Rebirth of the Viking King

I finished the game in two days and it was very exciting. I hope the brothers can be more detailed in their portrayal. The younger brothers are too tooly now.

It was only ten or twenty chapters, and it didn't even show the novice village. It already talked about the Titan gods and the alien starry sky. I was also drunk! The beginning was quite attractive, but in the end, there were Eastern Qi Masters, Qin Shihuang, etc. There were too many elements mixed together, and you don't understand the reason why the curtain slowly unfolds? Remember to learn lessons from the next book. Just treat this book as a training exercise. It is impossible to get results. . .

This is the true general map of the entire world, drawn by Mo Yiquan of the Qing Dynasty in the 28th year of Qianlong's reign in the Qing Dynasty (1763) The original map "The Tribute Map of All the Countries in the World" was drawn in the 16th year of Yongle's reign in the Ming Dynasty (1418)

This is the world situation when this book takes place. The most powerful countries in the world at that time were the Tang Dynasty, Arabia, and Byzantium.

Why do some people always criticize the protagonist for being atheistic? A person has lived in modern times for so many years, and his own outlook on life, values, and world view have already been formed. Although he has traveled through time, the protagonist has not seen extraordinary events with his own eyes. He must be trying to explain it scientifically. If it cannot be explained, it means that science has not developed to that point, and the world view has not yet collapsed. Moreover, the protagonist is well established. He firmly believes that all the stories about ghosts and gods are false. No one wakes me up in front of me. Whoever believes in it is ignorant.

Personally, don't listen to different readers. Add everything into it, such as fantasy and immortality, etc. In the end, it will become a hodgepodge that looks very awkward.

New books, seedlings, and food and grass. Some readers are right. The title and introduction of the book must highlight the selling points, so as to attract readers who like this type of book. Such as pirate game enthusiasts, Western history enthusiasts, mysterious old god enthusiasts, etc. It is best to display the sequence elements, east-west collision, power limit, etc., So as to distinguish it from historical pirate texts. This kind of novel that deconstructs and upgrades history is easier and harder to write than fantasy novels that remain in a purely fictional world. Writing is easier because it has historical development as a reference. The work of setting the world saves time, and the reader has a stronger sense of involvement. The outline and story nodes can refer to part of history, and it is nice to let the protagonist participate or even change history. What is difficult to write is that a lot of historical data collection work needs to be done to make it detailed and elegant. As for the introduction of the more powerful Tang Empire in the East and the collision of civilizations, this is also the highlight of this novel. It can be seen that the author has done his homework and set it up. But there are also some problems. First of all, the content of the book is too broad, with various elements including farming, adventure, upgrading, war, and mystery, resulting in scattered points of interest and unclear priorities. At the same time, it becomes wider and wider in the later stages, and it is easy to lose control. Secondly, the cultural and historical scenes are well rendered, allowing people to be immersed in the scene and feel the exotic customs and fantasy scenes. But the content skeleton is still a bit shallow. It's a bit like watching "The Legend of the Demon Cat". It looks beautiful and stunning, but cannot be savored carefully and has no lingering fragrance. On the one hand, this is because the setting of the power system is not so substantial, rigorous, and layered, and it just borrows the surface of the mysterious sequence. In this way, the reader's feeling of upgrading is greatly weakened. Of course, if the focus is on lords and history, this part will be fine. On the other hand, there is a void in the management of the lords. It has no sense of reality and is more like playing a strategy game. In this regard, the author has to add management and political knowledge. It is recommended to watch the election of Mao Zedong. Take another historical novel I read as an example. The author is a serving civil servant. He really understands the key points of politics, many management decisions, and his thinking can make people's eyes shine. That's all. The environment for novels is not good. Good talents should be supported. I have added it to the book list. I hope the author's performance will get better and better. Finally, remember not to stop updating! Remember! Remember!

The protagonist's name is unusual. He is named Loki in the Norse mythology system. He should have been killed long ago.

Emmm, it looks pretty good. Although it's a bit confusing, it's still acceptable. I just hope that the protagonist's butt won't sit crooked, and he won't kneel down and lick the Tang Dynasty.

I thought it was a pure pirate, but it turned out to be a fantasy medieval pirate, which is okay, but with Eastern cultivation, it's too complicated. Those who like it will naturally like it, but I can't watch it. It's a pity.

As long as there is an Oriental presence in the background of the story and something related to China, I will never read a novel in which the protagonist is white.

The red line represents the Silk Road on the road, and the blue line represents the Maritime Silk Road. Some readers said that the presence of Tang people in this book was very inconsistent. These Tang people were really awesome at the time (People in the Tang Dynasty called Arabia Dashi and Byzantium Fu Fu)

It's hard to accept that Elizabeth's assassination of the protagonist at Wanghai Fortress is given lightly. It's understandable that Elizabeth can't be killed for the sake of planning because of her reputation among the people. It's also understandable that Elizabeth herself is difficult to threaten the wary protagonist, but it's hard to accept that it's true that she let it go lightly. The protagonist can fight life and death for the sake of the tribe and can fight desperately to get rid of the chains of the bloody creator. Elizabeth has ruined almost all his efforts, but it's hard to understand that it's true that Elizabeth has been lightly exposed.

I gave up when I saw the protagonist let monotheism preach. As a modern person, wouldn't you know the dangers of monotheism?

Is the introduction serious? ⊙ω⊙ Slaughter the weak of the Old Ones?

Come in and watch you rob. Are you writing a fantasy adventure story?

This book is neither Viking enough nor fantasy enough, nor does it have a Cthulhu flavor, and farming has no special features. If you don't have the power of writing, you can't control big scenes, and if you don't have enough imagination, you can't control big settings. Rather tasteless.

I think there is a basic common sense issue in this book. Christ needs believers, but Odin does not need believers. Christ was promoted when he preached, but Odin's followers were promoted when they were led and hacked by pagans?

The author may have worked very hard, but due to his limited knowledge, some places inevitably show the lack of knowledge shaped by hearsay and street stall literature. In addition, probably due to limited knowledge, the author unintentionally showed some extreme views and delusional self-confidence, which made it difficult to continue reading this book. It's a pity that a good idea was lost.

Writing to this point is already the emperor of perseverance. . .

After traveling through time, he refused to admit the extraordinary (the protagonist himself can also activate violent skills), insisted on science (black), 11 people sailed a three-masted ship, and insisted on the strength of the Qin Dynasty to kill various gods. Then the strong men of the Qin Dynasty could only live a hundred years, and the dynasty fell into disrepair.

There is a drama called "Vikings". It is also a blacksmith and a ship, the anchor is also a raven, and it is also a voyage. The author must have read it. The main plot in the early stage is too similar.

The protagonist is not like a normal person. He acts like a monkey when talking to others. Normal roommates are not as mean as him when chatting or spanking.

I feel that the setting is still very good, but the character of the protagonist is very strange. He looks like a lord without being a lord, and when he sees a woman, he behaves like an innocent little virgin. Moreover, the existence of sequences and levels in the plot is completely meaningless. For example, there are two demigods in sequence two, and it is completely unclear where their abilities are? Just quickly build up high-end combat power and then be on the edge of the fight and then the protagonist comes to the rescue. To be honest, if you write like this, it is better to just write an invincible article. To be honest, I feel that half of it has collapsed before this part is released. The subject matter is still acceptable. The above point of view is acceptable and can be read.

After reading the opening chapter, I thought it was a masterpiece, but the rest of it was filled with nonsense. It was a perfect fantasy novel, but it had to be written in a mess. It's a pity.

The content is okay, but the Illuminati is a bit nonsense. . . . Fantasy is just fantasy, and there is no need to talk about reality. It is full of earthly literature.

Author! If you change platforms and open a new book, remember to tell us. This book is quite new and you have a good character. We will support your new book then.

The third part started to collapse. Not only did the combat power collapse, but the author's brain also collapsed.

The further you go, the more it feels like a group show, and Loki is slowly losing his status as the protagonist.

It was pretty good at first, but I couldn't stand it anymore as I read on.