My Finger Witch

To be honest, I don't understand what you want to write. You can talk nonsense about the rich and powerful when you talk about the partner. If you want to write a fantasy, write it well, and write nonsensical things to act as a mystery? This is because I really don't see where the fantasy is, just the black fingers. After reading Chapter 50, I only saw the smell of bullshit romance novels from twenty years ago, and I almost got embarrassed. You can still have an affair after a breakup. A female detective wants to send you to prison. You are not big-hearted. Do you want a harem? If you don't know how to write, can you put these aside and write a fantasy plot? Can you write any more outrageously, brother?

I felt disgusted after reading this novel. The protagonist's character is flawed, he is not like a scientist, and he always fails to grasp the key points. If he can follow you through time, don't you want to find out the secrets? Especially when you are still threatened, and your girlfriend's article is disgusting! One is to use, the other is to want a better boyfriend. If you can't keep the chip, give it to someone else. You are willing to give up the golden finger. At most, don't trade on the spot. Or, take a chance and kill the insider, especially Qu who has special power.

Pig's Knuckle has a personality problem, he is timid, panicked, and resists the supernatural. Even after traveling through time, he still resists? The reaction to being cheated and blackmailed is cowardice and a sense of luck. The character creation of pig's feet is a problem and I suggest the author change it.

Hypocritical protagonist, if you don't want a golden finger, can the author give this golden finger to someone else?

What are you writing about? You are here to write novels for people to read. You are not just writing messy things according to your own preferences.

I'm a bit stupid, I'm afraid something will happen to the jewelry, so I can just throw it away. There is also no description of the ecstasy of becoming a capitalist after traveling through time. There is also a villain appearing in the protagonist's ring. Such a fantasy thing, I really don't know that the author can write the protagonist so hard. The main character is also written to look like a loser. What's so interesting about writing like this? It's a waste of capitalist background settings! !

Cast a small role Zhu Mingming, 25 years old Background: The fourth in the family, his father is the vice president of the city chamber of commerce. The family owns a grain store, two meat factories, four vegetable markets, seven hotels, dozens of restaurants, and tens of thousands of acres of land in surrounding counties and cities. Experience: I was fond of metaphysics when I was young. I ran away from home and wandered with a mage for five years before being found by my family. Now I help my father manage a hotel and two restaurants.

Please correct me. After Cao Wei usurped the throne, Liu Bei's regime was officially called the Han Dynasty, and was called "Ji Han" in history. The political goal of Ji Han was to defeat the puppet Wei and regain his old capital. Calling it Shu is an insult...

The first part was okay, but I felt frustrated for most of the plot and the character issues.

Why are all the recent Qidian novels full of typos?

After reading more than ten chapters, the more I read, the more boring I get. The irritable man is reborn through time travel. The plot is very dull, as if it doesn't matter whether he is a time traveler or not? The operation of Iron Finger fans, it turns out that the indigenous soul merges into Iron Finger, and seems to want to kill the protagonist and take back the body. How can I put it, it is not satisfying

The author himself feels a little confused as he writes, and the power system is also relatively vague. As a time traveler, the longer I live, the more tired I become, but I have obviously gained strength.

It's so disgusting. There are too many tricks and it's boring. An inexplicable jewelry actually comes with a curse. I found that it was too fast for the protagonist to kill, so a bug came directly and the bloody hand couldn't clear it. It makes me sick

Just skip the first dozen pictures and it will look better

Let me make a speech, just say two things, the front is fine, and the back is crotch lifting. . Could the protagonist be more awesome? Could the plot be more exciting?

The writing is actually quite good, fantasy is just like this

The first fifty chapters are not bad, but there are some shortcomings, but the pace is so fast that you don't have time to think about these things, and it won't work anymore. The plot and character settings are a mess. Since Mystery, a lot of people have written about the senior time travelers, which has no surprises, no new ideas, and is extremely boring.