
Battle Through the Heavens: Reborn as Liu Xi
斗破之重生柳席
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- Fan Fiction
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- 4y ago
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- Qidian
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My Personal Reading List
This list is mainly for urban fiction, but I also include some other genres: female-oriented fiction, historical, fantasy, xianxia, anime-inspired, and sci-fi. No supernatural horror, though. I'm a bit of a coward, so no horror, thanks.
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Battle Through the Heavens Fanfiction + Original Novel
If I see you read this without bookmarking it, I'll turn my battle energy into a horse 🐎, go to your house, and smash your windows~
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A Curated Collection of Fanfiction (Including Japanese Anime and Manga, Novels, and Games)
After years of watching anime and reading novels, we all have plenty of regrets and hopes. Fan fiction can make up for those regrets and give us what we wished for, but its quality can be all over the place. Here are some stories I think are pretty well written.
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Liu Xi's inner monologue (1)
I, Liu Xi, practiced Dou Qi at the age of four and became a Dou King at the age of eighteen. I am still a noble alchemist and am destined to become a Dou Emperor. As long as you hook your fingers, there is no woman you want! As a rich and handsome man from another world, how could he play the trick of "he will be affectionate when he sees a beautiful girl today, and he will be affectionate and affectionate when he sees a beautiful girl tomorrow when he sees her pity?" Just like a goshawk will not fall in love with a sparrow unless the sparrow has the potential to grow into a goshawk.
Hostility and anti-inflammation, alas, it seems that no author can break out of this framework, and I am so tired of aesthetics. . . In addition, if you can't create an original heroine, then you will steal the original heroine to build a harem. It feels like a real stretch. No matter what, this thing is not authentic. Isn't it good to practice with peace of mind? Just draw a clear line with anti-inflammatory. You have to fight against it. To become an emperor, you have to steal the strange fire. If you are not an alchemist, you can't live. It's too much and annoying to watch. Finally, just like other works, the quality of the protagonist in this film is not much higher than that of Xiaoyan.
About the heroine
It turns out that book friends have the biggest opinions on Xiao Xun'er. Since book friends don't like it, why not try Zi Yan (*• . •*), Which is the most popular among book friends?
After searching on Baidu, our protagonist looks quite unique doge
I think the author of Qidian probably has no daughters, and has never even seen the relationship between fathers and daughters in real life. The symbol for a father-in-law is that he dislikes his son-in-law. No matter how hard he beats the son-in-law, he has a kind of pathological doting and possessiveness towards his daughter, which is really uncomfortable. At least based on my life experience, the elders around me hope that their daughters will have a good home, and they are basically friendly towards a satisfied son-in-law. Where do so many threats come from, are you unhappy?
If you are able to write a Dou Po fan, you should probably write it because you like this work! No matter how you look at the pig's foot described by the author, he is a despicable person, right? In order to reasonably take advantage of the opportunity and the girl to eliminate inflammation, just kill the person, huh? ? ? I was stunned when I saw this operation. This kind of character and temperament are a bit unacceptable. Forget it, that's it, abandon it.
This book has one biggest poisonous point, but the rest is okay. The protagonist is a brother-supporting demon, a family demon, a female demon, and a female demon. I am very happy to accept it. After time travel, I still support the whole family, and it will be even more outrageous later to raise an empire. No wonder other authors know how to sacrifice to the sky, but the author of this book does not, and even adds a younger brother to him. The number of words is embarrassing.
Oh, I think the battle took too long. I heard people talk about the Yunlan Sect's Life and Death Sect before, but I haven't reacted yet. The impression is that it is just the inheritance left by Yun Potian. The burial place of the previous Yunlan Sect masters just pushed Nalan Yanran to be the King of Dou, so I don't worry about it. After searching, I found out that there are so many theories. I was skipping to read the later part of "The Great Master" and didn't notice that Tudou added settings. The Gate of Life and Death is actually a treasure of the universe. When it was intact, it was a sacred treasure. It was also a very precious thing in the universe, so it also contains the aura of the universe, that is, a large amount of source energy. Nalan Yan then actually broke through to the Supreme Saint Grade Heaven. I knew this but didn't really notice it because of the Gate of Life and Death. Good guy, this thing was actually left by the Immortal Emperor. This one is no thicker than the thighs of Tuoshe Ancient Emperor. I guess Nalan Yanran is also the protagonist, right? If she had been born a few years earlier, there would be nothing wrong with Xiao Yan. Because of this, some people actually think that Yun Potian is a fighting saint. It's just that the original Ling Ying praised a genius. I think this is pure nonsense. The First Lingying needs to be distinguished from the Ancient Clan. Although he is from the Ancient Clan, he only has the vision of a Dou Huang. Although he is of high origin, he does not reach the level of the real high-level of the Ancient Clan. Second, the Yun Lan Sect was a first-rate force in the Northwest Continent during Yun Potian's time. The Yan League in the original book was the overlord of the Northwest Continent. Under normal circumstances, a one-turn Dou Zun in the Soul Palace would be enough to kill them all, not to mention that the Yun Lan Sect was only a first-rate force at the time. So looking at it this way, Yun Potian must have broken through Douzun, just like the head of the Tian She Mansion was also Douzun when it was a first-class power. Generally speaking, I think Yun Potian is estimated to have one to three stars in Douzun, and will not exceed five stars. They are similar to the weaker pavilion masters in the normal Sifang Pavilion in Zhongzhou, otherwise it would be impossible to achieve a good reputation in Zhongzhou. Xiao Yan was only known to people in the early days of Zhongzhou because of his grievances with Feng Lei Pavilion. He became famous in the mainland because he trained eighth-grade elixirs and won the championship at the Alchemy Club. So I tend to think that Yun Potian is a three-star Dou Zun. He probably rose up mainly because he obtained the Gate of Life and Death. However, he may not have enough luck and was severely injured and died early. He did not practice enough to fully master the Gate of Life and Death. After all, even if the gate of life and death is damaged, it is not something that a Dou Zun can figure out. This is also a normal situation. It is not so easy for the protagonist to rise out of a small place. Xiao Yan would have been killed by the Soul Palace if he was not a crazy cheater like a potato. If you think about it carefully, many things in the original work are the protagonist's halo and luck, otherwise the enemies will be sent one by one like monsters and upgrades, and they will only engage in fueling tactics without crushing them. Yun Potian has the fate of the protagonist, but the fate of the protagonist is miserable. However, I suddenly found that Dou Po fandom seems to be easier to write. Since the original settings have been patched, there is no need to follow the path of the original Xiao Yan, and the value of Xiao Yan will be greatly reduced. Goldfinger can be set to copy the characteristics of Pokémon. Even without a supermodel, the protagonist can stand on the same starting line as a real genius. For example, it is completely possible to copy the poisonous body of disaster. As the strength increases, Dou Zong doesn't have to worry about it before. He can easily rise to the Nine-Star Dou Emperor with the help of the Poisonous Body. In the early stage, I joined Canaan Academy and lived a life while improving my alchemy skills. Then I used the Nine-Star Fighting Emperor + the Poison Body of Disaster to kill Han Feng and get a Sea Heart Flame. After that, I exchanged it with Yao Lao (physical persuasion) for Burning Jue, and then I just used to help him resurrect + Han Feng's soul. Or as a calamitous poison body + an alchemist's induction to find the Netherworld Poison Fire Ganges River, right? Is this strange fire that can complement the poisonous body of calamity and suppress the poisonous body also in the Ganges River? Then I found Master Tianhuo's Poison Pill method, and then used Han Feng as a tool to get the incomplete version of Fenjue to devour Hai Xinyan. With two different fire suppressions, I can break through the Douzong. This alchemist is about the seventh level, after all, the original book also talks about how different fires warm and nourish the soul. Then he went to Yaolao to make trouble. Or if you really don't want to try the strange fire, you can copy the three-flowered eyes of the green snake, and I think it's okay to go to the Sky Snake Mansion with blue scales. Just be careful not to die on the bed (just kidding). This will make you more sexy! I've started writing, but unfortunately I don't have time. Is there anything you want to try? I wonder if this wave means potatoes? Just like Douluo, after all, for such a big IP, it is a good thing for someone to write fan fiction.
If it's me, go through time travel and see if there is a golden finger. If you are from a family, practice hard. If not, you'd better find a way to eat soft rice 🤓 In the early stage, it's better to eat Yafei's soft rice. It's easier, because as long as you have somewhere to invest, Yafei will usually invest, at least with your early capital. The source is enough. You don't need to think of ways to refine medicine or something. Don't say that Yafei's qualifications are not high and will be of no use in the future. You have to talk about it in the later stage. The early stage is at least much better than you, who is not a fighter, and at least she has money. If she owes these favors, it is best to develop them in the early stage. . As for going to eat Xiao Xun'er's, don't think about it. It's difficult, and there is a Dou Emperor next to you. If you are suspected of doing something wrong, it is probably gone. Behind you is the Little Medical Fairy. I won't go into details. The upgrade is much faster than you. In a few years, there will be at least Dou Zong's helper, and then there will be Yun Yun. In the early stage, there will be at least Dou Emperor's helper, let alone the Soul Palace. Wait until your sixth or seventh grade alchemist is talking, and then the Soul Palace will probably see you. Dare to be interested in you, and then there are Xuan-level skills, which are obtained from Yun Yun, then Qing Phosphorus, as long as there are snake monsters, the upgrade is relatively fast, Medusa depends on the situation, and finally Zi Yan, treasure hunting in the early stage, Dragon King, Dou Zun, half-saint thugs in the later stage, not to mention, there are some Dou Saints, and then as long as the Dragon Island is unified, those Dou Saint old dragons who ran away will return, except for the ancient tribe and the soul tribe, there is no fear at all
I never felt that Xiao Yan and Yao Lao were written as villains. I always felt that the author wrote the protagonist as a villain. The author said that Xiao Yan has been suppressed all the time. How could it be the same as the character of the original work? But the Xiao Yan written by the author seems to me to be quite normal. ① The protagonist has always suppressed Xiao Yan. Let alone Xiao Yan, I hate the master too. Character ② Xiao Yan is still the same as the original work, he respects his teachers. The scroll of the ancient clan's fighting saint is not used on the protagonist out of hatred. ③ Using strange fire for medicine, doesn't it show that Xiao Yan respects his teacher? Although one of them is willing to fight and the other is willing to suffer, it is quite awkward to see that the protagonist is a villain and has been bullying others. You said that Xiao Yan's character has changed because he has been suppressed by the protagonist, but you wrote out how he has changed. You cannot say that his character has changed just because he hates the protagonist. Wouldn't it be better if you wrote about how Xiao Yan became crazy and crazy at the beginning, or used the scroll to kill the protagonist, to save the alien fire instead of saving Yao Lao, or even simply took refuge in the Soul Palace or the Soul Clan. Xiao Yan looked quite cool before, but when he came out, it looked awkward. I don't believe that if the protagonist and Xiao Yan's roles were changed, the protagonist would be better than Xiao Yan. The protagonist took Xiao Yan's resources and tried to trick Xiao Yan. He took advantage of Yao Chen's injury and took advantage of the situation (don't tell me, resources are only for those who are virtuous, and don't talk about changing medicines. One is willing to fight and the other is willing to suffer. Generally speaking, from the beginning, the protagonist felt that Xiao Yan was a threat and kept trying to trick him. This matter was initiated by the protagonist first. If you want to write that Xiao Yan knew that the protagonist used his resources to trick him, then it makes sense, but Xiao Yan doesn't know; there is also the matter of changing dressings. What is the difference between selling masks at high prices during the epidemic? When the country punishes you, why don't you say that one is willing to fight and the other is willing to suffer? It is obviously taking advantage of the situation.) Except for the part involving Xiao Yan, the rest of the story is pretty good. Let Xiao Yan exit as soon as possible, otherwise the protagonist will think he is the villain. This is not a rant, but an opinion. Please take a good look at the author and think about it (if you think I made a mistake, just pretend you didn't see it). I don't think Xiao Yan and Yao Lao were written as villains. I always feel that the author wrote the protagonist as a villain. The author said that Xiao Yan has been suppressed. How could he have the same character as the original work? The Xiao Yan written by the author seems to me to be quite normal. Yes, ① the protagonist has been suppressing Xiao Yan, let alone Xiao Yan, I also hate the protagonist ② Xiao Yan is still the same as the original work, respecting his teacher, and the ancient fighting saint scroll is not used on the protagonist out of hatred ③ exchanging strange fire for medicine, doesn't it all show that Xiao Yan respects his teacher? Although one of them is willing to fight and the other is willing to suffer, it is quite awkward to see that the protagonist is a villain and has been bullying others. You said that Xiao Yan's character has changed because he has been suppressed by the protagonist, but you wrote out how he has changed. You cannot say that his character has changed just because he hates the protagonist. Wouldn't it be better if you wrote about how Xiao Yan became crazy and crazy at the beginning, or used the scroll to kill the protagonist, to save the alien fire instead of saving Yao Lao, or even simply took refuge in the Soul Palace or the Soul Clan. Xiao Yan looked quite cool before, but when he came out, it looked awkward. I don't believe that if the protagonist and Xiao Yan's roles were changed, the protagonist would be better than Xiao Yan. The protagonist took Xiao Yan's resources and tried to trick Xiao Yan. He took advantage of Yao Chen's injury and took advantage of the situation (don't tell me, resources are only for those who are virtuous, and don't talk about changing medicines. One is willing to fight and the other is willing to suffer. Generally speaking, from the beginning, the protagonist felt that Xiao Yan was a threat and kept trying to trick him. This matter was initiated by the protagonist first. If you want to write that Xiao Yan knew that the protagonist used his resources to trick him, then it makes sense, but Xiao Yan doesn't know; there is also the matter of changing dressings. What is the difference between selling masks at high prices during the epidemic? When the country punishes you, why don't you say that one is willing to fight and the other is willing to suffer? It is obviously taking advantage of the situation.) If you just treat him coldly, it will be over. Except for the part involving Xiao Yan, the rest of the writing is very good. Let Xiao Yan exit quickly, otherwise the protagonist will think that he is the villain at first glance, and the quality of the protagonist will not be much higher. This is not trolling, but giving opinions. {"NickName":"Book Friends 20190604163436699","UserId":331970375} go to the author and take a good look and think about it (if you think I made a mistake, just pretend you didn't see it and don't troll)