I Attained Immortality in Great Ming
我在大明得长生
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- 714k Words
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- Historical
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- Song-Yuan-Ming Dynasties
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- 5y ago
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- Qidian
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The first chapter is very toxic. The queen makes the emperor kneel as a punishment. This generation of men in China is considered useless, but they subconsciously think it is normal and are proud of it.
What exactly are you writing about? Do you want to live forever in Ming Dynasty, or work as a cook in Ming Dynasty?
The beginning and introduction feel that the settings are quite interesting. One is about teaching science to gain immortality, and the other is about Si Tianjian and surviving for 24 hours. Then it turns out that the one who removes impurities is not himself but the food he eats. He just eats it and works as a chef for the emperor's family? . .
What do you want to express? Turn the protagonist into a cook and the ancients into a fool.
What the hell? Return to the Ming Dynasty and work as a cook? Make me vomit
What do you want to write about? ? ? In the third golden chapter, you write that the prince ate your food, the emperor ate your food, and the queen also came.
The protagonist of Qin Tian Jian has the most reason to rebel
The emperors of the Ming Dynasty have already killed eighteen generations of your ancestors, and yet you still don't rebel, yet you still cook for them... Are you out of your mind? Although your soul is not, you have inherited someone else's body after all. Why don't you avenge a blood feud? Are you still planning to give Zhu Houzhao a long life? What do you think?
If I want to write about cultivating immortality, I should hurry up. If I want to fall in love, I should hurry up. If I want to teach the prince and emperor to change the Ming Dynasty, I should hurry up. What nonsense should I write? A hammer here and a stick here and there. Is there some main line?
I just turned a cool novel routine into a short story about parents. There is a hook in time travel. I watch you eat and sleep. I'll read the urban novel. How about I watch what you do?
A good start. The protagonist is written as too low. He is a cook and wipes the protagonist's father's butt Why is the protagonist's father set to not know how to cook noodles? This makes his father an incompetent man who keeps causing trouble for the protagonist, which makes him very irritated The most important thing is that there are too many cooking plots. Who wants to see the protagonist who is a dignified practitioner become a cook? Not even the emperor's cook!