She Is a Psychic

Although the main character is very weak and I feel uncomfortable after watching it Then I will make a post The book is good, and I want to support it I hope the male protagonist has more roles, and there should not be too many twists. My brain can't change it, and I don't like it very much. Even in the early stage, of course, it is just a personal idea. The author writes according to his own ideas, and the readers only have a general idea. Also, I want to tell the author quietly Reply less and type more. If you write 10 chapters a day, you will be the most handsome kid!

As the title states, the plan for the Ming Dynasty that was written before has been cancelled. After all, that story is too difficult to resonate with without knowing the history. Reality and what is happening and experienced are the most immersive. So the supporting role is currently needed. Also a permanent supporting role. As long as the plot does not really require it, it will not be completed. It can be from the human camp, such as a scientist, a soldier, any position, or a psychic. Then there is the demon camp. Any monster or extraordinary creature from Western fantasy will do. Elves, dwarves, demons, whatever. As for Eastern monsters, there is a monster website that everyone can check. There are too many, more than 2,000 kinds, so I won't list them all. As long as it's not the kind of monster that refers to a certain history or character, it's fine.

I don't know if the author can see that, although you want to better shape the process of the male protagonist becoming stronger, you put too much pressure on it in the early stage, and the male protagonist is a mythical beast after all, but he doesn't grow as fast as the female protagonist who has just awakened for a period of time. Judging from whether the author is still lv1, he should be a newcomer. If it is written by a master, it may not cause the loss of readers, but the author is still a newcomer after all. Even if your writing is good, the plot will be more exciting, but readers don't know. Anyway, in the early stage, I felt that it was all about the heroine's adventures and cheating history. It's okay to read it as a female channel, but in many places where the male channel feels that the male protagonist has been cheated (not really cheated, but with a strong sense of deja vu), it is a bit uncomfortable. I hope the author can pay attention to it. I hope the author will advance the plot faster later on. Come on, I still have to keep pursuing your book, no more eunuchs! Finally, I would like to ask weakly, this is a male channel book. If it is really a female channel book, just pretend that I didn't say anything about the male protagonist being cheated

Xu Ruowei

Bai Wuchang

After keeping it for a few days, I didn't expect that the comment section exploded. I personally think that there is not much problem with the previous heroine part, including the part at the City God's Temple (of course, this can also reflect from the side that the characters created by the author are very well created, and successfully made almost every reader immersed in the scene.), Anyway, there is nothing excessive. In this case, the emotions of the hero and heroine can naturally heat up. As for whether it is poisonous or not, first get out of the situation and think rationally. (I remember when I was reading "Dream of Red Mansions" when I was a child, I also wanted to go to Gao'e after reading it. I was fantasizing about how to write a better ending all day long. But when I really thought about it, it was better to write it this way.) Simply setting up this kind of plot without a higher purpose (such as sublimating the theme, shaping the main characters, and promoting the development of the main plot) is a poisonous point, and it is obviously not the case here. It can only be said that some book lovers are too glass-minded. For a book to be truly well-written and give people a three-dimensional and transparent feeling, this kind of incident is indispensable. I think such a novel is very one-sided and shallow, and it always lacks a sense of pure good times, or that the protagonist does not encounter anything negative at all (even if the protagonist is chased and beaten to death, it is only a negative physical encounter, and what really arouses discussion is a negative mental encounter). (But it's a pity that by looking at the books recommended by Qidian, you can roughly know the level of most book friends on Qidian. You can't rely on it. If you really want to commercialize it, there is no way.) Of course, I personally feel that this book is not without its problems. The section where Bai Ze upgrades is a bit long as a transition between scenes. To be more precise, the part where Bai Ze and his sister recognize each other and the part where Bai Ze upgrades are a bit longer, giving people a sense of confusion. But if you look at any one of them, it's a bit short. Let's see how the author controls the rhythm. As for those book friends who say it's poisonous, the heroine has never been kissed or had sex. At most, the author's description of the scene is too vivid and exciting. I really don't think there is anything poisonous about it. It's better to calm down and think about it first. This is not like some books where the male protagonist collects a few broken shoes and reappears repeatedly to stimulate people's nerves throughout the book. This is called poison. In a very short fragment, the negative impact on the spirit is short-lived and will not be carried to the subsequent plots. This should not be called poison, but a way to make the world in the book more three-dimensional. There are thousands of cool articles with the same starting point, so bad that even Scarab is unwilling to push them. While scolding the novices for being bad, you can't accept a more complex and three-dimensional world view. Don't you think it's ironic? The author's writing style is quite good, but the rhythm needs to be controlled a little more. I believe this book will get better and better as the author grows. As long as you work hard and accumulate, the data will definitely increase when it is accidentally exposed.

After reading Chapter 14, I was completely disgusted after reading novels for so many years. This was the most uncomfortable thing I have read in recent years. I thought this book would be a daily novel. 🙄

Come on＾0＾~Come on! Not bad

Well, I met the original picture by chance, and then I posted it

It's rare to find a novel that amazes me so much at the beginning, both in terms of writing and plot. About a year ago, I read a novel called Big Monster on Qidian. The protagonist's sister was replaced by a tigress. It was also very interesting, but it's a pity that it disappeared after dozens of chapters. I hope the author can continue telling this wonderful story, come on!

First of all, changing to what it is now, entering the demon clan, is a relatively new and interesting point in my opinion. Because if I continue to travel around the country like before, I will still get tired of writing about historical sites. Moreover, the story tends to be monotonous. And there are too many restrictions... I really dare not write too much. Because it's obvious that when things get big, even the government ignores it, which is a loss of IQ. But if I have to substitute myself and write about the government, it's gg again, because my background is too close to reality. Just open a new map yourself.... I summed it up, what everyone wants to see is nothing more than driving, interactions between male and female protagonists, monsters, fighting, and life. If you want to write the best, you should re-frame it yourself and you will not be constrained. And I feel that most book lovers prefer ancient and calm descriptions of life. So the focus is how to design this new map. It can be medieval Europe or Western fantasy style. Currently, it is also a border city with a Chinese style. In the future, I will write a lot about hunting and monster hunting, which is similar to the sense of life of educated youths going to the countryside. You can tell me how to design it and what elements you want to see.

There are so few people there, and it feels like a pearl covered in dust.

First of all, my fighting elements are nothing more than Taoism, martial arts, and witchcraft. Among them, martial arts are mostly martial arts, because I really understand this. My fighting descriptions are my own thoughts and descriptions according to the pictures. If you think it is unreasonable, at least you can learn a little bit about fighting common sense or martial arts, and then try again. Because even Journey to the West, The Romance of the Gods, and the novels about immortals, heroes, gods, and demons that only emerged in the Republic of China, all use Chuanwu as the most basic template. Don't tell me what to do with mythical beasts. History is full of Spring and Autumn writing styles. If you think you are the authority, then bring glory to the country and apply for the cultural heritage of mythical beasts to prevent South Korea from stealing it. My novels have my own worldview, and I draw lessons from the novel style of the Ming and Qing Dynasties. I want to make the fairy tales more popular and realistic. If you think it will destroy the so-called noble image in your mind, then don't read it. I don't know. The culture of mythical beasts is the wisdom of the people. Does the cultural worship of ancient tribes have to be particularly magical? Traditional culture is not all feudal superstition and fantasy. Bai Ze talked about the general combat power when he opened the book. He also talked about how the mythical beast is so weak in the comment area. I directly cursed people. It was so disgusting that I carefully checked the settings written in the information. At least I can get some evidence and don't just talk about a bunch of false truths.

From Chapter 17 to the birth of the six-eared macaque, I revised it all night. Basically, the plot was concise and clear, and the poisonous points were gone. After that, I looked at adding narration in terms of plot rhythm. It was a bit difficult to make major changes. I think Bai Ze's line was okay. The main thing was that I explained the timeline clearly, and then wrote the emotional changes in the six-eared side better, and the characterization was almost done. In the previous changes, I added a lot of interaction between Bai Ze and Xu Ruowei, so that the subsequent emotional scenes between the two would be less conflicting. I'll update it in the afternoon, I'm so tired. It focuses on shaping the story of the birth of the six-eared macaque, and paving the way for the initial relationship between Bai Ze and Xu Ruowei.

I think the male protagonist is useless and I can't stand it

To borrow a sentence: write seven points of ability and ten points of thought.