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Is the second male lead Xiao Di CP a scorpion or a Fei

The fate of the eunuch

Shennong Bennong. This book is slightly poisonous, logically disordered, unclear, made out of nothing, secretly written, and nonsense... Well, actually it's pretty good if you don't use your brain to read it, huh. . .

The author in my heart

This is your ending

I think this book is a bit tasteless and it's a pity to abandon it. You wrote it very well. The key is to contact the ancient times if the background is not good. Prehistoric + Naruto, no matter how good your writing is, it still feels weird to me when I read it, and I think your writing is not very good, and some parts are very nonsense. For example, a group of people traveled through time and space to hunt down a panda, and stuffed natural energy into food to make those who ate it gain immortal mode... I stopped reading the rest of the story when the protagonist found Chi You's feet.

The plot divisions are a bit uncomfortable, and then the plot is really a bit brainless. Uchiha Itachi is not like Uchiha Itachi, and Tsunade is not like Tsunade. The basic character is a bit broken, and it also has a little prehistoric background. Does he match the two themes of prehistoric and Naruto? It's written so joyfully that I basically know it. It should be a happy ending, everyone is laughing and laughing, and then everyone can live happily. I ran away, it's not suitable for me.

Although it is a funny article, some parts are too brainless. For example, Tsunade is one of the three ninjas of Konoha. She only met Hidan once and taught him his strange powers. Hidan is not a ninja of Konoha, so she is convinced.

The joke is a bit old... How old are you and you still have amnesia? And then there are the characters who are seriously OOC and sometimes inexplicably warm and passionate? In the end, the prehistoric era is really too fantasy-heavy. To sum up, this half-sham, half-trouble-maker, half-passionate, half-romantic, half-fairy character is really not suitable. It's a bit abrupt. To sum up, the author's writing style barely manages to mix them together... It's okay (some of the spoofs are really not good)

The author can take a look. First of all, your characterization is not vivid enough. I can tell you're trying to portray one. Pandas are very silly. Dark belly. In fact, this is mainly reflected in the dialogue. It is not reflected in the details like writing a composition. Second. Your plot is too fast. To put it bluntly, it is better than a running account. And there is something wrong with your own thinking as a character. You have to write according to the thoughts of real people. It's not that you just take a look out of curiosity, regardless of the danger.