I Am a Serious Reader

The plot is good, but the pace is a little fast and a bit... Brainless, yes, brainless! The part about starting to practice can be written in detail. It is too exaggerated for a person with no foundation to break through two realms in three days. The section in the Imperial Prefect's Mansion looks like it was done without even taking off the pants. There is also the section where the policeman comes to the door, the plot and the section of selling sachets are repeated. The repetition of similar plots in a short period of time will reduce the reader's interest in reading. It is recommended that the author write the manuscript the day before and review it again the next day. This way, many problems can be seen, and the (shu) place where (zi) can be written in detail (shui) can be found. (PS: I personally recommend not to spray without thinking)

The new book needs milk, please milk me quickly 😌😌