The Akatsuki’s Mascot

Is Xiao Di's (the second male lead) love interest Scorpion or A Fei?

The fate of eunuchs

Shennong himself is a farmer. This book is slightly toxic, illogical, nonsensical, fabricated, subtly manipulative, and full of nonsense... Cough, actually, it's quite good if you don't use your brain, hmm.

The author in my heart

This is your ending.

I found this book somewhat bland and uninteresting, but also a bit of a letdown. The writing itself is quite good, but the problem is the choice to connect it to the prehistoric era. Prehistoric era + Naruto—no matter how well you write it, it just feels off to me. Besides, I don't think it's very well written; some parts are particularly far-fetched.

The plot segmentation is a bit painful, and the plot is really a bit mindless. Itachi Uchiha doesn't seem like Itachi Uchiha, and Tsunade doesn't seem like Tsunade. The basic character settings are a bit broken, and it also brings in a prehistoric background. Do the prehistoric era and Naruto really fit together? Since it's written in such a cheerful tone, I basically know what's going on.

Although it's supposed to be a comedy, some parts are just ridiculously absurd. For example, Tsunade, one of the legendary Sannin of Konoha, only met Hidan once before teaching him superhuman strength. Hidan isn't even a Konoha ninja, you know. I'm speechless.

The plot is a bit old-fashioned... What era are we living in that they're still using amnesia? And the characters are seriously out of character. Sometimes it's inexplicably heartwarming and exciting? The ending, with the prehistoric world setting, is just too much of a fantasy.

The author should take a look. First, your character portrayal isn't vivid enough. I can tell you're deliberately trying to create a character who's both naive and cunning. This is mainly shown in the dialogue, not in the details like in an essay. Second, your pacing is too fast. To put it bluntly, it's only slightly better than a diary entry.