The Era of Divine Cards

How to say it! It doesn't feel right. I'm saying that the living space of human beings is being compressed, but when we go out into the wild, we're going to eat the weak! Killing people and taking wealth at every turn! The stronger ones don't need to do anything! Just stop and collect the toll on the only way back to the city! 90% Charge back to the city! If you don't give it, you'll die!

The author made the protagonist's plug-in too complicated, and a single fusion function would be invincible. What kind of optimization and advanced display are also done, which means that there is a lot less to write, and it also makes the novel not very good-looking, and it seems that the author has no ability to write ideas.

At first I thought, this unbundling mechanism is a bit too hasty. It's not easy to get back after losing a level every time. What do you think of others? Moreover, fusion seems to be a bit different from advancement. Even my sister thinks there is a problem. Are you really not afraid of being exposed? It feels like these things are difficult to explain.

The writing is good, please keep up the good work, author

The author only put together five pictures, including a series of operations such as showing off and being slapped in the face, being hated by women and hated by the suitors of beautiful women, saving the sister, taking the exam, etc. Goldfinger wrote it well, but his plot, can he come up with something new? Eight out of ten new books are like this. I'm tired of reading them already. I hope the author will work harder.

Everyone is mocking the protagonist, the plot is cliche, and your dialogue is hopeless.

I don't think the writing is good. In short, the main character in this kind of article does not have a down-to-earth study in school. The place where he always lives is either attacked by wild beasts or attacked by human traitors. It's all the same.

Once I see the halo of ridicule, I don't want to watch it.

This book clearly states that there are almost unlimited card types. It stands to reason that there should be skills like in Mystery. I want to change the restraint and so on. Every time I emphasize that perfection is only two levels stronger, I feel speechless. How can different skills be compared like this? Does the strength of physical skills and elemental skills depend on level? The author puts too much emphasis on level to highlight only It feels so good to have a protagonist who can jump through levels and fight monsters. The author should make it clear that different skills must be used differently by different people, and the description of card fusion is not clear. If you can only fuse two, someone must be good at speed, someone is good at strength, or something else. If you can't fight, just choose the level and whoever dares will win.

Hard pull hatred from the beginning? I threw up.

My sister, Kurogane Jiuxing, is an absolute genius, and she gave up going to school. If she goes to school and becomes an absolute bronze, can't she take care of her younger brother?

Look next door, others have much better settings than you, and they are more viewable than you. Your settings are too stupid.

The plot is really a bit NT, it's an old routine from hundreds of years ago, and you still want to strengthen it and integrate it? Isn't it embarrassing? SB actually dares to question the head teacher. Does he really want to be a peaceful society?

To be honest, I was attracted by the cover of your novel! ! !

Why do you want so many settings? It's better to just write about Fang Xiang's fanfic

You are not suitable for writing battle scenes. The more you are incompetent, the more your shortcomings will be exposed. Moreover, the protagonist is becoming more and more ungrateful. Now he is facing a big company. After returning to human society, people have more ways to deal with him. Don't blindly create contradictions, or your writing won't sound like a cool article.

The first update is on the shelves and I have no desire to subscribe.

How to explain the protagonist's golden finger? Doesn't anyone find it strange? The protagonist's magic card keeps changing, won't others suspect it? I looked at a dozen of them, and I wonder if there is any explanation behind them? I think other people's divine cards won't change much even if they are advanced? But the protagonist is a completely different card? Can no one see it? No one is asking, no one is coveting? ?