Douluo World Ninja

Forget it, unsubscribe. Others update two or three times a day, but this day's one update is inherently slow. I took two days off before and owed two chapters, so today there should be a total of three chapters. How about fun? It's normal to ask for leave after all, it's a holiday, but I can't bear to lie like this. I'm also drunk on those book friends who said they owe two chapters. What about today?

The sexual transformation into a rich man is in Douluo. Such a theme is really good. It is completely interesting. The author's setting is really to my taste. I admire your imagination. The plot design is really good and I don't find it boring at all. The two chefs were ecstatic. The setting of the strength of the Ninja skills is very reasonable. After all, Tomie is still a ninja in the end. Personally, I think there is no problem with the conversion of Ninja skills and Soul skills. When I watched Naruto, I felt that the other gods were awesome. Well... Not only the other gods, but also the eye skills of the other kaleidoscopes are really cool. I am especially looking forward to the way Tomie will shock everyone when he releases Susana! He must be handsome! Fujiang should be the most handsome man in the world. People (whether men or women) will be affected by him at the first sight. They can't help but fall in love with him, crazily want to possess him, and finally kill him. This should originally make people have a kind of morbid love. In my opinion, the author should have greatly reduced this characteristic of Tomie. It is charming, but has little impact on people's minds. On the contrary, the small mirror is more charming, but it does not produce the urge to destroy. Some people may say that this is the reason why the protagonist only bears Tomie's name! But I think it's okay. It's originally a fan, and the character is determined by the author. This setting is quite good. There is no need for all Tomie to be vixens. The only thing I can't stand is the Master. I think the Master is really too stubborn and I can't stand it. Although he treats the protagonist well, I just have a very bad feeling about him. There are personal subjective reasons, but they do not affect the overall reading. Finally! It looks great, I hope it can be updated soon! ! ! Come on, author! ! ! !

The author writes very well and the subject matter is very novel, but there are too few updates every day.

I don't want to read it anymore. You only have one update in this chapter. It's very annoying.

I really like this kind of behind-the-scenes flow, but it's a pity that it's no longer updated.

Don't you have a little more clones? Where is Madara?

Let me write down my thoughts after seeing this I read other people's book reviews and then thought about what I read. To be honest, it's a bit hard to describe. Looking at some book reviews, some express that this book is not very good, and some are good, but somehow I think it is okay, but the logic may be a little low. If you are an old bookworm or something, I guess you need to take your time. Is the clone vest style okay? To be honest, I think it might be better if the main character's name was Sasuke. By the way, let's talk about the heroine's gang. Theoretically speaking, there is no heroine in the book Clone Vest Ruma 🤔 The plot may be a bit delayed, but the main reason is the author's update speed. Don't know what? I have a feeling that the author has actually written it and just posts it regularly every day. The specific content will not be spoiled. If the first impression of this book is not particularly friendly to you, I suggest you not to read it. As for poison, I don't think it's poisonous. Because I read too many books, something poisonous or something will make me feel twisted in the first place. This book has not made me feel any discomfort so far.

The pace should be a bit leisurely, otherwise you might think you're skipping a chapter when you look at it.

This is Douluo World, do some scientific calculations.

Taking the name of Fu Jiang for nothing has nothing to do with Fu Jiang.

Is this a clone harem? I feel very uncomfortable at the end of the writing. Why is it that the author wants to write about the kind of mastermind behind the scenes but doesn't have that level?

I suppressed the feeling of scolding and read more than 300 chapters, because from the introduction, including the first dozens of pictures, I think it should be the kind of behind-the-scenes plot. I think the main plot development in the following may be that the protagonist withdraws from the plot line and lets his trumpet lurk among various forces and characters to cause trouble and achieve his own goals. Then the protagonist improves himself outside the plot line and directs his avatar to make trouble. But what I see is a protagonist without a clear goal. He just keeps playing different roles, allowing the main body and the small role to participate in the plot and story line. There are too many emotional entanglements, and I wish to include all the named female characters in it, and often every role is involved. I took turns writing a paragraph in each clone, and then returned to the protagonist. I took turns writing a paragraph in each clone, and then returned to the protagonist. This routine was repeated over and over again. The jumps in the book were too great, but there was no coherence. If the protagonist's purpose is to obtain destiny, then, in this book, the identity Tang San, who is the destined protagonist, does not have many scenes. The protagonist wants to get the destiny, but he does not spend too much money on Tang San, the destined protagonist. Instead, he describes many emotional entanglements between the protagonist and his clones and many women in Douluo Continent. As an author, you must at least understand The positioning of Chu's own work is okay. He turned a fantasy fan novel into a romance novel, and it's just such a routine. You love me, I love him, he loves me, I love her, and I don't love her. Polyamorous relationships are at odds here. I ask you to sit back and figure out the positioning of your book! Some of the ability settings are also weird. I want to ask the protagonist, have you ever watched Naruto carefully? If you are just hearing about it, then don't write it in the book. Looking at those anti-IQ settings, I feel embarrassed. The protagonist can even open the reincarnation eye, but you tell me, he still can't open it? Complete Susana, this is not bullshit. What makes me most intolerable is using the strongest genjutsu like another god to sacrifice soul beasts. It's not about the difficulty of the operation, but just this method, it feels like a waste of resources. Okay, I'll stop here first, and go to bed first.

Tsk tsk tsk tsk

If you write this book well, your grades will definitely be very good, but you just do it, pretending to be cool and writing well. You don't write more. You write about palace battles for more than ten chapters in a row. Now you want to be a eunuch, so just do it.

Uchiha Itachi traveled through Douluo, opened the Sharingan, awakened the three great artifacts, killed all the Shrek Seven Monsters, established the Uchiha clan and the Konoha Ninja Village, and became the Hokage in the Douluo world. Come and take a look. Book title: Douluo: Uchiha Itachi God, click in to read it. Naruto's mother and Konan are also in Douluo, and all members of the Akatsuki organization are resurrected in Douluo.

The writing of this novel is getting more and more messy and bad. It is a fantasy novel and is written like a palace battle drama like Dream of Red Mansions.

It was well written before. Write down directly afterwards. What the hell am I paying to see this. It is recommended that you just read the first part without charge, and you don't need to read the second part. If the author can't write 800,000 words, it will definitely be finished. Because it has collapsed. The combat system has completely collapsed, and everything is supported by shock. What the hell was deleted directly?

I think when the battle between Wuhundian and Tiandou Xingluo starts later, Tomie can perform a wave of filthy reincarnation and then put on the expression of an Uchiha laughing wildly and shout "Look at it, this is the power of the Uchiha clan!" What does the author think?

It feels like Itachi's vest is broken. Although I know it's for destiny, the way it was written has the meaning of being a licking dog. Itachi should feel guilty towards Shui Bing'er because he killed Quan and wanted to make up for it, even if he was not the real Quan. Then Hu Liena misunderstood and the two women competed with each other instead of Itachi becoming a licking dog and the two women competed with each other.

Actually. . Douluo's combat power is actually quite rigorous Tang San was reincarnated from the world with the Tang Sect of Xishu to the Douluo Continent. He had memories and was a human being Dousi said that only a god king can retain his memory and only a god can ensure his reincarnation as a human In this regard, the Tang Sect of Xishu is obviously based on the real world and martial arts in the real world. In other words, Tang San's original world is based on the real ordinary world Aren't ordinary people who go to Douluo a god king? The logic is thorough and there is no problem

This book was really good in the early days, but now it has become mediocre because of the emotional drama. Although the emotional scenes are good, you can't catch a fool. You can update the characters appropriately. For example, Bo Saixi on Poseidon Island accepted a disciple who is talented in evil. The two outstanding goddesses in "Douluo Dalu" are one in the East (Bibi Dong) and one in the West (Bo Saixi). The representatives of the two major forces are the land representative (Martial Soul Palace) and the ocean representative (Poseidon Island). Wouldn't it be nice if they each sent their protagonists (the Holy Son of Wuhundian and the Divine Son of Poseidon Island) to compete in the so-called younger generation? Of course, the final result can be a loss for both sides or a tie, which will trigger subsequent plots. Isn't this good? The quality is also high. Another example is that Bo Saixi suddenly discovered that Bibi Dong actually... He expressed great contempt for this kind of behavior and then after experiencing some special situations, his feelings for so-and-so declined (I can't help but think of what Bibi Dong did to her, why can't I, Bo Saixi? She set an example for me) and the apprentice became more and more, well, really sweet. Then another example is when the gods suddenly looked at the lower world and discovered that there were many wonderful monsters. Some are afraid that these geniuses will threaten their status and want to eradicate them. Some want to protect them, hoping that these geniuses will repay them when they become stronger. Here, various factions have experienced chaotic wars between them, and the protagonist has also experienced a series of sexy operations and so on. At the end, after experiencing a big boss (the protagonist's vest), all the people in the world discovered that they were one person. Because of this big boss, their souls had to be dispersed. In the end, everyone united as one and defeated the big boss. Then he explained to these heroines or restored various vests and trumpets to live a happy daily life with these heroines. Finale If this routine is okay, you can borrow it at will. I have been reading novels for four or five years, and this is the first time I have posted such a long review. I really like this novel, and I hope the author doesn't end it badly or be a eunuch. I also wish the author good health and all the best. Also, I think the author definitely knows this routine, and the author definitely understands it better than me. But I suspect that the author is just a fool, just procrastinating, just relying on... (Quietly) Of course, this is just a humble opinion. If there are inappropriate words, I hope you will not criticize me (I made a little joke before, and was criticized by a group of SBs for being autistic) 😂

The author writes more about Tang San. After all, Tang San has the most destiny. You can get a few clones to be Tang San's friends, and if you don't mind, have a clone to be Tang San's girlfriend (it's not like Xiao Wu doesn't like Tang San anymore, after all, ninjas, for the sake of destiny, don't be shabby), and then use Tang San through the death of the clones.

He has written another book called Doupo which is being updated. Please be sensible and do not subscribe. It's really a scam. He's a eunuch at every turn. Others update twice a day, but he updates once every two or three days.

There is a reason for your poor grades. Most people don't want to read your introduction. Most people don't want to read this kind of stupid clone flow. I suggest you start a new book.

Are there any novels similar to this one?😫😫😫

The plot is all kinds of bad, and the jealousy is endless. The only thing that attracts me is the theme of the Douluo section. To be honest, I have always read the original version, support the author, and support the original version. However, because of this book, I decided to read a pirated version. The author's perfunctory attitude towards readers, this attitude towards updates, all kinds of unreasonable interruptions, delayed updates, less updates, and no explanation. This disrespectful attitude does not deserve me to read the original version. Just keep it.

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Oops, this subject matter is really good. I even read this book three times and felt that what he wrote is really interesting.

You say it's a good author, why does he always stop updating?