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The biggest drawback of this book is the update. There is a huge difference in readers' perception of a 10,000-word story if it is published in three days and a day; when a 100,000-word incubation period is published, there is an even greater difference between what it feels like if it is published in ten days and if it is published in a month. The second thing is that the tone of the Buddhist chaos part at the beginning is too high. The rhythm in the early stage is too catchy, escape (from Li Shixian) - can't escape - escape (Buddhist chaos) - can't escape - disrupt the soldiers - intrigues with the government, pushing the conflict to a climax step by step. Especially the part about the true and false Buddhists and the break with the Hu family, it can be said that watching it makes the blood boil. I even watched this part twice. What's behind? His pants fell into the ditch with a sound, he beat up the dandy, offered money to the emperor, flattered the emperor, governed the queen, and charmed the queen. What is it? ! If you don't have that beginning, then this is actually a good beginning, but I'm afraid of comparison in everything, brother. Who wants to see you worrying about who to marry as the elder wife and who as the younger wife every day? Once again, I feel like I am missing the point. Do you attract readers by copying poems, doing scientific tricks, and modern medical knowledge? Are you addicted to writing these things or are you addicted to something? Everyone came to see Li Chengzhi swallowing thousands of miles of anger, not to see the queen sulking in Li Chengzhi's face.

Updates are slow, and there is still a chapter of general defense. You are the only one in the entire network who can fix things, and you still have to interrupt updates. That is to say, you have chosen the point of the Southern and Northern Dynasties. Now it is really useless, bad review! Bad review! Bad review! ! !

After a simple training in using a matchlock gun, a peasant can deal with elite cavalry. The exchange ratio will not be too ugly, especially if there is a small number of backbone veterans leading the army, equipped with muskets, bayonets, and artillery. Relying on the number of people and wealth to suffocate the enemy There is no shortage of people in the southern and central plains, and wealth also crushes the north and grasslands. The key is how to turn wealth into combat power and improve overall national strength. The first is the way to rise in the army. The status of soldiers in the Song Dynasty was very low, and they were even in the army with tattoos on their faces. However, Jin Meng and others were different. If a soldier was lucky, he could be promoted from ten to centurion to become a military noble. The protagonist's army should be literate and be able to take over the management of petty officials and gentry after retirement. There should also be rural reserve organizations to give soldiers a way out. Of course, this is only part of it. More should include land subsidies, tax exemptions, etc. Soldiers who rise in the army gradually become officers, that is, whether they retire or not, there is room for advancement. With a basic army as the backbone, the army can be expanded quickly. Gather farmers' children, pair them with veterans, and after training for a period of time, they will become an army of matchlocks, which will have enough combat power to deal with them. Unlike bows and arrows, which are difficult to train, and cold weapons, the recruits will have poor combat effectiveness. However, with long-range bombardment by guns, the difference between recruits and veterans is not big (smoothbore matchlocks have poor accuracy and rely on concentrated bombardment). Key grassroots officers and veterans, as well as muskets and artillery, the soldiers have a constant source of energy. Mustacks, artillery and gunpowder consumption are a battle for wealth and human lives. So besides organization, it is wealth. Historically, the improved version of the 1630-style matchlock gun was good, and it was used on a large scale until 1700. If an iron push rod and a fixed charge bag are added, the filling can be simplified and accelerated. The linked windproof fire cover can be used in various environments, and a bayonet can be added. There are also cavalry, in addition to the lancers. It is difficult to train archer cavalry. The protagonist can replace the archer cavalry with Swedish cavalry (picture below), with a saber and a pair of short muskets. Gustav II's improved 1630-style Sur matchlock (picture) Swedish King Adolf Gustaf II improved a 1630-style Sur matchlock invented by the Germans and used in the Dutch-Spanish war into a very practical and deadly weapon. This gun has attracted attention and competition in Europe to imitate and manufacture it. The main improvement is that the weight is greatly reduced, the gun body is shorter, weighing only about 4.25-5 Kilograms, the caliber is smaller, the projectiles are relatively small, and the ammunition carrying capacity is increased. The fork, however, was retained until 1655, when it was abolished. "Paper-packed bullets" that can be distributed to troops in large quantities contain gunpowder and a projectile, which can speed up the loading speed and increase the projection rate of the firearm. The barrel of this matchlock gun is 42 inches (107 centimeters) long and has an octagonal handguard, 0.75 Caliber, weighs nine pounds (about 4 kilograms), and includes a 57-inch (145 centimeters) long support fork This improved version of the matchlock gun was used until after 1700

I agree with what you said in the comment area, that is, don't climb the technology tree mindlessly. The protagonist must monopolize the power of the world, but during the Wei and Jin Dynasties, there was a big resistance and that was the nobles of the aristocratic families. If we divide China's ancient civilization into three periods, it can be roughly divided into three periods: the first is the theocratic period, the second is the aristocratic period, and the third is the gentry and bureaucratic period. A monarch who transitions from one period to the next is bound to encounter tremendous resistance. Even if the change is successful, there will be stigma. The transition from the theocratic period to the aristocratic period should be the last emperor of the Shang Dynasty, Zi Xin, King Zhou of Shang. The transition from the aristocratic period to the gentry-bureaucratic period took several generations from Emperor Yang Guang of the Sui Dynasty to Wu Zetian (I don't know Wu Zetian's posthumous name) to officially complete the transformation. Revolution, but Wu Zetian's grandson Tang Xuanzong Li Longji actually believed in the "Emperor Fan" written by his great-grandfather Li Shiming when he was young. Chapter 2 advocates enfeoffment. Although some territories are indeed enfeoffed, he basically gave you a vassal town for each territory. Emperor Yang of the Sui Dynasty originally tried to use the south to control the north, but the southern clans did not want to change and got out of the game. In terms of technology, the protagonist does have knowledge that transcends the times for thousands of years. The technology tree has never been so easy to climb. It contains various basic technologies and can point out a clear direction. However, there are many places that the protagonist cannot remember and can only climb slowly step by step. The situation It seems that the protagonist should not be able to develop a rifled gun until he is ninety years old, which also includes many crucial technologies, such as anthracite. Of course, many small technologies can be developed, and the protagonist should first develop high-temperature resistant bricks and other things to make an earthen blast furnace. Of course, it was definitely not earthen in that era. Why did Ge and halberds be used in the Spring and Autumn Period? It was because the output of bronze at that time was indeed not high. Later, with the improvement of technology and the continuous increase in productivity, swords and knives began to become popular. The protagonist can master many basic technologies first, such as filtration technology to make fine salt And the period is the peak period of the aristocratic family. The technologies the protagonist needs to master must include papermaking, woodblock printing, and movable type printing. Use this to strengthen the popularization of knowledge, and you must be optimistic about world events, otherwise you may be attacked by a group. For example, Wu Zetian's mailbox method is quite good.

The author is more attentive, the logic is not very confusing, and there are few typos . Monthly tickets to watch and enjoy! Take it...

By the way, my comment was deleted for the second time, and I was so embarrassed! ! !

The author's military strategy is great, but the emotional part is really embarrassing. Can you write less? Even a few sentences about marrying one wife and one concubine will be fine 😄 There is no need to add to the things you are not good at.

I finished reading it in one sitting, and my knowledge of ancient Chinese is indeed very good. The first and second sentences of Minu's poem say that the overlord is not good, and the next sentence says that Bai Er Qin Guan will eventually belong to Chu. Not quite appropriate.

Author, you have reached the pinnacle of mastering Black Powder. This is the era of cold weapons, and all you can see is the war and the iron horse. Don't just make guns and cannons and climb the technology tree to overwhelm everything.

The Northern and Southern Dynasties should focus on the military and civil war, rather than a large number of black technologies and the large-scale application of firearms. Let's put it this way, a first-rate novelist encounters a very difficult enemy: watch how my civil servants and generals maneuver, watch how I break the situation both internally and externally. Third-rate novel author: Look at my cannon, boom. A first-rate novelist encounters an enemy invasion of a hundred thousand troops: Look at my troop formations, the bravery of my generals, and my tactics and strategies. Third-rate novelist: Look at my guns and cannons, boom. This is why I don't like to see the large-scale application of firearms before the Yuan Dynasty.

Boss, if you write about the heroine like this, you will be beaten to death. I'll leave it at that. If Gao Wenjun in the following pictures is not the main wife but Wei Yu, I will abandon the book immediately! No sooner said than done! It's enough to be loyal to death and at the same time use other people to disgust readers!

Collected it because the protagonist developed firearms in the Northern and Southern Dynasties! In fact, artillery is very simple. Not to mention the Northern and Southern Dynasties, even the Shang and Zhou Dynasties can develop bronze artillery! No difficulty!

There were a lot of firearms in the Ming Dynasty, but they were still defeated by the Qing Dynasty. Firearms have not developed to a certain extent and are not as good as bows and crossbows.

After reading more than 400 chapters, I felt so sad when the emperor died that he was even more sad than his father after his death. Which time travel novel didn't rely on foresight in the early stage, and then he changed the timeline in the later stage and became stronger. What you wrote was originally one of the two best books about the Northern and Southern Dynasties in my opinion, but it turned into rubbish.

Isn't this counter-intuitive? Changed to licking a dog? The more I watched, the more boring I became, so I left.

A standard work. I hope the author will get better and better. I give you seven votes

In the spring of 510, the map of the Battle of Guanzhong.

I'm really speechless 😓. The battle for hegemony in the previous part was all about catching up, and the officialdom and harem were really unbearable, so I skipped it. I understand that the protagonist needs to accumulate a lot of experience, but the style change is so uncomfortable that I really want to give up.

The first people who came to you to join the military were looking at the fight of life and death. There were many history books, but very few ancient wars. Some people said that the military career was a sideways recommendation, and I felt bad for them. Why can't this book be used for the military? Horseback riding and fighting in all directions, a real man should be like this Later Bai The armored soldiers fled to the West Sea, Li Chengzhi entered the capital, and the subsequent officialdom and political struggles were mixed with some historical processes and the personal grievances and grievances of the protagonists. I thought it was nothing, and I was not an emperor, so it was normal to have some foreshadowing. From then on, I have been looking forward to Li Chengzhi being forced to go to Liangshan and fight with the imperial court with real swords and guns. How about Rouran? How about Tuguhun? What about the Northern Wei Dynasty? As a result, now, except for the battle report, there is a battle report. The protagonist's life is like a pool of stagnant water. He has not yet become emperor. He is confused and does not know what he is busy with every day. How many soldiers do those generals lead, who are they fighting with, how to arrange the battlefield, how to win, how to lose, and there is no picture at all. Yes, just relying on the words of the supporting characters, I suddenly have the advantage A strategy is a strategy after all, just like talking on paper, no matter how good you say it, it is never as good as practicing with real swords and guns What if the pace is slow, who is rushing to watch Li Chengzhi enjoy life as the emperor? Looking at it suddenly changed, the confidant died, Li Chengzhi shed no tears, and there was no emotional foreshadowing, as if he had changed. Maybe the author didn't know how to write it, maybe you still think there is no problem, but for me, the Li Chengzhi who took the enemy general's head in the crowd of thousands of troops, I don't know when he died

In the third year of Yongping (510), Li Chengzhi planned the Northern Expedition.

To be honest, what attracted me to this novel was the war plot. Now that you have entered the imperial city and written about the process of primitive accumulation, how many people can stick with it? To be honest, this plot can be overplayed with hundreds of cards. If you really want to watch it, why don't you make a side story? If you continue like this, it will only cause this book to gather dust on the bookshelf.

I also don't like to use modern technology to defeat the ancients. It's meaningless to crush this kind of civilization. It's just cool. I prefer gold and iron horses, temple intrigues, battlefield conquests, and the true nature of men.

This book seems to be well written, but the data is not very good. Is it because? In the early days, more than a hundred chapters were devoted to war and development, driving away readers who wanted to read about daily life and women. Later, suddenly many chapters were written about women, which drove away readers who stayed and wanted to read about violent farming. (In an ally and enemy family) It feels so awkward I feel that if I want to write about a woman who has a group of wives and concubines like the father of the protagonist, there is no need to write it in such detail. Most readers who read historical novels probably don't want to read about the protagonist's daily life of picking up girls. I feel that it is better to just mention a few women in bed together at night to feel more comfortable

The protagonist of this book seems to be smart, but in fact he is just complaining and using power indiscriminately. Without long-term planning, just relying on random reactions, you look like a clown, without authority or importance, and decisively abandon the book!

Go high and low, start by driving away those who like to watch the harem, but after entering Beijing, they start to shrink their eggs and open a harem. It's really disgusting.

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I can't tell you what to do with the Queen Mother. The author is really good at dealing with people. It was a good read at first, but every once in a while, she had to come out and feel disgusted.

I cast 7 votes, can you please add more? 😎

I voted six times, can I add some more?

What to say about this book. The writing is very on point. The plot is also very exciting, and it is a rare good book among similar historical texts. Of course, those who like Xiaobai's writing will pretend that I didn't mention it. The main reason is that the author's updates are too slow.