I Started with a Kaleidoscope, but I Just Wanted to Make Money

The logic of this book is very poor. I suggest the author read more other books or go out more and get in touch with society.

The novel is good, but it's not suitable for people to read.

I started out with a kaleidoscope, but I was a loser.

The white text is suitable for novices to read, but it is not recommended for old bookworms.

I turned out to be rubbish at the beginning of Kaleidoscope.

Chapter 3 is too poisonous. It's not easy to give the protagonist the spatial ability, so he has to feed poison to the readers.

Pigfoot thanks Weasel for killing his whole family. Without Weasel, he would not be able to travel through time.

Is the author (forget it, quality, no swearing), too poisonous. My poison resistance is already very high, and I couldn't help but want to complain when I read Chapter 48. But thinking about the author's life, it's not easy. He writes books to entertain the public. Isn't it too poisonous to kill people? The reason I want to scold is not that the author's writing is bad, but that the author maliciously feeds poison. This kind of behavior is too destructive.

To be honest, your profile is a huge poison. In a situation like Naruto where one person is destroying an entire country, is it important for you to tell me that you are going to make money? I really can't complain,

After reading Chapter 41 of God and God, I felt sick. After reading Chapter 42, I decisively gave up and said goodbye.

It feels like it's okay to watch without thinking! His logic is so poor that he acted like a normal person even after being beaten by the third generation.

I laughed inexplicably when I was passing by. These vicious comments were so funny. The author's comments will not be deleted either. . . .

I regret not listening to everyone, I went in and took a look, I really vomited 😰

Awakening the kaleidoscope in front of Danzo? ?

Starting from the chapter about the female doctor, every chapter is highly toxic. If it's not suitable for describing women, then don't force it, okay? The emotional scene with no foreshadowing is as abrupt as going to a bathing center to work on a project and working on a project for a few extra hours.

I can't stand it, the kaleidoscope at the beginning is so useless

If you see rumors being spread, then it's useless 🤐

In fact, there was a problem from the first chapter. According to the fact that the third generation could not come out to save people at that time, the reason why Sasuke did not die was Uchiha Itachi. There were only two possibilities at the time, either defection or death. The third generation of the Uchiha clan must have tacitly approved it. Don't say anything, there are only two Uchiha left. It doesn't matter. Even if the protagonist did not pass through, this Uchiha Ini will die, because he is a bomb. He may not understand when he was a child, but he will definitely know some information when he grows up. How can he not take revenge? So even the third generation must kill him.

I've been following the update for so long, and it's suddenly on the shelves. Let me give the author some advice. First of all, the content of the work does match the title of the work, and there is no attempt to sell it on someone else's head. However, the reason why the protagonist wants to make money is too far-fetched. It is recommended that making money be linked to the protagonist's strength. For example, after making money, the money is used to buy something to improve the protagonist's strength. Secondly, the point of making money in Naruto is very novel, worthy of praise, and well written. Finally, this novel becomes more and more exciting as it goes on. It's very good.

Based on the recent comments, I synthesized what most people think is poisonous, and I found that if the entire text was revised, this book could still be saved, but... Laziness makes people fall into the street...

After reading more than sixty chapters, I really can't bear to go to too many unreasonable places. Opening a restaurant in a different world? Your kaleidoscope is what makes you fry rice noodles?

The book is a good book. Reading this book cured my years of insomnia

It took a lot of effort to get a hole pierced, but the kaleidoscope is so broken that it can't be used, and it doesn't even have a decent golden finger. It doesn't look good! Bad review! Taken off the shelves!

What kind of author could write such a ridiculous book?

It's not suitable for people to watch. It's extremely toxic starting at chapter 40.

The plot content is poor, old bookworms won't watch it

Is there a book where the protagonist Uchiha takes the entire Uchiha clan away from Konoha to develop on their own, like the book The Rise of the Uzumaki Kingdom?

After reading three chapters, I was hooked

Toxic, starting from Chapter 40

After reading dozens of chapters, I realized that I was wasting my time in the past. Half an hour was gone. What the hell?