Douluo Dalu: My Hammer Can Level Up

Regarding the evaluation of Douluo Dalu, if you think it is inappropriate or different, you can add more. This novel was fine before, but why is it being criticized by so many people now? It's because we didn't have much ability to distinguish things when we were young, and it was just fun to watch. The reason for these shortcomings is that the third young master of the Tang family originally wrote Xiaobai novels First: In the world of Douluo Continent, soul beasts are killed or hunted to improve their strength. What's wrong with Bibi Dong killing Xiao Wu's mother? How many soul masters are there in the world? How many soul beasts were killed? Is Xiao Wu just a fucking thing? The rest is bullshit? Humans and spirit beasts are originally hostile camps. People can kill spirit beasts, and spirit beasts can also kill people Second: If a spirit beast has not done any evil, is it wrong to kill it? How many soul beasts have been killed without committing any evil? Is Xiao Wu just a fucking thing? Third: Who helped awaken Tang San's martial spirit? In those small villages, not even a soul master can be born in ten years, a hundred years, or a thousand years. The Wuhun Hall is still doing it. Even though it is known that there is no soul master there, every small village will send people to help awaken the soul master. Who gives the soul master subsidy? Will nobles help common people awaken their martial souls? Will the empire help civilians awaken their martial souls? The empire and nobles wished that the common people could not awaken their martial spirits. The weaker the common people, the easier it would be for them to rule. Don't tell me that Wuhun Palace is here to win over the common people. There is a civilian that Wuhun Palace has been doing for a long time. Regardless of the purpose, the common people have indeed benefited. And those low-level soul masters, aristocratic schools accept common people? Wuhun Palace Collection Fourth: Isn't Yu Xiaogang a scumbag? After he separated from Bibi Dong, he turned around and got close to Liu Erlong. Even the Panxia Xia didn't pick her up so quickly. How much did Bibi Dong help Yu Xiaogang? Most of his theoretical knowledge came from Wuhun Palace, which Bibi Dong helped him obtain.   He had long asked Bibi Dong how to solve the problem of twin martial souls, and also promised that Tang San would not be an enemy of the Wuhun Palace. With Yu Xiaogang's IQ, he would not be unclear. Tang San is Tang Hao's son. Tang San's mother was killed by the Wuhun Palace, and his father was killed by the Wuhun Palace. Pursued by the Soul Palace, such a deadly feud, Yu Xiaogang also promised Bibi Dong that Tang San would not be an enemy of the Soul Palace. Well, it was really ironic that Tang San would be destroyed by the Soul Palace after changing hands Fifth: Is Tang San a good guy? What kind of place is the Killing City? Most of the most heinous people in the world are there. They are only allowed in but not allowed out. It is just a prison. Why does Wuhun Palace turn a deaf ear to the City of Killing? Destroying the Killing City, Wuhun Palace can gain a lot of people's support, which will be of great benefit to Wuhun Palace. Tang Chen can't destroy it? Qian Daoliu restrained Tang Chen and randomly sent a few titled Douluo elders to destroy the killing city in minutes. Why not destroy it? Because there will be less evil people roaming the land. Good guy, after Tang San obtained the God of Killing Domain, he destroyed it with his backhand. Those who did evil things and were not caught or could not catch them had no place to go but to do evil outside. Moreover, after obtaining the God of Killing Domain from God Shura, he destroyed their territory with his backhand. Sixth: Why do everyone think that the Wuhun Temple is guilty of the most evil crimes? Because this is a novel, we are taking the perspective of the protagonist. The protagonist has a mortal feud with Wuhun Palace. In addition, Wuhun Palace has been chasing the protagonist, and the style is not good. Moreover, he also wants to kill the protagonist's wife. Xiao Wu is a hundred thousand year old soul beast incarnate, and only Wuhun Palace wants to kill him? If anyone knew that Xiao Wu was a soul beast, they would kill her, because she is a soul beast, the foundation for increasing strength in Douluo Continent, and the enemy of mankind.

Let me put it another way, in Dou Yi's timeline, the situation on the mainland was objectively maintained in a relatively orderly and peaceful situation because the Haotian Sect had closed its doors and the Wuhundian family was the dominant one. Under the suppression of Wuhun Palace, the social situation is relatively stable. Basically, evil soul masters and criminals are concentrated in the killing city and cannot get out. At the same time, because Wuhun Palace was in the middle, the two empires did not go to war, and there was not even much border friction, and they were in a state of peace. Objectively speaking, Wuhun Palace played a positive role during this period. The real situation in Douluo Continent began to be chaotic when Bibi Dong founded the country. Tang San bulldozed the Wuhun Palace for the sake of his family's hatred, but he did not allow Tiandou to annex Xingluo and unify the continent, leaving a huge power vacuum and a black hole of order. It can be said that Bibi Dong used public weapons for personal use, and Tang San also played the role of a troublemaker in the process. Together, the two of them destroyed the basic order of Douluo Continent. But before that, with the Wuhun Palace under the control of Qian Jia, the basic order of Douluo Continent is still guaranteed. There is no need for Ishino to be too careful. Just like when you hear crackling sounds on the streets in China, you just wonder if someone is getting married or a store is opening. There is no need to find cover immediately like in the beautiful country.

I don't know why so many people like Bibi Dong and Wuhundian now. Bibi Dong killed Xiao Wu's mother just for a 100,000-year-old soul ring and soul bone, and even said that she should be killed. Has Xiao Wu's mother ever harmed anyone? No. But Bibi Dong later killed Xiao Wu for the soul ring and soul bone. Is it wrong for Tang San to take revenge? Furthermore, Bibi Dong is a person who will destroy the whole world if he is destroyed. After destroying Yu Xiaogang's family, how can he help Yu Xiaogang avenge those humiliating things? Did the master say anything about revenge? Do people want to destroy their own family? Bibi Dong is an extreme person. Some people say that Bibi Dong avenged Tang San for killing his mother, but if Tang Hao hadn't seriously injured Qian Xunji, would she have had a chance? Does anyone say that the master is a scumbag and others are a scumbag? It was Bibi Dong who dumped the master first. Although it was to protect him, couldn't he find another partner after being dumped? Later I learned that Liu Erlong was my sister and ran away. Isn't this normal? It was Liu Erlong's father who forcibly broke them up. According to ancient times, he would be immersed in a pig cage. The world of Douluo Continent was originally more feudal, and his thoughts were much more conservative than modern times. Although it was not as serious as our ancient times, under the separation of his father-in-law, he was powerless and had no strength. How could he have the courage to continue together? , It's not bad if you don't get beaten to death.

I've read more than 30 chapters, so give me a full subscription + monthly pass. This Douluo fanfic closely follows the theme of the article. There is no too brainless plot at the beginning. The supporting characters do not deliberately conflict with the original work. Instead, the author creates and combines them to create new characters. In the early stage, it is still in the stage of accumulating strength and development, and there is no The IQ of the characters in the original work is deliberately suppressed. Overall, it is worth reading for readers over 18 years old. The early plot is relatively relaxed and a little funny. Although the concept setting is very ambitious, it is hard to say whether the author can control the plot later. And in the novel environment of most Douluo Long Aotian + harem + shit and shit plot, it is worth recommending to raise the plot level to the level of institutional issues to liberate the oppressed Douluo people. After all, we are in a socialist country, even if it is unique; so I hope that our literary creation fields will be more integrated with red ideas, and create works that will not cause death but also bring some small thoughts

In fact, if you want to develop red in the Douluo world view, multi-party checks and balances are still unrealistic. It is more realistic to wait for the protagonist to reach a certain level and directly rewrite the rules of the Douluo plane. If ordinary people can threaten low-level soul masters, low-level soul masters can threaten high-level soul masters, and high-level soul masters can threaten ordinary people, this is a bit similar to the three departments of the American Empire, and you cannot completely count on the hearts of the people. Red can develop like this in reality. In the final analysis, there is still no concept of "eternity" or "immortality" or the concept of single invincibility such as "saint" and "god". The main core of red is "materialism"! As for a fantasy world like Douluo, in fact, a fantasy empire on the technological side or a supreme destiny on the mysterious side would be more suitable. These are some small suggestions.

The plug-in is not bad, but the character of the protagonist is really blind to me. I don't get soul rings after level 20. I just upgrade the heroine's talent to zero and abolish the stable leveling method. Later, I am forced to take the white soul ring. I have to slowly level up to upgrade the soul ring. As for the physical attributes of the protagonist, the first soul ring is close to a thousand years, which is not too much. It also weakens the protagonist. Then the girl was reluctant to use the fruit and gave it back to others to help others lay the foundation. The first soul ring was a thousand years. Why didn't she give the heroine as a gift if she was so generous?

The character image of Maizi, I hope the author can use this

What a great book. Ma Liu's update. It's the first time I'm so generous. I paid five thousand for the first time. Ma Liu will wait for the update.

Is this indigenous? What have I experienced in my life? Could it be that I wore it when I was 5, 6, 7, or 8 years old? Don't be wary. If it weren't for the protagonist, he must have been robbed of his martial soul by an evil soul master.

. . . . . . Accidentally raised to death