The King's Avatar: Blood Blockade Hunter

I only saw the part where the protagonist was one minute late for the hunter exam and killed someone and I didn't want to watch it. What kind of garbage character is this? Since the author borrowed the reputation of "Blood Realm Front", and the setting is still a disciple of the Blood Fighting God, at least the character image should be more positive. Even if he hangs around with Zapp for a while and becomes a bit of a loser, he won't turn into such a scumbag. Whether it is the Blood God himself or Lebra who joins Zap, they are all existences that really sacrifice their lives to maintain the stability of the world. But the author has this kind of garbage that kills people at will?

I just read this book. What attitude does this book have towards the 🕷 brigade? Should I join it or should I kill it? Like the one written in a foreign land, it was all tragic and tragic. I felt really happy reading it 🙂

The author's writing is very hunter-like, but I personally feel that the character of the protagonist is too unpleasant, and his character is not like the enhanced type set by a hunter, and his abilities are very boring.

Chrollo is not strong to begin with. His strength lies in the weirdness and diversity of his telekinesis abilities, rather than his aura. His frontal combat ability is relatively weak.

One moment he cares about his companions, and the next moment he is indifferent. How can a person with indifferent feelings care about his companions? Isn't this contradictory? There are so many people fighting to protect the world on the Blood Blockade Front who are the protagonist's companions. However, the protagonist turns out to be a psychopath and a murderer, right? In the Blood Blockade Front, he is probably the first one to be eliminated by Lebra. Don't be funny.

Why don't you write the main plot well? It's all about pretending to slap people in the face, meeting lolita, and meeting beauties. Can these routines be reduced? I hope the author can concentrate on writing the main plot, and just intersperse some in between, instead of three chapters in a row.

I haven't watched Blood Front, so I have no desire to read it.

Give the author some advice 😂, don't give up and keep writing, and then start preparing the outline of the next book. The author's writing style is okay, but he is too cautious about the original plot. Anyway, you may not wait until the traitor comes out and slaps you in the face. Let yourself go and write as you like! I still like hunter fanfics, but if there are suggestions for a book that should focus on hunters and incorporate elements from other games or anime, anyway, you can fill in the hole of Dark Continent as you like, just write one piece in it. If you have more stories as a blueprint, it will not be as stuck as what you are writing now. Come on!

If the character of the male protagonist does not change, he will really be discouraged. He is just a manic lsp street kid. He never does anything without thinking. He beats him when he meets the examiner. He kills her in ordinary physical conflicts and verbal conflicts. He looks at beautiful women with lewd eyes when he sees them. He smokes and just goes about his life. Where is the personal charm, where is the shining point.

The protagonist is so old yet still so childish