I Attained Immortality in Great Ming
我在大明得长生
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- 714k Words
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- Historical
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- Song-Yuan-Ming Dynasties
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- 5y ago
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The poisoning occurred in the very first chapter, and the Empress forced the Emperor to kneel as punishment. This generation of Chinese men was essentially ruined; they subconsciously considered it normal and even took pride in it.
What exactly are you writing? Are you trying to write about immortality in the Ming Dynasty, or about becoming a cook in the Ming Dynasty?
The opening and synopsis seem to have an interesting premise: one involves teaching science to achieve immortality, the other involves the Imperial Observatory and surviving for 24 hours. Then it turns out that the impurities are removed not by oneself, but by what one eats. And not only that, but they become the emperor's family's chef?!
What are you trying to express? Turning the protagonist into a cook and the ancient people into fools?
What the heck? Back to the Ming Dynasty to be a cook? That makes me want to throw up.
What do you want to write? The three golden chapters: the crown prince ate your food, the emperor ate your food, and the empress also came.
The main figures in the Imperial Observatory had the most reason to rebel.
The Ming emperors have killed your ancestors for eighteen generations, and you still don't rebel, you even cook for them... Are you out of your mind? Even though your soul isn't theirs, you still inherited their body. Aren't you going to avenge this blood feud? And you're even planning to grant Zhu Houzhao a long life? What do you think?
If I'm going to write about cultivating immortality, I should hurry up; if I'm going to write about romance, I should get it straight; if I'm going to teach the crown prince and emperor how to change the Ming Dynasty, I should hurry up! What kind of mess is this, all this rambling nonsense? Can't you at least have a main plot?
They managed to turn a typical wish-fulfillment novel into a rambling, mundane family drama. If I transmigrate and have a cheat code, I can watch you eat and sleep. Why are you even reading urban novels?
The story had a great start, but the protagonist was written too poorly; he was always working as a cook and cleaning up his father's messes. Why was the protagonist's father made so incompetent that he couldn't even make noodles? It makes him seem like an incompetent man who constantly causes trouble for the protagonist, which is very frustrating to watch.