I Alone Can Revive the Spiritual Energy

The plot was quite good, but the story ended in less than a year. It was originally supposed to last four years. The negative comments in the reviews were actually not that serious. It was just because all the main characters in it had a sense of innocence or simplicity. Maybe it was because the male protagonist was only limited to good people when he was first selected. Because everyone has a beautiful character. Viewed from a God's perspective, the main characters seem unreal. And the villains in it are also written very uniformly, as well as the black gloves of the male protagonist. In the beginning, Brother Lang can come forward to help, but later on he should not help those who lose in gambling. It is okay to deal with the three people who are prostitutes, gamblers and drug addicts, but they should also abandon the younger brothers who lose in gambling because they were not selected by "Xian Shi" Among them, he is worse than ordinary people. He is just the male protagonist's tool and can be abandoned at any time. The male protagonist should deal with pornography, gambling and drug addiction by himself, and does not need to bring the younger brother who loses in gambling. The advantages of abandoning him are that he really has no use value anymore, he can be a warning to other younger brothers, and it can also show the decisiveness and rationality of the male protagonist. There are all good people in "Xianshi", so no matter how you write about their innocence and beauty in the game or in reality, it is okay. Their existence can also give psychological comfort to those who bear hatred and negativity. In reality, the male protagonist should highlight his reason and calmness under tense nerves, because after experiencing the torture in the future and not going crazy, the male protagonist is no longer a good person like the good guy in Xianshi. There are indeed some slightly poisonous tricks at the beginning to express the male protagonist's unscrupulous and decisive killing, but it gradually disappears later. What the author should write is the dark contrast between the joy and beauty of "Xian Shi" and society and evil cultivators, so that there is a strong contrast in the article. Through the shining points of various characters in reality, the hard-won beauty of reality is reflected, and the correctness of the male protagonist's behavior is emphasized (don't write about the male protagonist himself or the author himself finding reasons for Readers are forced to accept it, but only write about the actions of the male protagonist) In my opinion, although this book is slightly poisonous, the story is good. However, after the male protagonist killed all the evil cultivators, the author lost control. At that time, the author should have two writing directions: 1 Strengthen development, whether it is himself or unite the country and the world The world has developed from multiple directions and multiple lines. After all, it has only been more than three and a half years. I have written about farming and infrastructure, scientific and technological progress, cultivation progress, human progress, and social progress 2. Strengthen the contrast, the beauty and ugliness of human nature, mainly write about characters, plots, events, and the male protagonist behind the scenes. Of course, the content in 1 above is also included. It should be mentioned, but not the main line, that there will be many secondary protagonists at this time. They have love and hatred. Their actions are all tests of growth. They are also questions about the male protagonist's Taoist heart. The male protagonist will solve the doubts time and time again and firmly believe that he is right. This is also a satisfactory answer to himself who has suffered in the past and future. How did the author write the result? After the Chinese Evil Cultivation Alliance is gone, although it is still developing, it feels like everyone is lazy and doesn't care about others. The male protagonist who knows the future is also undisciplined. He later gained a lot of cultivation knowledge, and the only result is the Nascent Soul Method. Progress should be in all aspects, and there is no need to write comprehensively, but it should not be thin, and cooperation with the country is also very hasty. The Yiren Bureau is not the country's one word! And the cooperation should be multi-faceted, but it ended after just a verbal agreement. The country's efficiency is not that low, and the characters in reality should be written differently from those in "Xianshi". As a result, the author treats everyone equally, which makes me unable to see the good person you want to express. Regardless of these first, the male protagonist later does not know that he is the player of Xianshi. After staying for a long time, the author is used to writing about the character of the players in "Xianshi". It always makes me feel that the male protagonist is being assimilated. Because I finished reading it in one day, this feeling is very obvious. The male protagonist is gradually healing his psychological trauma, and his personality has begun to return to a healthy mentality. It is natural and harmonious, but such a normal person is the least suitable It should happen. Humanity will end in three years. The direction you originally guided mankind will change because of your normality. This is not normal cultivation. If you want to win, you cannot use traditional cultivation methods. Even if your mentality is assimilated by the good people in the article, the male protagonist's past and future memories will not be erased. As a result, the male protagonist's life becomes more and more leisurely as the story progresses. He helps the tool man and takes the tool man into battle in person. You don't need the tool man's admiration or anything like that. What can you do with him, such as dating your girlfriend and catching ghosts with your classmates. It's not that you can't do it or that you have no life. But the author may have a writing problem, which always makes me feel that the male protagonist is leisurely. I have written too much, talked too much, and I am too lazy to type. Come on, author, I don't know if you will read it. {"NickName":"Book Friends 202109031630656150","UserId":345048784} {"TopicId":"58758212 7428665344","TopicName":"Book Review"}{"TopicId":"571348880201940992","TopicName":"Book Waste"}

The subject matter is good, but I don't like the characters, so I left. . . If someone stabs you in the back, they will stab you to death. Just look at it and leave as if nothing is wrong. . . With the character of the protagonist, he can't even save himself, so why should he save others? ? ? In the end, I am helping others make wedding dresses. . .

It's this kind of plot again. You take a gangster as your subordinate and give him glory and wealth. You really are the author 🙂

After reading the acceptance speech, I felt like laughing inexplicably. I saved it for now and will read it together another day. I am the biggest Shennong!

I feel like a lot of recent works are relatively younger.

Ended suddenly, 😆😆😆

Well, yes, this is me, I am so handsome! 😎

By the way, I just read two chapters. Isn't the game embarrassing?

The computer configuration is not enough and it discharges again!

Can the author write less realistic plots?

When I first started watching it, I felt it had a bit of a suture monster flavor from various genres, a bit like The Fourth Natural Disaster, and it wasn't mainly written about the inside of the game, but the outside of the game was about urban supernatural beings, eh

The subject matter was chosen well, and the things in the game were also well written. The reality is very dramatic. If you're not sure, you can try nesting dolls. If you write well, you will have a high chance of becoming a god.

My wife! 😎

Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง

Was it interesting to write about those two couples? I was so embarrassed to watch 😰