Trainer Shinji

Personally, I hope you can write about the ruthlessness of conquering elves. This is what I personally prefer.

Full subscription support, I hope the author can stick to it. How can I put it, Shinji is the best created among Ash's rivals. It can be said to be unprecedented in the DP period, and it is probably unprecedented now. Muji's Xiaomao is a classic, but the characterization is really a bit lacking. Masamune from the Super Generation appeared suddenly in the middle and late stages, and BW's Emperor Shu was a failure. Painting a tiger cannot be compared to a dog. I also met Shinji in the Novice Village, and also challenged for the championship, but the feeling was completely different. One was taking steps step by step. Although he was defeated by absolute strength in the end, he left a deep impression on people - he will become a strong man. This can be seen in Zhulan's comments about him and Xiaozhi. Emperor Xiu, on the other hand, just didn't know how high the sky was. XY's Ai Lan looked okay before the decisive battle, although the portrayal was not great, but after the decisive battle, she understood everything. As for Sun and Moon's Hawu and Gladion, they were okay, but just okay. It was quite unfair that Hawu lost to Painted Bird. There is no strong enemy in the latest journey, but it goes without saying who is the biggest enemy. Yiqiu is the third editor's biological son after Dakoto and Fujita Arashi. No, Yiqiu is even the editor's father. Except for Muji's Xiaomao, the rest are basically not worthy to be compared with Shinji. By the way, Muyin also has Hiro. When he saw Xiaozhi losing to him, he was angry and regretful. The lineups used by Hiro and Ash are almost the same, which are simply replicas of Ash. This failure can be seen as Ash losing to himself, because Ash has no ability to command Charizard. A newcomer who just started reached the top 16 (maybe? It was so long ago that I can't remember clearly). I can't ask him to do more. Now that I think about it, I feel relieved. Shinji is completely opposite to Xiaozhi. It can be said that he is the opposite of Xiaozhi. If you defeat Shinji, you will also defeat yourself. I personally think that Hiro and Shinji are related, one is almost identical, the other is almost completely opposite, and Xiaozhi's journey is to lose to himself (Hiro) - to defeat a strong enemy (Komo) - to lose to a stronger enemy (Hagotsu, Tetsuya) - to defeat a strong enemy and himself and a stronger enemy (Shinji fully meets these three conditions, after all, the tragedy came first). At that time, I really thought that Xiaozhi would reach the top of the Suzuran Conference (Ayayu should also win, but it is still acceptable). Later, Dakdu came out and understood everything, and I was furious. I'm going too far, I've said so much. Anyway, good luck to those who are sitting.

I came from Snake and Monkey's book list, and I have read them all. I feel very good, especially the author's bold use of Xiaozhi in the theatrical version, which is eye-catching. The plot is also more attentive. It can be said that the text was written with the brain in mind.

Shinji's evil smile reference.

This heroine is too abrupt, too over-the-top. Tn Chiye, Xiaozhi, and Gou Hao all feel inferior to her. She is too dissuaded. The heroine who comes from nowhere has shattered the world view to pieces. Five fantasy beasts are still encountering adventures and trying to gather six mythical beasts. Those fan protagonists are not like this. At least there are other elves on the surface, but this. . . . There are some words that are hard to say, but I'm sorry that I can't accept that every update has to be done, but until this heroine comes out, I hope the author will delete it or reinvent it. (Personal thoughts, don't comment if you don't like it.)

Three Evil Men

Shinji

I see some things that I feel are not good about now. One is the Little Flame Monkey. The Sun Monkey plays a very important role in the hearts of many viewers in Diamond, but it turned out to be Shinji's elf. This is very hard to accept. As for releasing the elves, in the game players are no more ruthless than Shinji. In fact, everyone is Shinji. There are many people who use True Love Team to clear the game, but very few people use True Love Team to play games, right? I also have a small suggestion to the author, that is, the character of the Pokémon is better. Shinji's character is not likable in the first place. It is better to write the character of the Pokémon in a likable and positive way, so that the taste can be adjusted. In short, I hope the author can improve his writing skills and be able to better control different styles. In addition to routines, storyline and writing level are also important, 💪 Come on!

{"NickName":"Bright Night","UserId":221654745} I think the character of the protagonist should be written according to the original book, because people who read the book based on the title may really like the character of Shinji and his personality. It may be a bit inconsistent for the author to follow another personality. And I don't think there is a need for the heroine, because people who watch elves usually watch the cultivation and fighting of elves, and there is no need for emotional drama. (Personal thoughts, don't comment if you don't like it.)

I feel like this heroine has to persuade a lot of people to leave 😅

Shinji

Tai Tai Turtle

Is this Ye Hui the author's incarnation in the text? 🪖 The drawing is based on the description in the article. I decided on the hairstyle without saying anything. Anyway, he is a handsome guy with green hair. Does anyone have any objections? 😏 Picture 1 primary color, picture 2 heterochromatic (I feel heterochromatic looks better 🤤)

I can't say they are exactly the same, I can only say they are completely consistent.

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Reiss

Help, the heroine was really discouraged from appearing. It was too overwhelming. Her image has a sense of contradiction that I want all of it. She has to be otherworldly and god-like, but she also has to turn into a hardcore macho and an elf in an instant. She can cross-dress in seconds after the diamonds and stars are shining. She has to put together a full set of mythical beasts everywhere... And the appearance is also very abrupt. In fact, it will be better to take it slow after meeting the protagonist a few times. Finally, the forced filter for the first appearance is a bit inappropriate. Shinji is obviously not the kind of troubled boy with a dark heart who needs light to save him. The light-type heroine who shines into life is not suitable for him. It is too vulgar.

I beg the author not to use the word Xiexiexiao again. How many times have you seen him embarrassed or not? It sounds the same as 250.

I kind of want to write another Shinji book. Is there anything you want to read? But if I write it, I guess the original work is written by the original elves combined with the elves I added myself.

There are good elves who don't want it and persuade them to retreat. The protagonist chooses Tutaigui as the first elf and persuades him to quit. The protagonist goes to the Kanto gym to persuade him to quit.

Elf world fanfics are rare these days, and the urban elf literature genre makes me want to vomit recently, so come on!

Some people don't understand why they didn't use the Round Land Shark at the beginning. Obviously, after having the Round Land Shark, they can also conquer the Sapling Turtles.

Although one of Shinji's characteristics is to capture the elves and then select the strongest ones to keep based on their qualifications, but if he still scolds the released elves as waste, it would be a bit like using the elves as tools. A little bad. The purpose of Elf Question is to see the harmonious coexistence of humans and elves. And if the protagonist only captures Pokémon for the gym battle, releasing them after the fight would be too annoying. I think the author could change this setting a bit. For example, giving food and apology to the released elves as compensation And this method of subduing and releasing the elves is actually not efficient if you think about it carefully. Catching elves is definitely slower than elves escaping. In this way, the protagonist can only catch a few elves, not necessarily the strongest one. In fact, the author could write that the protagonist learns some observation methods from his brother to judge the strength of the elf. The protagonist then fights these elves with food as a reward, and selects the elves with strong fighting abilities. In addition, the character of the elf is also very important. If an elf is not aggressive, no matter how good his qualifications are, he will not be strong in battle. Therefore, you may not be able to receive good elves by forcefully conquering them.

"Elf: Trainer Shinji" If you are interested, you can read the story of Shinji in the parallel world.

The protagonist has obtained the memory of the time traveler The time traveler must have watched other anime For example, Sea of ​​Death and the like

I was once persuaded to quit because of the heroine's strength, but now I'm coming back to take a look. I remember the author said it would be weakened, so is it nerfed?

Speaking of Shinji, why not come with an unparalleled dragon🐉🐉

I want to be number one in the world, and women are in the way.

A small personal suggestion. The author wants to describe a protagonist who is cold on the outside and hot on the inside. Therefore, the interaction between the protagonist and the elves should be described in more subtle ways to enhance the protagonist's shining point and attract readers. I was drawn into this book by the character of Shinji (a rationalist) and the gifted elf. The only thing I wasn't satisfied with was the lack of interaction. For example, in the part where the protagonist was poisoned and fell ill, the protagonist and the circle bear were both poisoned and received aromatherapy. After that, the protagonist took the antidote alone. Anyway, you also gave a bottle of circle bear. It is recommended to describe more interactions and emotions with the elves, and it will be ignited without asking for anything. After all, there is a process. Like the little fire monkey, I feel that I am always figuring out my emotions on my own, which is quite embarrassing. Moreover, Bug Bear and Marshado are almost written as ruthless tool elves by you. In fact, the plot of the poisoning could be completely imitated by the story of Lao Zhi being beaten until his tail flames were almost extinguished and then being converted by Xiao Zhi. Now it seems a bit of a pity. This is purely a personal feeling. I hope it can be of some help to the author, so that he can write more and more exciting things in the future.

This book is well written, each elf has its own unique characteristics, and the elf is not written in a stereotyped manner.