelerates too fast, and the grass jelly turns into hay and is poisonous! I don't know if the author didn't want to write because of his poor grades at that time, but I feel that if he doesn't want to write, he won't write well. This kind of writing is really not as good as the eunuch.

8 Votes a day recommend it to the best one

This book started out okay, but then it got weird

It's actually better than some novels, but! Some places are poisonous. Holy Mother does not represent bad people.

The place where you encounter injured NPCs really falls short of standards. I almost died, this is a life and death feud. After you finish talking, you should shoot him in the face with a series of shots. Whether you can kill him is one thing, but whether you can do it at any time is another thing.

Why did the number of votes not increase even though I voted for recommendation?

I can understand that this is to find an enemy for the protagonist so that more plots can be written, but it feels too far-fetched. Have you forgotten that the protagonist is a person from another world who came to this world with the forest, and he never hides his identity? The forest first appeared in this world for a short time. It is not surprising that no one discovered this tree. After all, the time was short. In a forest with countless trees, it is unlikely to encounter a special tree. What's more, under normal circumstances, no one can talk to a tree. It is normal for only one person to find it by chance. (What's more, in Kang Lai, the protagonist has probably lived here for a long time, so it's not surprising to find trees) Isn't it surprising that the protagonist has a lot of bread? Who knows how long the protagonist stayed in the forest before coming to this world, maybe a few months, maybe a few years. The protagonist has shown the strength to ignite a secondary fire. It is easy to survive in the forest (others don't know that the protagonist is very weak at the beginning), and how much bread can be earned over time. I feel that saying that the protagonist has stayed in the forest for a long time and praised a lot of bread is more convincing than saying that the protagonist has a strange ability to store and release a descending place. (For example, in order to lead the story to the city lord taking action against the protagonist, he forced himself to find a reason to explain it. Typically, there is an effect first and a cause later) Isn't it normal for a person who came out of the Advent Land to own many things from the Advent Land, and the Advent Land disappears, and he doesn't care if he tells some information? It's just that I didn't expect it to appear a second time. (After all, the Land of Arrival is always a weird thing, who knows if it will appear again) Wouldn't it make more sense to put it this way? If the protagonist's lavishness is too exaggerated and he appears to be too wealthy, some powerful people are tempted and want to take action against the protagonist. Although it is a bit cliched, it feels more acceptable.

Now that I've pinned them to the top, it's up to you whether I will fall off the fan list. End of January

Too verbose and said useless things

I couldn't bear it after reading Chapter 101. The plot was bland and made me depressed. The main character was a bad guy but not a good guy.

Summary: If you don't deserve it later, you'll slap yourself in the face.

Why should you give bread to a girl? Why? Bread is not delicious. However, this is not the point. The point is that you cannot afford much food, and it is non-renewable. Out of selfish thoughts, why should you give it to her? Why?

The author no longer had control over the book. By the end, it had nothing to do with the game at all. The character foreshadowing in the early and middle stages of the article completely disappeared. When I was writing about the world later, I almost thought I was reading a Shuangwen Infinite novel from Invincible. . . It feels like the author is writing whatever comes to mind now. . Is the outline complete? .

Isn't this cover the cover of the plane elevator?

The idea is great, but after reading the beginning, I was a little bit confused. I hope that after the author improves his skills, he can rewrite the outline and rewrite it. Otherwise it would be a pity! Because the author's small flaws are not the kind of flaw that makes the writing so bad. It's more about the rhythm of the plot, the arrangement of the focus, the brain circuit, the three views and other more internal issues. In fact, the author's writing of the battle scenes is quite ups and downs. The game's numerical design is also very exciting as it unfolds bit by bit.

I think this book is good, thank you! ! ! ! !

What about that little skeleton? Didn't it evolve? Why haven't you disappeared?

. . . . . . . I think I've finished reading this

An original mental patient travels through the civilized world of heaven and earth, leaning towards the dark side. I would like to recommend this new book, everyone, please take a look, thank you!

It's not surprising that he is the author of the game world by himself. It turns out that this author has written so many books, why is it that someone who has been in the game world for 21 years can still write as well as a novice?

It's a pretty good novel, you can read it at first glance, but the constant fighting and escalation will make you a little visually tired and mentally exhausted after reading it for a long time.

The beginning is similar to an online game novel. I skipped to Chapter 60 in a boring way, and then I started to explain the background and see the people. Are you afraid of driving away readers when you write like this? You can obviously be creative.

The beginning of the new book is very exciting. I recommend it with 11 votes and keep it.

Does anyone remember who Maria is and which chapter she appears in?