I Am Not a Great Heavenly Master

The writing is relatively smooth and there is nothing poisonous, but there are too many monsters and monsters. Halfway through, I realized that the protagonist is fighting monsters alone. How can ordinary people survive in this world?

After reading it, the characters and fighting scenes are well drawn, but there is no main line and the plot is too forced. It is almost 40 chapters and the world view is not shown. It is barely watchable.

After reading more than a dozen chapters, there is nothing too bad, it is just too compact. The protagonist is either on the way to defeat demons or demons. The author can add some appropriate daily transitions. After reading more than a dozen chapters, I felt that the ordinary people in the book were too tragic. They encountered monsters and monsters. They could only have great luck and meet a Taoist priest with real magic power like the protagonist to rescue them. If they couldn't meet them, they would be indifferent. It would be too bad. Here is a small suggestion for the author to add something about human nature and luck. For example, a person who spends his life acting for the people, just like the current police, can set up humanity to bless righteousness and hurt ghosts and gods. Humanity and luck represent the human race. Luck can be divided into many types. For example, the dragon qi of a dynasty can have the effect of being immune to all evil. Later, the author thinks about it. For example, if an official has dragon qi, his subordinates can have luck and official qi. To deter demons, there are also blue-green plague energy, white illness energy, red wealth energy, blessing red with purple, dirty energy gray, death energy black, and noble energy purple, and a series of other things. The follow-up plot can also be connected with a series of things such as the three realms of heaven, earth and people, why there are so many demons in the world, why there are so many demons in the world, there are too many things to write, the author should be a newbie, and his writing skills are okay at the moment.

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I can write a little bit about daily life, and there is still an imbalance between income and expenditure. Only 400 soul points are given to an eighth level. After reading dozens of chapters, the protagonist is either subduing demons or on the way to do so. He can be called the flat-headed brother in the spiritual world.

In a place like this where ghosts are everywhere, all the people would have died a long time ago. Just look at the pig's feet and there are monsters everywhere, there are cat monsters when you enter the village, and there are ghosts in the hotels. It's really hard to stand it. If the monsters and ghosts are really so dense, how can humans survive?

When you write a new book, tell me so that I can support you.

Brother, you... Pay attention to the rhythm, don't be so fast, write branch plots to promote the main plot, 😂 you are too fast in killing demons.

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