I Can't Afford to Let My Guard Down in the Versatile Mage World

I don't know why, the writing is pretty good but I just can't stand it... Is it because of the plot arrangement and the "coercion" element? Maybe it's my own fault, I feel that the plot is a bit mindless... In fact, fan fiction doesn't necessarily have to be mindless to pretend to be a slap in the face. The next door "Slaying the Dragon Without Money" is pretty good (nothing else). There are very few full-time fans, and even fewer can read it through writing, so why not write the plot more seriously? Work with the protagonist to change all the missed, regretful, and angry things. Let Instructor Zhankong survive, let Bo City die less, catch Sarang in advance, so that she will not be so unforgivable... So is it just me who is nitpicking? However, it is indeed difficult to meet a fan of "Full Time" who is not a novice in writing. I really don't want to see plots such as "Forcing Mu Bai to call daddy" or "Tang Yue calling the protagonist a little guy" (a high school teacher calls his student a little guy?!) This is not a purely pretentious and funny article...  You can criticize, just be more rational.

This protagonist does not feel that he is the protagonist just because of time travel. He also knows that the sky is high and the sky is high, and he is not stupid enough to think that the world needs to be changed for him.

To be honest, after reading it for so long, I suddenly felt that the main character was quite pathetic. Knowing everything, he didn't dare to change He was submissive and didn't dare to take it even if it was beneficial. He was afraid that it would disrupt something and make Mo Fan's little loach unable to grow Because he knew too much, he didn't dare to go out and take risks. Chance, I always feel that the world revolves around Mo Fan, but this is indeed the case In fact, every time I see the protagonist giving up something out of consideration for Mo Fan, complex emotions will always arise in my heart, and the more I try, the more pathetic I feel, so the protagonist needs an opportunity, or a person, that can make him feel that he can do it. Although the curtain has just opened, and after the exchange, I will go abroad or Qin Emperor's Mausoleum or somewhere to get the book, but I still feel that the protagonist's power is a little less, a little too depressed, it's really pitiful, really

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What's the point of having a single female protagonist? There's a guy next door who keeps a harem, but he's not the kind of guy who takes in everyone he meets. It seems like the original novel doesn't have a single female protagonist either.

I read the comments recently and found that some readers seemed to dislike what I wrote about the character Tang Yue. I didn't intend to blacken Tang Yue or write her in a disgusting way, I just wanted to express that Tang Yue is an idealistic and decent person. After the disaster in Bo City later, after Tang Yue has an in-depth understanding of the protagonist, her scenes will become normal.

The heroine is also Mo Fan. This novel is unusual. It's a harem story, and it's gay... Amazing, amazing 😰😰😰

I really don't understand, is there something wrong with this person? People with good talents are considered to be members of the Black Vatican??? What, those who practice quickly and have good talents are all members of the Black Vatican? Then why not say that those who have cultivated to the peak of the ultra-order and the level of forbidden spells are from the Black Vatican???

Already invested, I invested 500 points to test the waters. Come on💪

To be honest, the full-time mage human race is really curious. Other people's human race will resist and defend against the invasion of alien beasts. At least there is not so much internal fighting. The full-time mage is curious. There are so many people fighting among themselves that the other side will almost wipe out your clan.