My Super Small Fantasy Kingdom

Looking at it now, I liked it at first, but later on, it feels like having a harem. There are basically no more descriptions of male characters. On the contrary, the number of female characters has been increasing, especially when you get to the goddess. Living in the same house, although the bedrooms are different, makes people feel uncomfortable. If only female characters are added in the later period, I suggest adding the label of harem. (The above opinions represent only my personal opinion)

I support not writing too much. There are too many good articles in the early stage, but in the end most of them fall behind. I hope the author has a firm direction and a better mentality. Lord, think twice before acting 🙂

The subject matter is quite novel, but the writing is not strong enough and sometimes the writing is very scattered. For example, when writing about business operations, there are always some group running games interspersed with them. I, who have never played them before, can't understand them at all. It feels uncomfortable to see a business operation going well and be suddenly interrupted. Isn't your main plot to run the Lilliputian country or save the world? Please run less teamwork, and when writing other things, there is a beginning and an end. You insert a sentence here and there, and it's really tiring to read.

Ask for leave every day. I object. I don't agree

Build a character collection building. The kingdom is currently recruiting new citizens to join. If you have a good idea in your mind, you can send it out and let me prostitute you for free (fog) As a citizen, any imaginable race is acceptable, even a life form created by you is no problem. The evaluation criteria for star rating are based on [rarity + strength + growth potential]. [For example: The last life of the last civilization in the universe is the last fire of the entire universe. Even if this little guy is extremely weak and has no growth potential, it is still a five-star level because of its rarity. Next is the template: [Name:] [Race:] [Rarity:] [Occupied population: (one-star 1, two-star 1, three-star 2, four-star 4, five-star 10)] [Level:? ? /? ? (One star and ten levels)] [Occupation:] [Basic attributes: force? ? Intelligence? ? Put up? ? Explore? ? ] [Feat - Name: Value] (Feat is a talent, similar to running fast, photographic memory, or fire magic talent like Phil) [Skill - Name (Active/Passive): Value ] (Skills can be acquired, such as fireballs. Similarly, they can also be passive skills, such as insomnia - debuff) (Several expertise and skills are acceptable, but not too many) [Mood:? /? ? ] [Physical strength:? /? ? ] [Introduction:] [Weapons:] [Armor:] [Props:] I don't know how many people will come, but this book also needs to grow up a little bit. I will always hang on this building, waiting for new citizens to join at any time. Sa, come on, use all the magical fantasies in your mind to let me prostitute you for free! ! (Fog)

I haven't read it yet, but from the introduction, are there only three or five people in Fantasy Kingdom? If a staff is as big as a toothpick, then the person must be at least as tall as a finger. In a kingdom as big as a palm, if the people in it are as tall as fingers, how many people can there be?

The so-called temporary means permanent, the author's words never have any character.

Gentlemen, I have a bold idea. Although their bodies are small, they have magic, so I think it should be possible. What do you think?

If the villain and the protagonist don't understand each other's language, how can they develop a ghost? It all depends on the task system. Moreover, developing the villain's kingdom will help the protagonist's life to almost zero. In Rise of the House, developing the villain's kingdom can at least bring benefits to the protagonist in terms of video recording, opera, etc.!

To be honest, I really envy people who can make dough, and I haven't found Bugu's PL and KP for a long time, a long, long time, until I myself became a pigeon... By the way, killing two teammates after two big failures is really too careless. I used a small pistol, and the damage was fully increased.

A small suggestion, it is best that you make a memo to summarize the items you have written down now. I remember that there were unidentified buildings in the first expedition, and then I got three identified gems after the second expedition, and then the building was not mentioned. In this kind of business exploration, you need to have a memo, come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

I have a suggestion. I hope that the protagonist will not have too much to do with the government, because once the book involves too many things related to real politics, it will be easy to 404

I thought of a book from a long time ago, somewhat similar, that the author could refer to. It's called the rise of the house

The story is quite interesting, but there are a lot of bugs. As an article that obviously contains game data, problems such as data logic errors and missing props appear at the beginning. It's really confusing.

Author, you like running groups, I have never played it and I don't understand it. It's interspersed in the middle. It's so uncomfortable to watch. I'm sorry, it's not to my liking. Goodbye.

Is there a heroine? If not, I'll say goodbye. There is no heroine in the construction of unlimited streaming. I've been vomiting since I saw it. I don't have any feelings. Why am I watching it?

The first 40 chapters were fine, but things started to happen later on. Everyone in the Lilliputian Kingdom woke up and their memories came back, and the big guys came out one by one! Well! ,,, Sorry, it's not my thing anymore.

Shang Xiang, the author will come back and write this book soon {"NickName":"this life is floating","UserId":328397823}