Tomb Raiding: Starting at Pingshan

I was very annoyed by a reader just now. As for the scene in the first few chapters where Chen Yulou, Partridge Shao and Li Changqing meet Hu Guohua, Chapter 68, they said I plagiarized. I won't say which book was copied, but they are more popular than me anyway. You also say that all the ideas are the same, but you won't say that if you read a chapter later! Brother, I followed the original work in the first half of that plot. It's the original work. It doesn't matter if you say I copied the original work. The key is that I haven't read the book you said I copied... So, I gave him a package of deleting the post and permanently banning him on the spot (I rarely block people, unless it is a personal attack or a stupid one). He was annoyed, so he went to the other book friend circle to say that I plagiarized. Thank you, and you also increased my traffic 🤫 To be honest, it is normal for some plots to be similar in fan fiction. After all, they are all secondary creations based on the original work. You can't say who copied whom. It should be said that we are all the authors of the original work. Actually, it's nothing. I just went to hang out with my colleagues in the middle of typing. Unexpectedly, I almost went blind... When I meet this kind of people in the future, I will block every one I see. (It's so difficult to write a novel 😅)

When the critical moment comes, the protagonist forgets the plot, forgets it, and has to say it out loud, which is disgusting. When the critical moment comes, it seems that he has overlooked something but cannot remember it. Then he shook his head and didn't think about it.

This is a teaser post, everyone wants to come here to do it! Well, I swear at the beginning that the plot was really blunt. At that time, I wanted to get into the plot quickly within three chapters. I may have overlooked some logic, and I feel sorry for it! There is also a female protagonist. The initial decision is not to have one, just a heroine 🤫.

In the world view of Gui Chui Deng, I am very curious as to how the tomb of the First Emperor should be built. The mausoleums of some remote small countries are so magnificent. The Mausoleum of Qin Shihuang cannot fly to the sky.

I regretted giving 100 points to that one. The Pingshan tomb robbing part was almost the same with or without you. They just shoehorned a protagonist into the story, and then it fell apart at the critical moment. It makes people's teeth itch looking at it. .

I saw that a few book friends said that the protagonist couldn't answer the tomb robbing lingo at the beginning, which seemed a little bit poisonous, but it's actually normal. Let me explain it here. First of all, I set the protagonist to appear as an innate master from the world of martial arts, and his skills are already very buggy. I believe that readers who read the book will feel the same. I can't make him proficient in reverse fighting and octathlon. It will be fun to watch at the beginning, but it will be boring after a long time. I am also bored to write. And the protagonist is not a person in the tomb robbing business. Even if he can answer it, it cannot be explained logically. Don't worry, this is a fun article, not an abusive one, but after all, I am a newbie, so I may not be able to write the first few chapters properly, which caused some book friends to misunderstand and fail to stick to it. I'm sorry! But I hope all the book friends who click in will give me a chance and don't give up without some comments. Maybe you will like it? In addition, the world view, plot, and characters of this book are all consistent with the original work. There may be some minor changes, but I will do my best to shape the characters that appear in the book. Thank you for your support!

First travel through the prehistoric world to become the Golden Immortal of Hunyuan, and then go to rob tombs in Tomb Raider Notes, so that you won't encounter any dangers.

Don't write this kind of relationship without a heroine. It's awkward because it's not written well, and it makes me feel like I'm being raped.

In fact, the four factions of tomb robbers in "Tomb Robbers Notes" are different from those in "Gui Chuu Deng". The Jiu Sect in "Tomb Robbers Notes" seems to be very powerful, but it is only limited to Changsha. In "Gui Chui Deng", there is only one Chen Yulou, a warrior who can compete with the Jiu Sect, not to mention Master Chen and several of their gold-touching lineage, Taoist monks and mountain movers. If one lineage can lift the curse, it should have a lot of power, and General Faqiu is mainly reflected in the Zhang family in the tomb robbing notes... Not to mention the Wang family who secretly opposed the Jiumen, and then there is the Guanshan Taibao, the fifth group of tomb robbers who came from the Ming Dynasty with the support of the imperial court... There is a lot to write, if the author wants to add a fantasy color The power of color, then it is also a good choice to link up with the Jiu Shu World. As for the heroine, it is better not to write it. It seems that you are going to write about Lao Jiumen, Chen Yulou, Partridge Whistle and the others during the Republic of China, and also span time to the future, the Hu Bayi trio and then the Wu Xie trio. In fact, Zhang Qiling is a very good character. The object of the plot is powerful but has incomplete memory. It is easy to "fool" and can jump repeatedly in the world of Tomb Raiders and Ghost Blowing Lantern. Because Qilin blood can ward off evil spirits, it will be very interesting if the protagonist teaches Zhang Qiling martial arts and lets Zhang Qiling jump into the supernatural wind, and appropriately upgrades the danger of the major tombs in the future.

If there is no heroine and there is still ambiguity, why not just write a heroine?