The Marquis of Weining of Great Ming

Let me just say one thing... The protagonist has just figured out how to time travel, and when he sees the funeral announcement on the road, he immediately says, "Zhu Li is dead?" You were a civil servant before time travel. I just want to know that civil servants don't interview? Should you go in for an interview and say to the examiner, old men, ladies and aunties, hurry up and give me the questions? Can you please be a little more logical?

What you wrote is too cowardly. The protagonist looks like a retard.

The main reason why this book is not popular, I personally think, is that the main character is too bitchy and submissive. The businessman looks down on the protagonist and forces the protagonist to break off the engagement. It is also written that the protagonist does not want to marry the businessman's daughter, but later runs to save the businessman's son; secondly, the female assassin puts a sword to the protagonist's neck several times and forces the protagonist, but does not report it later, and even goes to save the female assassin.

Alas, it's just nonsense. I can't stand it after watching two of them, and I don't understand the history. Zhu Yuanzhang died not long ago. In the early Ming Dynasty, the status of businessmen in Mingzhu was very low. The protagonist traveled through a man who had passed the exam. Although he had not passed the scholar, he was still a boy. He was in his teens and had a bright future. In that environment, the status of the son-in-law was too low and he could not pass the imperial examination. Only useless people will do it. The whole society looks down upon it. Author, you are writing a historical novel. Although there is a time-travel plot, it cannot be written blindly. In the early Ming Dynasty, a low-status businessman forced a prosperous scholar with a bright future to become his son-in-law. Anyone with some common sense knows it's impossible

The beginning of the writing was so confusing that I just traveled through time and space. How many chapters should I write about being a son-in-law? His father-in-law is not a very good person, right? And his own mother wants her son to be her son-in-law? Is there such a routine? The introduction said that his mother is a strong woman, would she do this? The status of a son-in-law is so low. In ancient times, if there was a war, many sons-in-law would be forcibly recruited into the army. They would not be able to hold themselves up outside. Moreover, the woman's family was not a powerful family, but an ordinary businessman family. So when I look back and think about my father-in-law and the protagonist, my mother, the characters can't stand up

I don't even understand what you are writing about in this book? What are your plans for the protagonist's future? The main plot line is not clear at all. Sometimes there is a princess, sometimes a heroine, a hammer here and there, and all kinds of nonsense that are not consistent with historical facts. . . Was this book written to launder money? 🤔

I honestly said it was too poisonous and I forced him to quit from the first chapter.

I almost dropped my phone when I read the beginning, thinking that the reader is mentally retarded!

The protagonist is a civil servant? Are you insulting a civil servant? Our country's civil servants cannot be said to be the most astute group of people, but they are also a group of people at a higher level! As long as the protagonist can pass the civil service examination, your book will be a hit!

I read two chapters and I can't stand it. I'm an idiot.