Starting from Jianyu

My point of view is the same as that of most readers. The first 20 chapters were eye-catching, and then first the protagonist's personality became unlikable and he felt like he had completely become a villain. Secondly, Jianyu's worldview collapsed. Then the second world became unbearable when he saw it was mixed martial arts. To sum up, there are two major points that make me uncomfortable. 1. The protagonist is a martial arts idiot who will do whatever it takes to become stronger and only knows how to become stronger. This makes me feel less happy. I feel that it is better to die in such a life. 2. The world view of each fandom has collapsed, it looks terrible, and the greatest essence of the fandom flow has been lost. Anyway, this book is a pity. Originally the writing was pretty good, I'm not a noob.

The copy of Jianyu is quite good, but the second copy combines Jin Yong's novels and I can't stand it anymore. This kind of mixed martial arts mixes characters from several novels together, fragmenting the world view in the original novel. Each character appears at the same time, which seems spectacular, but leaves the reader with no clue.

There are obvious inconsistencies in many places; the protagonist has studied Buddhist scriptures for several years and gained a lot, but as a result, his mentality has not improved, and he gets shocked when encountering things. If the protagonist had such qualifications, he would have died long ago. Author, are you kidding me?

I feel that there is something wrong with the protagonist's mentality. The monks protect you and teach you martial arts, but you look forward to being cool all day long.

Very well written, this is one of the best novels about warriors seeking enlightenment. If you don't understand, read more. In short, there is nothing too poisonous about it.

When writing film and television novels, at least you have to follow other people's world view. The whole "Sword Rain" world is just low-level martial arts. You are enlightened and spiritually aware. Look how busy you little red guy is. The first few chapters are really good. After Chapter 20, martial arts will become fantasy, but the key is not ready yet

The author's artistic conception is very good. I will give you 500 points as an encouragement.

From the decisive killing to the virgin bitch who repays evil with kindness, the author is really capable of writing. In Jin Yong's world, all the people killed in the end are villains. All the decent people who have killed the protagonist and even the villains will not kill them if they can.

It looked really good at first, but then it started to fall apart as soon as I got to the Buddhist scriptures. Three years of reading the Buddhist scriptures were wasted. If this character really existed, those three years would not have been wasted and abandoned in the first place.

When I read Chapter 14, I discovered a big problem. The protagonist has no plug-ins. The dramatist also said that his qualifications are not good. He is just a small expert in an iron cloth shirt. His swordsmanship is only one stab and he has no footwork. How can you resist being chased? Who in the world is not an experienced person who knows many martial arts and just lets you be assassinated casually?

I originally thought that I chose Jian Yu because of its martial arts style and Jianghu flavor, but it turned out that what I chose was the hanging of Rama's body? This is not a martial arts novel, this is a second-rate unlimited novel

You can't describe the feeling of mixed martial arts, you are just stewing in an iron pot.

It's nothing to change the magic, as long as it's well written, but the protagonist you wrote has been reading Buddhist scriptures for three years, and it's obvious that his mood has improved, but his actions and thoughts not only don't reflect it, but also reduce his intelligence.

Don't write as if you are following the eternal law of heaven. First of all, your ability to break the void proves that that world can lead to the next world, and the next world will not reject you. This is called broken void. How do you write that you have broken the void and still have to follow the next world? Dao Qian can go in and give you hundreds of lives, which is not enough to kill you. You are lucky enough to break the void. If you go to a super high world like the prehistoric world, will you fight with the way of heaven? If the world does not allow the broken void, and you forcefully break the world, you will be exiled to the endless void.

Let's start a new book. I have no desire to read this one. The beginning is very good, but later on it feels a bit cliche and a pattern. In fact, just writing a world is enough.

I have read this book before and someone recommended it. Reading the comments, some people say that the protagonist has incorrect views. I hope to stick with it. I like to read dark novels, but the disgusting ones in the back should be killed or not. The Holy Mother's group

Zongwu is not written well 🙂 The writing style of Zongwu is not good enough and it relies solely on imagination and plot holes 😅 If you don't have this level, you might as well just change the picture and upgrade it honestly. At least there won't be the kind of battle between Guan Gong and Qin Qiong that makes people feel sick 🙂

First time writing a novel? Have you finished writing and reading this nonsense?

I still vaguely feel that the sword is part of my body! You don't even know how powerful you are, but without the sword, you can just help yourself? ?

The front part is okay, but the back part is exciting. There are quite a lot of cool articles. Very immersive. Very nice. Why isn't this book popular?

The novel is generally OK The protagonist kills Ku Lie. It smells like the projection of Gu Shaoshang from the heavens. The author is very nice The most annoying thing about these nitpicks is that those who read the novels and pictures are living a happy life. Is there anything wrong with staring at trivial matters such as eating and drinking from the protagonist every day?

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How does this copy feel like the world of Liaozhai?

Author, you should start a harem for your next book 😏 It seems that the audience for the single heroine is not interested in subscribing.

It's pretty good-looking, I personally think 😒😒😒

The author introduces the background in this single chapter. I only watch cartoons, so I was very confused.

After reading it, I felt like the word "chaos". What do you want to express, the author of "The Immortal, Buddha and Martial Arts Time Travel" ⊙∀⊙?

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