The Immortal Body Starting from Konoha

There is a problem with the timeline. Madara saw the stone tablet in the Uchiha basement, then broke with the village, went to war with Hashirama, lost to Hashirama, bit off Hashirama's flesh and blood, then created White Zetsu in the cave, and then created Black Zetsu. It seems like this. Is there anyone with a big hand?

The rolling Yangtze River flows eastward, and the starting point draws out the shadow of fire. After spending more than a million dollars, I turned away and my imagination is still there. The introduction is really impressive!

I think this is the author in our minds

Hahahaha, Konoha destroyed the whirlpool and even licked Konoha, I laughed.

The Naruto movie the author watched was definitely a pirated version, and basic common sense was completely messed up.

I don't understand why the rope tree should be written to death.

Danzo and the Third Hokage were both disciples of the Second Hokage, and Danzo was also a high-level official in Konoha. How could he not know about Maruboshi Kosuke? What's even more funny is that Danzo thinks that the Third Hokage's hard power is not as good as his? This author, Kuro Danzo, is really drunk. Many parts of the writing are very distorted. It feels weird, like a novel where the plot has been forcibly modified.

Wasn't the Uzumaki clan destroyed by these ninja villages working together? Konoha's role is not small, right? Why did you go to Konoha?

It's disgusting to read. The preface doesn't match the follow-up. It was said earlier that someone who wants to travel the world and become a Hokage doesn't want to care about the office stuff. Later, when he becomes stronger and stronger, there will be some reforms. He also sees ordinary people suffering and shows compassion. He has a hand in everything. The main character in the previous article has no emotional fluctuations. After writing the character, the emotions become richer and richer. Did you change the author or did your family undergo a big change that changed your personality? Can you write two styles in one book? If I really can't finish writing it, I'll end it. Forcibly inserting the plot will only make people more disgusting the more I watch it.

Good guy, look at the introduction, a Uzumaki from the Kingdom of Uzumaki has his own country, how can he become a member of Konoha? When the Kingdom of Whirlpool was destroyed, Konoha, the traditional ally of the neighboring country, didn't send anyone to help you. Konoha even betrayed its alliance, and they still licked it with shame. Isn't it cheap?

The more I write, the more rubbish I write. Before I learned the Immortal Method, I could barely read it. After I learned it, if anything I wrote came up, I used the Immortal Method and my own cells to consume my 10 years of life and make several power banks. I'm so convinced. The male protagonist also wears a female mecha and fights on catwalk. . . . . . .

A novel that I'm not interested in reading after reading the introduction…

It was okay before Chapter 200, but after the main character faked his death, he completely fell apart and didn't understand. He said that he was okay, but he showed up immediately. Mifune knew that you were still alive. He knew that you were still alive, and that you had shown up at the Iron Country when you moved to Horai Island. How could you guarantee that no one would betray you, and not look for Tsunade, Fugaku and the others? You couldn't trust them but instead trusted Mifune and the Iron Country people? It made them sad and desperate, being manipulated and exploited by Tomamaru. Sarutobi Hiruzen also changed from an old politician to a stupid and sweet elder. I really vomited. I guess the author didn't write it. The number of words in the back is too low, and the appearance is too ugly.

How could Hyuga Hizatsu go out of the village to do a mission with the protagonist? The Hyuga clan doesn't even have bodyguards for the branch family. What a nonsense.

The plot of Xiaobai's pretense and slap in the face that was written ten years ago is vividly reflected in this book. I never expected that such writing would exist now. .

The timeline is too confusing. Various characters, ages, and appearance times are all messed up. According to the fact that the Uzumaki Kingdom has not been exterminated yet, Konoha will be more than ten years old at most. The author opens his mouth to say that Hanzo is 40 years old? How much does Matt wear 20? Uchiha Fugaku 14? In that case, the third generation must be 40 like Hanzo. Now, from the beginning of the plot, the third generation died and Konoha was 60 years ago. There are still about 45 years. Damn, that's awesome. The third generation was over 80 years old when he died and he could dethrone Orochimaru. Is he truly the strongest Hokage? ! ! , Uchiha Fugaku would be 60 years old if he were alive, Sasuke is only 14 years old, awesome, born at 46 years old, he will get stronger with age. The author is just a novice who has read the Naruto catalog, and wrote a bunch of random things.

Wasn't the Uzumaki family killed by Konoha? Why don't pig's feet take revenge?

To put it simply, it is a small white text with Hokage skin hanging on it. It is still the same as 15 years ago. Just change the characters in it.

This is written like a loser with no power. It's so damn vicious.

Just watching a fan! Mr. Zhuan, professor, everyone is serious about it. Where can I go to read the original work? It seems real, just enjoy it!

What's written in the back is really fucked. Let's not talk about the clones. After the battle, he had to pretend to be dead, and the Akatsuki organization from another time and space also came to fight. The protagonist pretended to be dead and addicted. What's even more annoying is that Danzo can return to Konoha after being charged like that? ? ?

This introduction Xiao Tobijian is stupid hahahahahahaha

The recent protagonists have been disappointing. They say they are tired and don't want to care about the affairs of the ninja world. Is this a sign of exhaustion? While the ability is growing, the ambition is weakening. Isn't the power of the entire ninja world stronger than three small islands? If you don't understand the protagonist's mental journey, your ambitions will be turned into dust by just a little gossip. Wouldn't it be a waste to give this opportunity to time travel!

I can't stand it anymore after reading Chapter 100

It's outrageous. This book is actually on the award list.

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It's embarrassing to have the same mudra on both hands

Does the author have a single heroine in this article?

When I looked at the update time, I stopped watching it three days ago.

I have to say that Japanese culture is really strange. After you challenge a strong person and lose, it is considered an honor for the strong person not to kill you but to give you a title?