I Like to Bully My Childhood Sweetheart

I've finished writing and I'll just say a few words, brother After I read your last book, I found out that you had just released a new work, so I followed it, so I'm a little bit reluctant to leave the previous work In terms of material selection, I think a youth romantic comedy is no problem, it will definitely be your calling card, and this time the writing style is like a short girl's comic The protagonist is too strong , it is difficult to achieve the transition of the big background In the middle of writing, I will feel that this book will not be too long... In addition, I personally think that this time there is a slight lack of entry into the character's personality It seems to be to describe a few preset scenes The protagonist who is rigidly portrayed is a bit dramatic It is not as integrated and natural as Furukawa. Yes, it feels like The written story is just like a story, It's not like the lives of two or three people that happened in a corner of the world It can't really touch people's hearts Of course, this book is good enough, The female characters are very rich, The plot can be independent of the protagonist and the supporting characters are all good characters I also think that since the two books, your writing skills in depicting scenes can be called excellent in the light novel version My personal taste is that if the plot and selection of materials can reproduce the same youthful Bai Xue as the previous book that would be great It's a bit unpleasant to say, brother, but I really look forward to your next work

After reading the free chapter, I did not choose to continue reading, and I don't know what the content will be like. The following comments are only for the free chapter. First of all, let me talk about whether I recommend reading this book; based on the tone of the previous article, those who want to find relaxation in novels do not need to choose this novel. After all, there are enough ugly people in reality, so why bother to experience the dark side of human nature in novels. And for readers who want to find reality in fiction, this book may be suitable for you. This is indeed a "sweet" book, but this does not affect the author's portrayal of the darkness of human nature in this book. As the author said, he wants to export his own opinions, even though in my opinion, the author is indeed swayed by the readers' opinions to a certain extent. This is the first time I have seen an online novel author expressly express his desire to export his own ideas, even though I do not want to accept such output, even though this book is still bound by the limitations of online novels. I have to say this is a good thing. At least there are some authors who have their own ideas rather than relying on their own writing to tell what the readers say. However, even if the author has such a sense of autonomy, it may be limited by the author's writing style. There is still an inappropriate naivety in this book when the reaction is dark. There is a certain sense of contradiction and separation between the protagonist's character and behavior, the villain's multi-faceted cognition, etc. The above opinions are all subjective, just like the author wants to export his own opinions, but I refuse to accept the author's output - I should have my own thoughts on whether I agree with this. This review is only a reference for readers who have seen this book for the first time (maybe it can save a little time looking for books?). I hope everyone can find a book they like.

Why do people still ask if there is a harem? Single heroine, pure love, written at the beginning It is impossible for a tauren to have it. 😐🤔🤫

First of all, let me talk about the feeling after reading these 30 chapters. To be honest, it is a bit painful. The overall writing style is very smooth, but I don't know why it is a bit uncomfortable. The following only represents my personal views: 1. In my opinion, the male protagonist Kuroba Akari was a bit of a failure, at least much more failed than Wanli Rei. I can't see what the core of Black Feather is, why Heo Fe is so cold, and why he has such a bad face towards others all day long. The author doesn't explain much. He just lightly writes that the male protagonist spent his previous life in a hospital bed, but this doesn't resonate with me. To put it bluntly, "Who knows when you say this!" 2. From the whole article, Kuroba Akari revolves around Wanli Rei. I don't know if the author meant it, but it seems to me like this. Whether it's ranking first in the exam, joining the literary club, writing articles and submitting articles, they are all done for Wan Li Lian. I can't see what the male protagonist wants to do. Is this good? Is this bad? No one has to be parasitic on others to survive, and no one will have any feelings for this kind of character, especially when this character is still the male protagonist. The article said that the male protagonist did this to protect Wan Lili, but is this really the case? No, whether Wan Lili studies or writes articles, it is all for herself, not for the male protagonist. In my opinion, Wan Lili is the character who stands in a protective position, and the male protagonist is the one who is redeemed. 3. Obviously, the author definitely prefers Wanli Lian. There's nothing wrong with that. Wan Li is cute, brave, and never gives up. He is a very sunny character. Even if he lives in poverty, he does not lament his life. But once this character is put together with the male protagonist, it will only magnify the shortcomings of the male protagonist. This brings us back to the male protagonist's indifference. Perhaps the author wanted to use the male protagonist's attitude towards other people and Wanli Lian to create a contrast and highlight the male protagonist's affection for the female protagonist. But this kind of indifference is abnormal. It is too deliberate. Whether it is the greetings from Thousand Island Flowers at the beginning or the behavior of ignoring others, it seems too deliberate and makes me feel a little nauseous. Maybe it has something to do with the male protagonist's previous life, but in this life, the male protagonist has a happy family and a lovely childhood sweetheart. I can't understand the male protagonist's indifference. This is not an attitude towards strangers, but treating other people as enemies. It's really a bit morbid! Of course, I still hope that the author can continue writing. After all, this kind of original daily writing is rare. Finally, I wish the author good luck! ! !

I hope the author doesn't care too much about what a small number of readers think Listening to readers and writing is a taboo in novels I came from piracy, and I am willing to do so Full order

Ah this

To be honest, it was really sweet. I specially registered an account and recharged the full subscription to support the author. I haven't seen the starting point for a long time. I have to re-download the client, I hope the author will persist. I still want to see their ending ❤️ Come on, come on＾0＾~

Isn't it?

Is there anyone who supports the senpai Lily group 🤭

Cover

Don't write about villains if it's pure dog food. If you want it to be sweet, just be purely sweet.

If you really don't poke it and keep it from falling apart, it should be easy to get a small fire.

When crying

In fact, after the male protagonist and the female protagonist confirm their relationship, the plot is not that interesting. If it is just sweet and there are no other stories to fill it, the plot will be a bit the same. The male protagonist's family situation may happen later, but here the male protagonist can control everything, which is a bit boring. In fact, I personally think that the plot will develop better if the plot moves towards sweetness, bitterness, abuse, and sudden unexpected things. In addition, the male protagonist was also 16 years old in his previous life. He was not in a setting where he had been working hard in society for many years. This also shows that the male protagonist is not invincible. It is recommended to give sweetness after being tortured to a great extent, which will make it very interesting. My personal reader opinion

It's over! Why is it over? I finally found a good dog food article but lost it. I originally planned to keep it (；´Д｀). The author hopes you can continue to write new books!

I didn't feel much in the first few chapters, and I even kind of disliked the protagonist's character. But after reading a few more chapters, I stopped hating it. This novel is different from other romance novels, at least that's what I think. When I read this book, I couldn't put myself into the perspective of the protagonist like I did in other books. I would feel very awkward if I was forced to do so because the personality differences between me and the protagonist are so big. I read this book completely from a third-person perspective, and I laughed the whole time. If there are newcomers who are a little uncomfortable reading this book, it is probably for the same reason as me at the beginning. It would be too pitiful to just give up on this book. You can try not to be a substitute and look at the development of the two people from a third party perspective. There is no doubt that this book is well-written, but it is not a cool read. Of course, if you think it would be fun to flirt with your girlfriend, just pretend I didn't tell you. I don't have a girlfriend. If I had one, I wouldn't tease her like this. Of course, if my girlfriend would be happy because of my teasing, then I would also tease her. Personally, I still prefer straightforward pampering and romance. Well, I don't have a girlfriend, just saying.

The lily set is so beautiful! It feels a little like "I will eventually become you" (unreasonable association)!

I can only say that everyone who understands understands 😏

Light Novels>Daily Love>Complete Book>In the monthly pass ranking, this book ranks fifth with 0 monthly passes🐮

What happened in the six months since my phone disappeared? This book actually ended just like that! So fierce? ? ?

One of my favorite books. I invested 2,000 but lost half of it. But author, I will wait for you.

I can only say that everyone who understands understands 😏

I spent 20 coins to order the Neptune if today, but it disappeared after ordering? Didn't read a word

In the last episode, I called you "good guy"

The front foot didn't regard Junko as his mother, and the back foot slapped himself in the face

Author~ I still can't forget you~ I'm here, woo woo~ You must tell me when you start a new book

Today's if line is invincible

It's so sweet. How can it be so sweet? It's so cool.

Ah~ It's so beautiful. The character of Wanli Rei is so vividly described, and her character is really an ideal type. Author NB