
There Is Indeed Something Wrong with This Shadow Clone
这个影分身果然有问题
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 431k Words
- Genre
- Light Novel
- Audience
- Male
- Subgenre
- Fan Fiction
- Updated
- 4y ago
- Source
- Qidian
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Hit by corpses and ghosts. You should know that the body of the fourth generation is not Naruto's. Naruto's is the Eight Diagrams Seal
I couldn't stand it anymore in Chapter 2, and in order to set myself apart, I took away all of Naruto's aura as the protagonist.
Author, let me ask you one thing: Who is the protagonist?
Newcomer, don't read it, abandon the book. After more than 100 chapters, the protagonist is not the shadow clone. This is seriously inconsistent with the title and the title of the book I came to read this book just to see the shadow clone protagonist. What the hell is happening now? Just like a novel about being reborn as a beast, the protagonist transforms into an adult and feels the stench of a beautiful woman.
It's all original content and you can write it with a hammer. I'm impressed with you.
The whole chapter is copied from the original plot. Is it so easy to write a novel now?😒
Now that I see it, let me tell you my opinion. Generally speaking, this book is basically a replica of the anime, and it basically doesn't reflect the impact of the protagonist on the original plot. The immortal duo part is okay, the other parts are basically restoring the anime plot. Personally, I feel that the addition of the protagonist will definitely have more than that impact on the original world (for example, the appearance of the protagonist, Sasuke should have asked Kabuto about Naruto when he met Kabuto in the first high school entrance exam, etc.) The author can think more about it. In general, I hope that the unimportant original plot can be briefly mentioned and more original plots can be added.
I completely followed the plot, and most of the parts were just text descriptions from the original work. I might as well watch the anime.
To be honest, your original plot is too much and too watery. I came here to watch the fanfic. Otherwise, wouldn't it be better if I just watch the anime?
I don't even know what the meaning of the protagonist you wrote is. Follow the original plot completely. The only value of the protagonist's existence is to act cool, and then whether Team 7 should be beaten or not
Why is there so much in this original plot, Renaissance Renaissance?
Too watery, 80% of the original plot
Menma without a big spiral wheel is not authentic. Look at Menma in the Naruto movie. A spiral wheel flattened Konoha.
It's the same as the original work, no need to read it
Please, can the author please ask me if I have watched Naruto? Why do you use Substitution Jutsu again as a space ninjutsu? It's still the kind that can directly change places with others. If you shouldn't come here, you can't watch it.