A Ninja in the World of Douluo Dalu

This is Douluo World, do some scientific calculations.

Taking the name of Fu Jiang for nothing has nothing to do with Fu Jiang.

Is this a clone harem? I feel very uncomfortable at the end of the writing. Why is it that the author wants to write about the kind of mastermind behind the scenes but doesn't have that level?

I suppressed the feeling of scolding and read more than 300 chapters, because from the introduction, including the first dozens of pictures, I think it should be the kind of behind-the-scenes plot. I think the main plot development in the following may be that the protagonist withdraws from the plot line and lets his trumpet lurk among various forces and characters to cause trouble and achieve his own goals. Then the protagonist improves himself outside the plot line and directs his avatar to make trouble. But what I see is a protagonist without a clear goal. He just keeps playing different roles, allowing the main body and the small role to participate in the plot and story line. There are too many emotional entanglements, and I wish to include all the named female characters in it, and often every role is involved. I took turns writing a paragraph in each clone, and then returned to the protagonist. I took turns writing a paragraph in each clone, and then returned to the protagonist. This routine was repeated over and over again. The jumps in the book were too great, but there was no coherence. If the protagonist's purpose is to obtain destiny, then, in this book, the identity Tang San, who is the destined protagonist, does not have many scenes. The protagonist wants to get the destiny, but he does not spend too much money on Tang San, the destined protagonist. Instead, he describes many emotional entanglements between the protagonist and his clones and many women in Douluo Continent. As an author, you must at least understand The positioning of Chu's own work is okay. He turned a fantasy fan novel into a romance novel, and it's just such a routine. You love me, I love him, he loves me, I love her, and I don't love her. Polyamorous relationships are at odds here. I ask you to sit back and figure out the positioning of your book! Some of the ability settings are also weird. I want to ask the protagonist, have you ever watched Naruto carefully? If you are just hearing about it, then don't write it in the book. Looking at those anti-IQ settings, I feel embarrassed. The protagonist can even open the reincarnation eye, but you tell me, he still can't open it? Complete Susana, this is not bullshit. What makes me most intolerable is using the strongest genjutsu like another god to sacrifice soul beasts. It's not about the difficulty of the operation, but just this method, it feels like a waste of resources. Okay, I'll stop here first, and go to bed first.

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If you write this book well, your grades will definitely be very good, but you just do it, pretending to be cool and writing well. You don't write more. You write about palace battles for more than ten chapters in a row. Now you want to be a eunuch, so just do it.

Uchiha Itachi traveled through Douluo, opened the Sharingan, awakened the three great artifacts, killed all the Shrek Seven Monsters, established the Uchiha clan and the Konoha Ninja Village, and became the Hokage in the Douluo world. Come and take a look. Book title: Douluo: Uchiha Itachi God, click in to read it. Naruto's mother and Konan are also in Douluo, and all members of the Akatsuki organization are resurrected in Douluo.

The writing of this novel is getting more and more messy and bad. It is a fantasy novel and is written like a palace battle drama like Dream of Red Mansions.

It was well written before. Write down directly afterwards. What the hell am I paying to see this. It is recommended that you just read the first part without charge, and you don't need to read the second part. If the author can't write 800,000 words, it will definitely be finished. Because it has collapsed. The combat system has completely collapsed, and everything is supported by shock. What the hell was deleted directly?

Forget it, unsubscribe. Others update two or three times a day, but this day's one update is inherently slow. I took two days off before and owed two chapters, so today there should be a total of three chapters. How about fun? It's normal to ask for leave after all, it's a holiday, but I can't bear to lie like this. I'm also drunk on those book friends who said they owe two chapters. What about today?